考向50 应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信(解析版)-备战2022年高考英语一轮复习考点微专题.docx

考向50 应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信咨询信【写作示例】假定你是李华, 打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询, 内容如下: 1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线; 2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用。注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,  _ _Yours, Li Hua【考场审题】Step 1: 精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)时态一般现在时段落布局开头点题: 说明写信目的主体段落: 说明需要咨询的内容结尾: 期待对方的回信Step 2: 头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词: inquire, recommend, in addition, intend, appreciate(2)佳句: I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. In addition, Id like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses. Step 3: 斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1: 我打算在美国住10天左右, 希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景, 品味一下当地的风俗。一般表达: I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, and I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.  句式升级(定语从句)I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.  要点2: 除此之外, 我想了解包括所有旅行费用的路线的价格。一般表达: In addition, Id like to know the prices of the routes, and all the traveling expenses. 句式升级(分词短语作定语)In addition, Id like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.  Step 4: 衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam, Im planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, Im writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency. I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, Id like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses. A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated. Yours, Li Hua推荐信【写作示例】假定你是李华。你的美国网友David看完电影哪吒之魔童降世海外版后非常喜欢, 写信想请你再推荐一部中国电影。请你根据以下要点给他回信: 1. 表示高兴; 2. 推荐一部电影; 3. 推荐的理由(至少两条)。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。【考场审题】Step 1: 精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)时态一般现在时; 一般将来时段落布局开头点题: 说明写信目的主体段落: 推荐的电影和推荐的理由结尾: 表达希望Step 2: 头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词: delighted, fascinated, have much in common with, appeal to sb. , additionally, perfectly(2)佳句: Im delighted to know youre fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha. This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha. Step 3: 斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1: 我很高兴知道你对中国电影哪吒之魔童降世感兴趣。一般表达: I am glad to know youre interested in the Chinese film, Ne Zha. 句式升级(高级词汇, 被动语态)Im delighted to know youre fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha. 要点2: 这部电影也是以神话故事为基础, 和哪吒有许多相似之处。一般表达: This animated film is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, and has much in common with Ne Zha.  句式升级(定语从句)This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha.  Step 4: 衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】Dear David, Im delighted to know youre fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha. And Im perfectly willing to recommend another impressive Chinese movie at your request. Since I know animated films are your favorites, you cant miss Monkey King: Hero Is Back. This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha, so I think itll appeal to you. Additionally, Monkey King and Nezha are both regarded as heroes by Chinese people. Through movies, you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture. I hope youll find the movie well worth seeing. Yours, Li Hua【检测训练】1假设你是美国纽约市的一名高中生 Chris, 打算暑假来天津学习汉语，来信向你在天津 一中的笔友李津咨询他们学校的国际班汉语课程。请你根据以下提示给李津写一封咨询 信。内容要点：1. 想学汉语的原因（中国文化；个人发展）2. 咨询国际班汉语课程的情况（班级大小；是否侧重听说；能不中国学生交流）3. 询问是否提供食宿。注意：（1） 词数不少于 100；（2） 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；（3） 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear li Jin,_Yours Chris【参考范文】Dear li Jin, It's my pleasure to tell you about my plan for studying Chinese in Tianjin this summer vacation. Could you possibly provide me with some information about the Chinese courses for international classes in your school? You know I am always interested in Chinese culture and a very important reason for me to learn Chinese is that learning Chinese could bring better career prospects for young people. I want to know how many students there will be in each class and if the courses focus on listening or speaking practice. Besides, can I have the opportunity to take part in some activities and to communicate with Chinese students? That will surely be a good chance for me to learn more about China. Also, I would be grateful if you could tell me whether accommodation is included. I am looking forward to your response at your earliest convenience. Yours Chris【写作步骤】第一步：审题：确定时态和人称。这封信主要是Chris向你（李津）咨询学校的国际班汉语课程，所以时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）provide me with some information about（给我提供一些关于的信息）；the Chinese courses for international classes（国际班的汉语课程）； learning Chinese could bring better career prospects（学汉语能带来更好的职业前景）；focus on listening and speaking practice（注重听说练习）；have the opportunity to（有机会做某事）；a good chance for me to（对我做什么是一个很好的机会）等。第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。【写作亮点】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：第一段第一句使用了Its my pleasure to do sth. 的句型，使用It作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语。第二段第一句使用了省略了that的宾语从句及that引导的表语从句。第二段第二句也使用了宾语从句。第二段第五句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。此外本文还使用了一些高级词汇，如provide me with some information about；learning Chinese could bring better career prospects；focus on listening and speaking practice；have the opportunity to；a good chance for me to 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（University of Cambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：1、表达你的意愿；2、咨询相关事宜。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mr. Smith,Im always dreaming of being admitted to the University of Cambridge. And your advertisement about the summer camp caught my attention.I am a student in China. Would you be so kind as to tell me more information about the camp. First of all, Id like to know when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week? Second, how much do I have to pay for the course and does the cost cover the accommodation? Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to?I would be most grateful if you could send me the information. Looking forward to your immediate response.Yours sincerely,Li Hu【写作步骤】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（University of Cambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：1、表达你的意愿；2、咨询相关事宜。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：dream of (梦想)；be admitted to(录取)；University of Cambridge (剑桥大学)；catch my attention(引起我的注意)；accommodation (住宿)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【写作亮点】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Im always dreaming of being admitted to the University of Cambridge.非谓语动词的运用；I would be most grateful if you could send me the information.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3假定你是高三学生李华。随着高考的临近，你感到学习压力越来越大。晚上经常失眠，上课精力不集中，学习效率低下,现在对备考复习很茫然。你写信给心理学家Dr. Bloom, 咨询解决问题的方法。内容包括：1. 写信目的； 2. 咨询内容； 3. 期待回复。Dear Dr. Bloom,_Yours Sincerely, Li Hua【参考范文】 Dear Dr. Bloom,I'm Li Hua, a senior three student. I'm writing to ask you for some advice. With the approach of the College Entrance Examination, I'm under great pressure, which greatly affects my life and study. I can't fall asleep at night and I often wake up suddenly at midnight. As a result, I can't focus on what the teacher says in class and it disturbs me a lot. At a loss, I don't know how to prepare for the College Entrance Examination. What should I do? Knowing you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me some valuable advice on how to solve the problmes. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍写信的目的；2. 介绍咨询的内容；3. 期待对方的回复。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）ask sb. for advice; with the approach of; under pressure; fall asleep; wake up; as a result; focus on; at a loss; prepare for; solve the problem; look forward to; an expert in第三步：连词成句1. Im writing to ask you for advice.2. Knowing you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me valuable advice on how to solve the problems.3. As a result, I cant focus on what the teacher says in class.4. Looking forward to your reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all, firstly/first, secondly/second and then, finally, in the end, at last(供参考)2. 表并列补充关系：what is more, besides, moreover, furthermore, in addition, as well as, not onlybut (also), including(供参考)3. 表转折对比关系：however, on the contrary, but, in spite of+n/doing, on the one handon the other hand, some, while others, as for, so.that(供参考) 4. 表因果关系：as a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【写作亮点】高分句型1As a result, I can't focus on what the teacher says at class.(what引导宾语从句)高分句型2Knowing you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me valuable advice on how to solve the problems. (knowing you are an expert in it现在分词作状语，特殊疑问词how+动词不定式作宾语)高分句型3 I'm under great pressure, which greatly affects my life and study.(which引导非限制性定语从句)4假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游，让你推荐个城市，你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封推荐信，内容包括：1.推荐城市；2.推荐理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Peter,Im delighted to know youre coming to China for your winter holiday. Personally, Id like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years. Besides, there are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, The Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway. Most importantly, Hangzhou is home to delicious food, such as Dongpo Pork and Longjing Shrimp.I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. Yours, Li Hua【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍推荐城市；2. 介绍推荐理由;3. 表达你的祝愿。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be delighted to do sth.; recommend sth. to sb.; come to mind; in and around the city; such as; be home to第三步：连词成句1. Im delighted to know youre coming to China for your winter holiday.2. Personally, Id like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.3. When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years.4. There are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, The Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway.5. I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：besides, most importantly, and 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing ,as for,(供参考)4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【写作亮点】高分句型1When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）高分句型2I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.（由that引导宾语从句作hope的宾语，省略that）高分句型3I invite you to visit Hangzhou, where you can enjoy the nice weather and delicious food.（由关系副词where引导非限制性定语从句）5假如你是学生会主席李华，学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外教Martin推荐一名学生助手，请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。1.欢迎Martin的到来，推荐Wang Peng同学当助手(assistant)2.推荐的理由（沟通能力；热心助人；英语水平等）3.美好祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_