热点02 手机-备考2022年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点02 手机手机无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：手机。【预测题目】（一）随着社会的发展，人们的生活似乎离不开手机，但是手机占据人们的生活带来一个重要 的问题，人与人之间交流少了，亲情、友情应该如何维系？请谈谈你的建议。要点所示 1. 在现代社会中，手机的发明改变着社会，手机起着重要的作。2. 手机让人们的联系更加容易，让地球变小了。3. 但过去人们常常交谈，而现在却是交流少了，玩手机的多了。4. 有些学生用手机玩游戏，浪费许多时间，严重影响学习。5. 你的建议。（至少两条）可用词汇：手机：cell phone 智能手机：smart phone 要求：1. 词数：80词左右。2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。_【参考范文】One possible versionWith the development of IT information industry ,there has been a.dramatic rise in cell phone,which are now essential to millions of people. But everything has two sides.On one hand,cell phones contribute a lot to daily life. firstly,cell phones enable people to easily and quickly communicate with one another whenever and wherever you are. Secondly, it is the multifunction of cell phones that help us survive those boring moments. On the other hand, the disadvantages can never be denied. The most disadvantages is the unknown effects on health in case of over-use. Furthermore, if people become too reliant on the use of cell phones, our face to face skills may decline.From my perspective, any new invention has its drawbacks,but such negative aspects cannot always diminish its popularity. I strongly suggest that we use cell phones moderately and appropriately to make them more beneficial.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙述清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。（二）根据下面几点提示，写一篇不少于80字的文章。1.手机发明于1973年2.手机用于和别人交流（communicate with sb）3.青少年们能不能使用手机，4.使用手机的利与弊_【参考范文】The mobile phone was invented in 1973. Nowadays more and more people use mobile phones. It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. This is the advantage of the phone. On the other hand, the ringing sound affects others, meanwhile it does great harm to our health. So we should use mobile phones in proper way.But should the middle school students take their mobile phones to school? I think the answer is “no”. Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study. It may make the students being lazy, they may do bad in their study.【解析】这篇短文要求我们根据提示写出手机的优势和劣势，还要写出自己的观点关于中学生是不是应该往学校带手机。我们在写作时要注意：1. 注意时态，要用一般现在时。2. 要把提示内容全部写进去，避免生搬硬套。3. 要注意句式不要单一。【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求写出了手机的优势和劣势以及作者的观点，观点准确，内容完整。2.本文句式不单一，有it做形式主语的句子：It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. 有定于从句：Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study.（一）现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？_【参考范文】The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone. I usually use it to send text messages, play games, watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact, the smartphone makes my life colorful. However, every coin has two sides. Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and dont use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。（二） 随着手机功能日增多,越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动,成为“手机控”一族。假定你某校学生,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,向某英文报投稿。谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。“手机控”的表现沉迷于手机娱乐活动(聊天、看电影等), 与朋友和家人的交流减少,离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现“手机控”的危害对健康不利,影响学习你的建议参考词汇：a phone freak手机控 anxious (adj)焦虑 be addicted to沉迷于注意：1.内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称; 3.90个单词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。 _【参考范文】Today, many people especially young people are phone freaks. They are addicted to playing with mobile phones. They often use phones to chat with others, watch movies, play games, listen to music or take photos and so on. In fact, they will be anxious without phones.However, it is harm to their study. Because they spend too much time playing with phones. They cant have a good rest. Its bad for their health. They dont have time to do their homework, either. At last, they cant get good grades.In my opinion, we must use it in a right way. If we take it to school, we mustnt use it during the class. And remember that study is our first work.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的材料，文中一一描述“手机控”的表现，“手机控”的危害，及个人的建议。2.例文点评：本文采用的是第三人称，采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，意思准确，句子通顺。3.高分亮点：短语：chat with sb 与某人聊天；spend+时间+doing sth 花费时间做某事；be bad for sth 对有坏处。句子：Because they spend too much time playing with phones句中because引导的是原因状语从句；If we take it to school, we mustnt use it during the class句中if引导的是条件状语从句。（三）21世纪,许多发明改变了我们的生活,智能手机( smart phone)的出现以及对我们生活产生了巨大的影响,作为一名中学生,谈谈你对智能手机使用的看法。请你根据下面提示,写一篇短文。内容包括：1. 智能手机使用的现状2. 智能手机对生活的的影响;(包活优点和缺点）3. 呼吁大家合理使用智能手机要求：1. 不得照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。_【参考范文】As we all know, smart phones are becoming more and more popular and they are playing an important role in our daily life. There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from smart phonesWe can read news，watch films，take photos，chat with friends，keep in touch with our relatives，or play games to get relaxedBut every coin has two sidesSmart phones also have bad effects on peopleThey are very common for young people to lower down their heads to check on smart phonesThey don't have facetoface communication with others，which is not goodWhat's worse，more and more students are so addicted to playing games using their smart phones that their grades have gone downAs for me， I think we should make good use of smart phones， which is just a tool， not the main part of our life【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据内容提示写一篇短文，谈谈自己对智能手机恒用的看法。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。（四）日常生活中随处可见人们用手机，许多初中生、高中生都在使用手机，手机的优点主要是方便通信，甚至上网，还体现在突发事件疾病、交通事故的求助上；手机的缺点主要是影响学习和干扰他人，因此建议尽量少用，特别是在学校里。Advantages and Disadvantages of mobile Phones手机的利弊1手机使用的普遍性；2手机的优点；3手机的危害及我的建议。_【参考范文】Advantages and Disadvantages of mobile PhonesWherever you are, you can see many people equipped with mobile phones. It seems that the world becomes smaller nowadays. You could be found wherever you are so long as you take the mobile phone with you. Some people consider the mobile phone necessary and useful to them, while others may dislike it.People who like the mobile phone are much more concerned about its advantages. It is convenient, for you can connect others easily and quickly. You don t have to wait for an important call at home all day long. The youth of today send messages, surf on the net, listen to music and even take photos by using the mobile phone. People find it advanced for its attractive functions. In some countries, it even stands for a person s status.However, some people don t like it. Imagine that you go to spend your holiday with your family after days of busy and tiresome work. When you lay on the beach comfortably, your phone rings. Then you have to go back to your office only to find an unimportant customer waiting for you. At that moment, you may even want to throw your phone away, for you just want to relax and get rid of your work.【解析】试题分析：题中给出了写作的要点信息，在作文中要尽力体现出这些要点。注意文章结构的严谨和逻辑性。文中可使用一些承接性的句子和短语来加强文章的流畅性。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章思路清晰，自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。1. They are so useful and interesting that many students are addicted to them.2. If students are forced to stop using them, they may become rebellious and secretly use them more.3. Although smart phones may have a bad influence on students, I don't think parents should stop their children from using them.4. It is very convenient for us to communicate with others.5. 1.In the end its not the years in your life that count Its the life in your years6.In love folly is always sweet7.I was so much older then，I'm younger than that now8.Every careless and inattentive person has his past being careful and attentive for someone9.When you don't have enough money to fix your own mistakes you've make your own magic10.Apologizing does not always mean you are wrong & the other person is right It just means you value your relationship more than your ego11.Coffee is lonely without cups just as I am lonely without you12.Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well13.To live in a world without you is more painful than any punishment Do you know that no one can replace you in my heart14.Love is not a maybe thing You know when you love someone15.The invader saw the shadow of the lampshade fade away16.The heart of woman is a glass holding water It is full but seems to have nothing insideThe topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由一）What is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三).From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .（一）手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：1.去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；3.昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；4.你的建议参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对入迷要求：1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was 【参考范文】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the pho