考点47短文改错（二）--备战2021年高考英语一轮复习考点一遍过.docx

考点47 短文改错（二）专题四 备考策略 一、把握三四五，共十二个考点三个必考点：1. 名词的单复数；2. 介词的误用、多用或少用；3. 动词时态不一致。四个常考点：1. 连词的误用、多用或少用；2. 冠词的误用、多用或少用；3. 词语辨析；4. 词性误用。五个考点：1. 代词；2. 非谓语动词；3. 情态动词；4. 主谓一致；5. 形容词的比较级和最高级。二、考法1. 8个改词1个添词1个删词，记住比例是：8:1:1；2. 每句有02个错误；3. 需要变形的词语通常是名词、动词、形容词、副词等；4. 少词一般是添加冠词、介词、连词、不定式的to，以及物主代词；5. 多词一般是删掉冠词、介词、助动词等。【核心思路】根据考点找错误，又快又准高速度。三、三个方面1. 词法：介词、冠词、连词的多用，少用或误用，词性误用，非谓语动词，各类词缀，如否定前缀，名词、形容词、副词后缀；2. 句法：主谓一致，时态一致，名词的单复数一致，代词的格和数一致；3. 行文逻辑：并列句中两个简单句的关系，因果、转折、选择、并列关系等。短文改错解题口诀口诀一：短文改错有妙计，完整一致看仔细。词法侧重冠名动，形副互换要留意。分词出现多琢磨，主动被动加语气。全文一处多一词，一处少词关介词。时态人称要统一，连词用法重逻辑。短文改错要做好, 常见类型应记牢。口诀二：名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错、多、少； 动词时态和语态，非谓语搭配莫错了；连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆；介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到；句法涉及到一致，从句多考关系词。词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。811 排列是规律，回读复查敲定稿。注 1. 一致包括主谓一致，数、性、格等的一致。2. 811常指：8处错误，1处多词，1处少词。 四、解题步骤1 浏览全文，掌握大意2 分句阅读，逐行找错3 由易到难, 各个击破 4 检查核对，注意方法具体解题步骤：做短文改错通常遵循以下几个步骤：通读文章，了解大意；逐句分析，行中找错；再读短文，检查漏洞。即按照文章句子行文章的顺序。第一步：通读全文，了解大意。短文改错是考查考生在理解的基础上对语篇整体的识错、纠错能力，必须从全篇考虑，而不能只顾一句或一行。要理解文章的谋篇布局，弄清楚整篇文章的意思。在阅读过程中，要注意行文逻辑、文章的时态以及人称等。第二步：逐句分析，行中找错。尽管短文改错是以行设置错误的，但语言毕竟是以句子为完整意义单位的。所以，可以逐句分析，看看单句是否有错；如果有错，有几处错误，是什么错误，再看看错误在哪一行。把短文改错转化为单句改错，然后再在行中找错，这样就会降低难度。第三步：再读短文，检查漏洞。做完以后，再把文章阅读一遍，检查是否有遗漏情况，尤其注意上下句之间的逻辑关系。多读一遍，就有可能把某些不清楚的地方理顺。名校模拟题汇编Text 1（2020·湖北蔡甸·汉阳一中高三三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My friend Fang, an exchange student in UK, is one of the most amazing people I have ever met. He just never seemed to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpecting difficulties. To everyone's surprise, he has never failed an exam. Fang believes that exams are just exams but that it's necessary to worry about them all the time. He is an optimistic person by nature and I real admire his way of thinking. Which makes me ashamed of is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For examples, I can't concentrate on my studies; I am too afraid of the results before the exams. It's time for me to learn from her now.Text 2（2020·六盘山高级中学高三二模）On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great diversity of robot. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, including playing chess, playing piano and drawing pictures. Whats more, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, which made us enjoyable. In addition, that excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced just as if they are dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of about robots, especial about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is S0 powerful that it make us feel more comfortable live in the world.Text 3（2020·西藏乃东·山南二中高三三模）A proverb says, “Time is money.” But on my opinion, time is even more valuable than money. Why? Because when money is spent, we can earn them back. However, when time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason that we must value time. The time for our study and work is quite limit. But there are a number of people who do not know the important of time. They kill time by chatting or drinking. They didnt realize that wasting time is simple wasting their valuable lives. In word, we should develop the good habit of saving time. Dont leave what can be do today till tomorrow. Laziness will not only bring to us failure but also make us lead a poor life.Text 4 （2020·安徽马鞍山·高三一模）Sun Yang, a famous Chinese swimmer, is known to the world. Born in 1991, he is 1.98 meters in high and 89 kilos in weight. As swimmer, he always trains hardly. Thats why he could win two gold prize in the 2012 London Olympics, which were a great honor for our country. Although he once makes mistakes in the view of the public, but in the 2013 World Swimming Championships he made amazed achievements. Sun Yang is very brilliant that he has many fans. We should be pleased to take her as our role model.Text 5（2020·宜宾市叙州区第一中学校高三开学考试）Sometimes 1 feel that living in a city makes people lonely than before. People always feel strangers cannot trusted. They think this is not normal to start talking to anyone or even smile at anyone. I desire to change that. Last week, while I was skate, a man ran by, smiling at me. He said something to me about doing sports or he hoped to be able to finishing his run. I smiled back and said that he certain would. And then a family cycles by when I was in the park. One of the girl waved at me with a big smile, and I waved back enthusiastically. I do believe such small gestures can change into the world we live in.Text 6（2020·云南民族大学附属中学高三二模）Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn which they are interested in. It will also make it possible for them take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to ones development. They also believe that students graduated from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion, a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if they cant obtain both, the first thing to consider was a good major. Because no matter where they study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if they try their best.Text 7（2020·河北石家庄·高三月考）Dear Jim,How is everything going? Known that you are curious about Peking Opera, I'm more than glad to introduce it to you.Dating back to late 18th century, Peking Opera becomes fully developed and recognized during the Qing Dynasty. As a combination of music, vocal performance or dance, Peking Opera can offer audience with a feast for the eyes and ears. Performer wear colorful costumes and make-ups, that are in line with the personalities of the roles that they play.I high recommend you visit the Mei Lanfang Theater to see a Peking Opera show. Hopefully, my introduction has helped you well understand Peking Opera than before. If you have any question, don't hesitate to ask myself.Text 8（2020·湖南高三二模）What people need is love and support, especially some special group of people. Here is my loving ideas for students with difficulty in learning.I think the main problem with most of whom is that they lack of motivation. So we may help them to get motivated by setting goal for them or then work together towards it. Meanwhile, we can give them as more help as possible, sharing good study methods with them or solve problems for them. What's more, we should always encourage them to believe in ourselves. Confidence, what we all know，is absolutely vital to learning.Text 9（2020·湖南高三二模）Dear editor,My friend Li Ming, he studies in a high school, living in a dormitory. He talks with me about one student living with him who never think about how other people feel. For example, the student often throws his dirty socks on the table, which it often fall onto the lunch box of mine friend. Whats more, he sometime drinks the water from other peoples teacups without ask for permission. Worse still, he even uses other peoples toothbrush. Just imagine sharing a room with such person! How can my friend do? He has asked me for help and now Im asking for yours.Yours sincerely,Wang PingText 10（2020·重庆北碚·高三一模）Yesterday, Tom and I were walking down the street when we saw the old man fall off his bike. I suggested we carried the old man to hospital, and Tom did not agree. He had learned first aid, so I said that the old man mustn't be moving. We should leave him what he was and check him first. Seeing that the old man wasn't breathing, Tom asks me to call the First-aid Center and he used the mouth-to-mouth way make the old man breathe. Soon the old man began to move on a little and the doctors also arrived. They said what we had done were right.Text 11（2020·安徽淮北·高三一模）My senior high school life is almost over. Although exciting about entering college, I can't help miss those good old days so much that I feel sad. I'm unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar. However, I come to realize nature never. stood still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die mid new one come to life. We, like everything in nature, has to adapt to the changes. Before knowing it, I am a kind of calm. Now I'd like to recall the most wonderful things which have happened, and accept happy whatever is to happen.Text 12（2020·福建三明一中高二期中）Dear Ben，As graduation is draw near，I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind.In the last three years，you had shared my joys and sorrows，making my school life unforgettable.I remember very much that you sent me to hospital when I had my left leg break.During the days when I had to stay in the bed，you comforted me and helped me my lessons.It is your friendship which fills my life with sunshine.I hope my friendship will last forever and I also hope all your dreams will come truly in the future.Best wishes!Yours，Li HuaText 13（2020·河南罗山·高三一模）Born in America， Thomas Edison was a great scientist and an inventor. He was once thought to be a boy whom was not worth educating. In fact， he was a man full of imagine.I admire Edison a lot because his great contributions to the world. He is said to having more than 1，000 inventions. In his lifetime， he was always eager to know what everything worked. He was also very diligent and works day and night. And this explained why he had so much great inventions.Success can never be easy achieved. Probably I cant be another Edison himself， but I will work hard to be a worthy person.Text 14（2020·石嘴山市第三中学高三三模）Ive been in Shanghai for weeks and it has all gone by so quick. Now Im there reflecting on how this experience has helped I better understand Chinese culture. Shanghai has population of over 23 million people, who is more than the population of the top 8 most populated cities in the U.S. combined. All throughout my stay in China, Ive seen Chinese people wore shirts with English words on them, and heard American music coming from speaker. Ive felt comfortable in China, and although there were differences, its not hard to adjust. Chinese culture is different, so Western culture is too, and in this way, theyre so similar to.Text 15（2020·四川成都·龙泉中学高三开学考试）I like Li Ziqi, which has inspired many people all over the world. Over the years, she had transformed from a village girl into food and lifestyle expert. She has become worldwide famous by making videos introduced the beauty of traditional Chinese culture. Therefore, Lis success did not come easy. Her fathers death left her living with her grandparents in a poor village after she went to work in the city on the age of 14. In 2012, Li returned to home and opened an online shop to sell locally products. In 2016, she began to display Chinese culture by filming how his products were created.Text 16（2020·四川成都经开区实验中学高三开学考试）I like travelling and my dream of visiting Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. My mother booked an one-day tour for me. On the morning of October 1st I went to Tiananmen Square with one of my classmates , there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extreme proud. Several hours later, a grand military parade was held mark the People's Republic of China's 70th founding anniversary. In the afternoon we decided to go to other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. When we reached the destination, it was crowded with tourists. I was glad for which those volunteers had done for little kids and elderly people . Standing on the Great wall, we couldnt help admire the splendid scenery. This travelling, with doubt, meant a lot of to me.Text 17（2020·甘肃高三二模）Dear Mike,How is it going? I am flying to your country to attend the Culture Trip to America in next week. I feel exciting because my dream of visiting America will come true. Through the trip, I hope to open my eyes and learning more about the customs and history of your country. Besides, it is the good chance to practise my English.Therefore, one thing I'm concerned about is because I may have difficulty communicating with local people. After all, there have many cultural differences between China or America, I'd appreciate if you could give me some proper advises.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li HuaText 18（2020·湖北高三二模）As a child I always wanted to become a doctor. Ikept my dreams throughout primary school and middle school. When I admitted to a medical college, I was very exciting. After years of study I graduated and entered a children's hospital. I worked hard and soon became a experienced doctor. I did not get married with until I was over thirty. I worked during the day and after work enjoyed life with my family. In the age of 60 I retire, but I often helped young doctors when they needed me. You don't worry too much about my health problem. I believe that I don't care about them, they won't hurt me. So I am still health and happy today.Text 19（2020·陕西安康·高三三模）This weekend, our school is scheduled to plant tree on the West Hill, that is about 10 miles west of our town. I'm written to invite you to take part this meaningful activity, we will gather at the school gate at seven and then take the bus there. We needn't to carry food or water, for our school would prepare them for us. All we need to do is wearing sports shoes and loose trousers. Please bring a towel as we are certain going to sweat. Please don't be later and we will set off on time.Text 20（2020·北大成都附属实验学校高三开学考试）About how to keep healthy, Id like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit.Text 21（2020·贵州铜仁·高三二模）Thanks to Chinas anti-poverty policy, great changes have been taken place in my hometown in the past decade, especial in the living conditions. Take my grandparents home in the countryside as a example. They used to live in a small house with little furniture, and now they have moved into a two-storied building with modern electric equipments. In the past, we had to ask someone to write to my parents to keep contact. But they each has a mobile phone now, that makes the communicatio