2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十五）含答案解析.doc

2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十五）一：原文重现A sudden call came into Jimmy Gilleeces bar this past March. A newly married woman who had spent the afternoon at the dive beach bar couldnt find her wallet. She didnt care about her ID, credit cards, or $150 in cash, but her wedding ring was just inside.21·世纪*教育网Gilleece, 42, didnt like the idea that a theft could have happened at his place, so he spent hours searching 16 different cameras, watching the womans every step until she went to sit on a bench outside and left when her ride arrived. Within minutes, a young man in a hoodie (连帽衫) approached the bench, put something in hispocket, and walked off. Gilleece posted a clip on the bars Facebook page. “I didnt want to criticize him,” he said. “I just asked if anybody knew who the guy was.” Within hours, Gilleece got a text message from 17-year-old Rivers Prather,who admitted taking the wallet and said hed done it because he hadnt eaten in two days. Thinking the ring was fake, he threw the wallet into the ocean and took the money to buy a sandwich.【出处：21教育名师】Gilleece, unsure whether he believed Prather, told the teenager to meet him at the docks(码头).There, they got to talking, and Prather said that he wasnt getting along with his family and had been living in the woods for a week. Gilleece, a father oftwo, took stock of(审视) Prather his small body, his flushing(涨得通红的) cheeks一andsaw him for what he was: more of a kid than a criminal.【版权所有：21教育】However,the police were already on the case and because of the missing ring, Prather could be facing severe charges. Gilleece decided to help. He employed two local divers to search the waters where Prather had thrown the wallet. Meanwhile, the police wanted Gilleece to bring the teen down to the station. Instead, Gilleece called the police and told them, “Hes going to be at the docks with me tomorrow.”注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph1:A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current. _Paragraph2:But it wasnt over for Gilleece. _二：文本解析题型分析：这篇读后续写属于人性光芒类的读后续写，故事里词汇和人物关系稍有难度，续写部分是有关Gilleece如何雇人将戒指找到并且帮这个青春期少年解围，对尚无多少人生经历的学生来说，难度不小。2-1-c-n-j-y一、准确理解材料，理清人物事件1. 浅层信息理解首先审题：体裁是记叙文；人称是第一、三人称；主体时态是一般过去时；记叙文“六要素”who（Gilleece，A newly married woman, 17-year-old Rivers Prather ，the police）、when（tomorrow）、where（at the beach）、what（Gilleece tried to help the woman find her wedding ring which was stolen and thrown into the ocean. ）、why（Gilleece didnt like the idea that a theft could have happened at his place.）2. 整合本篇的情节和情感线索：海滩酒吧的老板Gilleece接到顾客的投诉，一位女士的钱包被偷，急于寻回放在钱包里的订婚戒指。Gilleece查了酒吧的监控，找到了线索，并将视频片段传到网上，想通过网络的力量找到拿走钱包的人。几小时后，一个叫Rivers Prather的17岁少年主动联系了他。两人见面后，Prather讲述了拿走钱包的缘由，作为两个孩子的父亲，Gilleece决定不追究其责任。但警察正在跟踪此案，Prather有可能面临严重的指控。Gilleece决定帮助这个少年，他请了两个潜水员去Prather扔钱包的地方搜寻。同时，警察要求Gilleece将Prather带去警察局。但是，Gilleece却告诉他们Gilleece第二天会和他一起去码头。二、分析续写段首，确定续写方向由第一段首句内容A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current（人们早已聚集过来看着两个潜水员在大浪中搜寻。）可知，第一段可描写潜水员搜寻钱包的过程。设问如下：21教育名师原创作品1. How did the divers search for the wallet?2. What did Gilleece, Prather and the police do? 3. How did each of them feel?4. Did they found the wallet?根据第二段首句 But it wasn t over for Gilleece.（但是这件事情对Gilleece来说还没有结束。）虽然提示语简短，但是Gilleece在前文中所表现出的商量和想要帮助这个少年的决心，让学生不难猜出，他想要继续帮助Prather。因为Gilleece和Prather是这个故事的主角，不能突然消失。设问如下：21·cn·jy·com5. What did he want to do?6. What happened to Prather?7. What does the story intend to tell readers?三、借助文本资源，创设续写情节根据六要素和自己的想象，借助文本资源，创设续写两段故事的情节。开端 人们围观潜水员找钱包。故事发展找的过程Gilleece焦急警察开始盘问。高潮 钱包被找到Gilleece想要继续帮助PratherPrather不再流离失所。结局Prather痛改前非感悟。三：续写单句训练1. 一群人聚集在一起，观看这两名潜水员在湍急的水流中搜寻。 2. 一个多小时过去了，没有任何戒指的迹象。 3. Gilleece开始担心，尤其是当警察开始审问Prather，并试图让他承认保留了戒指时。 4. 每过一分钟，他都增加了他逮捕那个年轻人的机会。 5. 然后，一个潜水员跳了出来。 6. 他手里拿着钱包，里面是戒指。 7. 人群中爆发出了欢呼声。就连侦探也很高兴。 8. 但吉里斯的一切还没有结束。 9. 他一直为Prather睡在寒冷的树林里而感到烦恼。 10. Gilleece知道他的家足够大，可以给Prather一个地方住一段时间。 11. 他告诉这个少年，他可以和家人呆在一起，直到那个男孩再次站起来。 12. 他还给了这个孩子一份在这个酒吧工作的工作。 13. “大多数人都会把这段录像（监控录像）交给警方，但他选择相信我并帮助我。 14. 我会像他预期的那样，努力努力成为一个好人，”Prather在一次采访中说。 四：佳作展现A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current. _ But it wasnt over for Gilleece. _ 五：课后练笔I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand.21教育网Anil was about 25-a tall, thin fellow-and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said.“But I cant pay you."Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?www-2-1-cnjy-com“Can you cook?"“I can cook.” I lied.“If you can cook, then I can feed you.”The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and told me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldnt help laughing.2·1·c·n·j·yLater he patted me on the head and said never mind, hed teach me to cook.He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve.21*cnjy*comOne evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫).【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】Its time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesnt even pay me.Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side,towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room.21*cnjy*comI began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write.注意:1. 续写词数应为150词左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. _ I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. _ 参考答案三：单句训练1) A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current.2) More than an hour passed, with no sign of the ring. 21世纪教育网版权所有3) Gilleece grew worried, especially when the police began questioning Prather and trying to get him to admit to keeping the ring. 【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】4) Each passing minute increased the chances that he would arrest the young man. 5) Then a diver popped up. 6) In his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ring. 7) Cheers erupted from the crowd. Even the detective was happy.8) But it wasn t over for Gilleece. 9) Hed been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woods. 10) Gilleece knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live for a while. 11) He told the teen he could stay with his family until the boy got on his feet again. 12) He also gave the kid a job a this bar. 13) “Most people would have given the footage(监控录像) to police, but he chose to believe me and help me. www.21-cn-14) Ill work hard to become a good guy, just as he expected,” Prather said in an interview. 四：佳作展现（一） A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current.More than an hour passed, with no sign of the ring. Gilleece grew worried, especially when the police began questioning Prather and trying to get him to admit to keeping the ring. Each passing minute increased the chances that he would arrest the young man. Then a diver popped up. In his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ring. Cheers erupted from the crowd. Even the detective was happy. But it wasn t over for Gilleece. Hed been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woods. Gilleece knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live for a while. He told the teen he could stay with his family until the boy got on his feet again. He also gave the kid a job a this bar. “Most people would have given the footage(监控录像) to police, but he chose to believe me and help me. Ill work hard to become a good guy, just as he expected,” Prather said in an interview. （二）I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. It is much easier to steal something than to return it undetected. I opened the door quietly, then stood in the doorway, in clouded moonlight. Anil was still asleep. I crept to the head of the bed, my hand coming up with the notes. I felt his breath on my hand. I remained still for a minute. Then my hand found the edge of the mattress, and slipped under it with the notes.I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. He stretched out his hand towards me with a note between his fingers.My heart sank. I thought I had been discovered. “I made some money yesterday,” he explained. “Now youll be paid regularly.” My spirits rose. “Today well start writing sentences.” he said. He knew. But neither his lips nor his eyes showed anything.I smiled at Anil in my most appealing way.