热点 01 新型冠状病毒 -备考2022年年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点01 新型冠状病毒新型冠状病毒无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：新型冠状病毒。 【预测题目】（一）最近新冠病毒席卷全国,我们被迫推迟开学,不得不宅在家里,相信大家已经忍不住开始畅想疫情结束后的生活了。很多网友说出了自己心中的小愿望,比如:1. 我希望有一天醒来,街道上车水马龙,我也不用戴口罩；2. 好想去公园散步,看满园春色；3. 期待可以跟好朋友聚餐；4. 盼望可以再次漫步校园内,与同学一起学习 请根据以上提示,写一篇英语作文。参考词汇：新冠病毒 novel coronavirus 疫情 epidemic situation 口罩 face masks要求:1. 词数: 100 词左右；2. 作文应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥。_【答案】What a different winter holiday we have this year! Because of the spreading of novel coronavirus, we have to put off the beginning of our school life. We have to stay at home to study online during this epidemic situation. What a pity!I dream to hang out with my friends without wearing the face mask; I hope to go for a walk in the park, enjoying the beautiful spring; I expect to have a big meal with my relatives, sharing our unforgettable experiences; I also look forward to going back to school as soon as possible, having group discussions excitedly.Winter has passed, spring cant be far away. I believe we will return to our lovely school in the near future.【解析】1.题干解读：本文属于一篇材料作文。由于新冠病毒席卷全国，我们被迫推迟开学，不得不宅在家里，相信大家已经忍不住开始畅想疫情结束后的生活了。要求根据提示内容，写一篇英语作文，说出自己心中的愿望。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来展开叙述，时态采用一般将来时。文章紧扣题目要点，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想；语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯；层次分明、条理清晰。（二）人生处处是考场，人生事事皆考试。由于新冠疫情，2020年高考将延期举行，近日各地教育部门出台文件规定中考时间也相继延迟一个月。假如你叫李华，即将参加今年中考,请向校园网站的外语专栏投稿发表你的看法。内容包括：1. 你是否赞成推迟中考，理由是什么？2. 非常时期，如何有效开展中考备考？3. 寄语中考学子，一起加油、共勉。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在 答题卡上。Dear friends,I am writing this article to share my opinion about whether the senior high school entrance examination should be put off or not. _This is my idea and most grateful to you for your advice!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear friends,I am writing this article to share my opinion about whether the senior high school entrance examination should be put off or not. I agree to put it off because the epidemic is still very serious now, it will be safer for us to have the examination a month later. Besides, we can prepare for it better because not all can have online classes successfully every day.During this special period, how should we prepare for the examination? Firstly, we should make a good plan and listen to the teacher carefully. Meanwhile, we should be relaxed and keep doing exercise so that we can be healthy to face the coming challenge.In our life the examination is everywhere, so lets cherish every day and make a great effort to achieve our dream.This is my idea and most grateful to you for your advice! Yours,Li Hua【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。第一段阐述自己是否赞成推迟中考及原因，第二段介绍如何在特殊时期备战中考，最后寄语中考学子，一起加油、共勉。2.写作指导：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。在提供建议时，多用情态动词should及firstly等词，使文章看起来层次划分清楚，逻辑性强。（一）请你根据下面的提示，用英语对钟南山作简单介绍，写一篇英语作文。要点：1.钟南山，1936年10月出生于南京，是21世纪最出名的医学家之一。2.1953年，就读于广东实验中学；1960年，毕业于北京医学院并留校任教。3.在首届全国运动会上，钟南山夺得男子400米栏冠军，打破了当时的全国纪录。4.2003年春，SARS在中国和世界爆发，以钟南山为代表的医护工作者经长期努力,抗击了非典。2020年，虽然年老的他，依然又夜以日继地工作在抗击新冠病毒的前线上。5.他在医学领域工作60多年，是一位受国人尊敬的好医生。参考词汇：medical scientists 医学科学家 Guangdong experimental high school 广东实验中学Beijing Medical College北京医学院 Chinese National Games全国运动会the men' s 400m Hurdles男子400米栏 novel coronavirus新型冠状病毒_【答案】Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in October 1936 in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province. He is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century. He studied at Guangdong experimental high school in 1953 and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960. In the first Chinese National Games, Zhong Nanshan got the championship of the men's 400m Hurdles and set up a National record at that time.In the spring of 2003, the SARS epidemic broke out in China and across the globe. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against SARS. At that time, no one really knew much about SARS and most people had no natural defenses against the disease. Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan worked hard day and night treating the patients. Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result. Soon the SARS epidemic was stopped in its track.Zhong Nanshan was awarded one of the top ten people moving China in 2004. He has been working in the medical field for over 60 years. He is a good doctor and respected by all the people in China.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含题目中的要点，针对钟南山做相关介绍。要求根据题目要求写一篇作文。写作内容涵盖内容要求的五个要点并适当发挥，紧扣主题即可。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，结合题目给的五个要点，介绍了钟南山医生。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：词组：was born；the famous medical scientists；set up；broke out；took an active part in；hard work；achieved remarkable result；句型：He is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century. one of +名词复数Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against SARS. not onlybut also句型Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan worked hard day and night treating the patients. 倒置结构He has been working in the medical field for over 60 years. 现在完成进行时【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be born；the famous medical scientists；set up；break out；take an active part in；hard work；achieve remarkable result等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（二）在这场与新冠病毒作战的战役中，涌现出无数的无私奉献的志愿者。他们是驰援武汉的数千名医务工作者；他们是凌晨接送医生、护士上下班的私家车主；他们是为流浪汉免费发放口罩、食物的年轻人；他们是协助保安，为进出小区的居民测量体温、购买生活物资的普通人当我们赢得这次与病毒作战的战役，生活回归从前，你是否愿意尝试做志愿者去帮助他人、温暖世界呢？请参照以下要点写一篇英语作文：1. 描述这场战役中的志愿者们。2. 你将来会选择做怎样的志愿者？为什么？3. 号召更多的人和你一起，使这个世界更美好。要求：1. 字数80-120字2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。_【答案】During the outbreak of COVID-19, there were many helpful volunteers. They were the medical staff of helping Wuhan and young people who handed out masks and food to old people. They were also ordinary citizens who helped to take temperature and bought daily necessities. I am deeply moved by their behaviors.I learned a lot from those volunteers. So I would like to be a volunteer to help others, too. In my town, there are many old people whose son or daughter is always not at home, so I want to help them to do some housework.Teamwork can overcome all difficulties. I hope that more and more people will join us and become a volunteer to help others, then we will have a better world.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，写作时要根据材料提示将作文写清楚。这篇作文要将这三个部分写进去，一是写在新冠肺炎期间的志愿者们，二是写自己将做一个什么样的志愿者，三是号召大家成为志愿者。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；第一段用一般过去时，针对新冠肺炎期间这些志愿者们所作的事情的一个描述；第二段写自己也想成为一名什么样的志愿者，并且写明原因；第三段根据提示号召大家也成为一名志愿者，让这个世界更美好；这篇文章思路清晰，表达到位，是一篇优秀的例文。3.高分亮点：短语：a lot；hand out；would like；want to do；more and more。句型：there be句型；定语从句 ；I hope that。（三）假如你是李华，刚刚读到来自武汉的王明发在网络上的一篇短文，在文章中王明提到自己最爱的奶奶因为感染新冠病毒肺炎去世了，而爸爸是一名大夫，也牺牲在了抗击疫情的战场上，自己又不能如期到学校上学，面对种种压力自己常常夜不能寐，为此感到非常痛苦。现请你根据以下所给提示，给王明写一封不少于70词的英语邮件，帮助他走出痛苦。要点提示：1. 以邮件的形式多和同龄人交流；2.在家里多和母亲讲述奶奶及爸爸的故事；3.4. 新冠病毒肺炎：New corona virus pneumonia或 COVID-19要求：1. 邮件内容须包含所给要点；2.给出至少一条自己的建议；3.语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑合理。Dear Wang Ming,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Wang Ming,Im very sad to read your article.Im writing to convey my concern to you.You said your grandmother and your father died of New corona virus pneumonia.You felt very sad.You should make more communication with your friends by e-mail.You can tell your morther the stories of your grandmother and father at home.You can do sports at home to keep healthy.As the situation gets better and better,Im sure you can get through it. Yours,Li Hua【解析】题干解读：王明提到自己最爱的奶奶因为感染新冠病毒肺炎去世了，而爸爸是一名大夫，也牺牲在了抗击疫情的战场上，自己又不能如期到学校上学，面对种种压力自己常常夜不能寐，为此感到非常痛苦。要求给王明写一封信表达你的关心并给他提出一些关于如何走出阴影的意见。例文点评：文章注意了英语书信的格式。根据提示内容完整，文章根据需要运用了不同的时态，同时注意使用一些短语，句型，使文章更精彩。高分亮点：短语：convey my concern to you对你表达我的关心，make more communication with和多交流句型：You said your grandmother and your father died of New corona virus pneumonia.宾语从句As the situation gets better and better.Im sure you can get through it.状语从句（四）假如你是校学生会主席林琳，随着新冠病毒(COVID-19)的爆发(outbreak <n.>)，同学们只能在家里学习，尤其是九年级的同学们即将面临中考,请你给九年级全体同学发一封邮件,鼓励大家坚持在家学习,并且为大家加油。写作要点:1.表达我们有战胜病毒的信心。2.在家学习方式:(1)每天按时上网课, 认真听课，记好笔记。(2)课后复习，按时完成作业。(3)多和老师沟通交流。3.给出至少两条建议关于疫情期间如何在家保持身心健康。Dear students，How are you doing?_Best wishes!Yours, Lin Lin【答案】Dear students,How are you doing? Due to the outbreak of COVID-19, we had to study at home. Especially the students in the ninth grade are about to face the high school entrance examination. But I believe that one day, we will overcome the virus and go back to school.During this period of time, we should have online classes on time at home every day, listen carefully and take good notes. Then review carefully after class and finish your homework on time. When you encounter a problem, you should communicate with the teacher more.It is very important to keep physical and mental health during the epidemic. Keep a normal life as much as possible and proper indoor exercise can help you relaxed.Best wishes!Yours,Lin Lin【解析】题干分析： 阅读题干可知，要求写一封邮件，鼓励大家在疫情期间坚持在家学习，并且为大家加油。写作要点包括表达我们有战胜病毒的信心；在家每天按时上网课，认真听课，记好笔记；课后复习，按时完成作业；多和老师沟通交流。并给出至少两条建议关于疫情期间如何在家保持身心健康。例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称为主，主谓一致。例文采取三段式的写作手法，第一段首先描述了目前的状况，并表达我们有战胜病毒的信心；第二段重点写作为学生如何在家学习；最后一段就如何在家保持身心健康给出意见。例文同时使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。高分亮点：短语：due to由于；study at home在家学习；go back to school回学校；on time按时；take notes做笔记；after class下课；as much as possible尽可能的。句型：（1）When you encounter a problem, you should communicate with the teacher more. 当你遇到问题时，你应该多和老师交流。When引导的时间状语从句，communicate with sb.与某人交流；（2）It is very important to keep physical and mental health during the epidemic. 在疫情期间保持身心健康是非常重要的。It is + adj. + to do sth.。1. As high school students, its our duty to .2. Lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day,every hour and every minute.3. Love can make miracles.4. Im writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you for .5. Honestly speaking, but for / without your help, I couldnt have made such great progress in English.6. My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. I wish I could repay it some day.7. Words fail me when I want to express my thanks.8. Whenever I have difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out.9. I strongly advise you to arrive 5 minutes earlier.10. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _. Only in this way can we _ in the future.11. If every member is willing to contribute to the society, the world will be better and better.12. If we can not take useful measures, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_.13. Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.14. In order to enrich students school life, the Students Union is going to ., which mainly focu