热点 02 垃圾分类 -备考2022年年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点02 垃圾分类 垃圾分类无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：垃圾分类。 【预测题目】（一）当今中国社会，垃圾分类 (sort garbage) 备受关注。在校园里，同学们有的赞成进行垃圾分类，有的则反对。请你针对这种情况写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：大家对于垃圾分类的不同观点及可能的原因；强调垃圾分类的重要性；号召同学们都坚持进行垃圾分类。要求：1、文章内容需要包括所有要点，不能出现真实校名或人名；2、不能使用涂改液，注意卷面整洁，字数在 80 字左右。Good morning, everyone! It's my honor to speak here. _【答案】Good morning, everyone! Its my honor to speak here. Now more and more people get to know its important to sort garbage. Some students think its very necessary, because its good for our environment. However, other students think its troublesome to sort garbage, one rubbish bin is enough. Sort garbage not only reduces unnecessary environmental pollution, but also reduces the amount of waste. In order to prevent garbage from endangering the environment as well as our health, its of great importance for us to throw the garbage into corresponding types of garbage bins. I hope all the students in our school learn more about sorting garbage to make earth a better place! Thank you!【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。文中围绕有的人赞成垃圾分类，有的人不赞成垃圾分类这一些情况展开描述，并在文中强调垃圾分类的重要性，最后号召同学们都坚持进行垃圾分类。2.例文点评：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。3.高分亮点：短语：be good for对有好处；not onlybut also不但而且；in order to为了。句子：Some students think its very necessary, because its good for our environment句中because引导原因状语从句；I hope all the students in our school learn more about sorting garbage to make earth a better place句中由that引导的宾语从句，引导词that已省略。（二）目前，每个城市每天产生大量的垃圾，垃圾分类刻不容缓，成为当前的热门话题，请根据下面提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文：垃圾对环境的危害； 垃圾分类的意义； 作为学生，该做什么？_【答案】At present, society produces a large amount of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, used plastic bottles and batteries every day. Rubbish has become a big headache in every city and is becoming a major environmental problem. It makes our living environment and air worse and worse, and also makes our living space smaller and smaller. So how to solve this problem? I think rubbish classification is a good way to deal with it. Waste sorting is becoming increasingly common around our country. I hope all of us can get involved in this meaningful activity. It is important because it can not only reduce the land pollution but also raise our awareness to protect the environment.As students, we can do a lot for waste sorting. First of all, we should know about garbage classification and learn how we should sort the waste. Secondly, we can sort the waste by preparing some bins in different colors at home. Last but not least, its also a good choice to hand out leaflets in order that we could call on more people to join the activity.【解析】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是以“垃圾”为中心，主要从垃圾对环境的危害，垃圾分类的意义以及作为学生应该如何做这几个方面来描写，结合生活中的实际情况描写，要注意语言的准确性和词语的恰当。2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段主要写每天生产大量的垃圾，垃圾对我们的生活的影响；第二段主要写垃圾分类的重要性；第三段主要写作为学生应该如何做。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词合理，意思明确易懂。3. 高分亮点：短语：a large amount of；such as；deal with；not only but also；first of all；last but not least；hand out。句型：because引导的原因状语从句；how引导的宾语从句；in order that引导的目的状语从句；and引导的并列句。（一）为了保护环境, 近来我国在一些城市开始逐步推行垃圾分类(rubbish classification)制度, 现请你写一篇约80词的英语小短文宣传这一制度。内容：1) 简单介绍垃圾分类制度；2) 垃圾分类的好处。注意：短文中不得出现真空的姓名、班级、校名, 否则此题不得分。_【答案】There is a lot of rubbish around us now. We should learn about the rubbish classification in our daily life. There are four kinds of rubbish classification, including kitchen waste, recyclable waste, harmful waste and other waste. It is necessary for us to sort the rubbish. It can reduce the rubbish pollution. It can also help recycle resources. Its our duty to protect the environment. We dont throw about things we dont need anymore. We should think of new ways to put them to good use.【解析】1.题干解读：此篇作文要求简单介绍垃圾分类制度及垃圾分类的好处，倡导人们保护环境。2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称和第三人称进行叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述时，避免汉语式英语，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，句意叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯。3.高分亮点： 短语：a lot of；learn about；rubbish classification；rubbish pollution；throw about；think of；put to good use。句型：There is a lot of rubbish around us now.（there be句型） It is necessary for us to sort the rubbish.（It is +adj. +to do sth.） We dont throw about things we dont need anymore.（含有定语从句的复合句）【点睛】写作六步骤：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。（二）垃圾分类我先行，保护环境靠大家。垃圾分类，人人有责，从我做起，从小事做起，从身边做起，从现在做起。某英文网站正在开展以“垃圾分类从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及你的感受。提示词语: put, help, different bins, necessary提示问题: What do you do in your daily life? How do you feel?Waste sorting (垃圾分类) plays an important role in protecting the environment. _【答案】Waste sorting (垃圾分类) plays an important role in protecting the environment. I start with small things every day to sort waste. Whenever I see litter on the ground, I pick it up and throw it into the right bin. At home I help my parents sort the waste and put it into different bins. Whats more, I often remind people around me of doing waste sorting.I think all such small things are beneficial to our environment. Waste sorting is not only meaningful but also necessary. Lets take action to make our environment better and better.【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。写作时，以“垃圾分类从我做起”为主题，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及你的感受。文章开头已给出，根据题干，时态以一般现在时为主。写作过程中注意要把所给的提示词都用上。2.例文点评：例文采用两段式，第一段讲垃圾分类从小事做起，分享了自己在日常生活中是怎么做的；第二段讲垃圾分类的好处并呼吁大家保护环境。整篇例文语句通顺，要点齐全，条理清晰，题干中所给的词汇都全部用上了。3.高分亮点：短语：play an important role in；protect the environment；start with；pickup；throwinto； be beneficial to；take action to do sth.；better and better。句型：Waste sorting plays an important role in protecting the environment；whenever引导的时间状语从句；Whats more；Waste sorting is not only meaningful but also necessary；Let祈使句。（三）上海垃圾分类管理新规：从2019年7月1日起，上海将实施生活垃圾分类管理新规。因此，英语课上，老师决定开展一次关于垃圾分类的科普宣传。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示和要求，写一篇短文向大家介绍垃圾分类。Residual Wastetoilet paper, pens.Household Food Wasteleftover rice or vegetables, fish bones.Recyclable Wastenewspaper, books, schoolbags, plastic bags.Hazardous Wasteused batteries(电池), expired(过期的) medicines.要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。参考词汇：Residual Waste(干垃圾), Household Food Waste(湿垃圾), Recyclable Waste(可回收垃圾), Hazardous Waste(有害垃圾)Nowadays, the environmental problems of the earth are becoming more and more serious. _【答案】Nowadays, the environmental problems of the earth are becoming more and more serious. Today, I will give you some information about waste sorting.Firstly, toilet paper and pens belong to Residual Waste. So we should throw them into the right dustbin. Secondly, after enjoying delicious food, we must know that the leftover rice, vegetables and fish bones are Household Food Waste. Thirdly, the old newspaper, books and schoolbags are Recyclable Waste. Plastic bags used in daily life also belong to Recyclable Waste. Fourthly, the used batteries and expired medicines are Hazardous Waste. This kind of waste should be paid more attention to.I hope everyone can take action in daily life and make our country more beautiful.【解析】1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。根据题目要求写一些关于垃圾分类的科普宣传。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，介绍了垃圾分类。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：短语：belong to；throw them into the right dustbin；fish bones；Plastic bags；pay more attention to；take action；daily life；句型：Secondly, after enjoying delicious food, we must know that the leftover rice, vegetables and fish bones are Household Food Waste. /This kind of waste should be paid more attention to.（被动语态）/ I hope everyone can take action in daily life and make our country more beautiful.（宾语从句）（四）2019 年 5 月起，上海进入垃圾分类强制时代，南通市也正在推进垃圾分类处理工作。假如你是李明，请根据“南通市崇川区推进垃圾分类工作流程图”及相关提示，给你的上海笔友李华写一封信介绍南通垃圾分类工作的情况。注意：1.流程图中的内容不要简单翻译。2.词数 90 左右，题目、开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3.表达中请勿提及真实姓名。词汇提示：城管部门 city management department益兴名流府小区 Yixing famous Liufu district试点 pilotGarbage Sorting Operation in NantongDear Li Hua,Im Li Ming,I am writing to tell you something about Garbage sorting operation in Nantong._ Yours, Li Ming【答案】Garbage Sorting Operation in NantongDear Li Hua,Im Li Ming, I am writing to tell you something about Garbage sorting operation in Nantong. The city management department of our city analyzed many factors,finally it selected the Yixing famous Liufu district as a pilot. There were garbage sorting facilities and guidance boards in the pilot area. The rubbish cans were divided into three colors: blue, gray and red. In order to lead the residents to throw rubbish into the cans correctly, the street and the community arranged the volunteers to carry on the classification instruction. In addition, there were community workers interviewing the people about the work. I hope this garbage sorting pilot work can be a complete success!Yours,Li Ming【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照流程图中的内容，写出崇川区推进垃圾分类工作流程，写作内容要涵盖题干中要求的要点并适当发挥，紧扣题目。流程图中内容较多，写作前要注意理顺流程内容，力争做到言简意赅，语句流畅。文章主体人称为第三人称，主要时态为一般过去式。2.例文点评：本例文采取一段式写法。全文对题干中所给出的流程图中的内容归纳总结全面，涵盖所有的要点，写作时注意要求的流程顺序，一一阐述。文章结构紧凑，语句连贯，行文流畅。这篇例文使用in order to，in addition等短语上下衔接句子，还使用了一些固定句型如There be句型，为文章增色不少。3.高分亮点：短语：finally副词，selectedas，be divided into，in order to，throw into，in addition句型：There were garbage sorting facilities and guidance boards in the pilot area. There be句型In addition, there were community workers interviewing the people about the work. 动名词短语做后置定语修饰名词。【点睛】英语作文写作六步骤：1. 审题：文体，时态，人称都要审。如本文为一篇材料作文，文体要求按照流程图写一篇文章。时态要以一般过去式为主，人称以第三人称为主。2. 抓住要点：要点是否齐全，是否有适当补充。如本文写作前对给出的要点要先整理组合并串联，务必不能丢失要点。可适当自由发挥，对文章补充说明。3. 美化全文：通过变化句式，增加状语、定语、连词和从句等，使句子含义和文章内容充实饱满。如本文中运用There be句型和部分短语，使得文章语言多样化。4. 连句成文，合理使用副词和连词串联全文。如本文中使用finally，in order to等短语使文章语句衔接自然，符合英语表达习惯。5. 再审全文：避免出现拼写、用词、时态等错误。6. 誊写作文：注意书写工整，卷面整洁。Lets sore garbage together and try our best to protect the environmentThere were garbage sorting facilities and guidance boards in the pilot area.Secondly, after enjoying delicious food, we must know that the leftover rice, vegetables and fish bones are Household Food Waste. This kind of waste should be paid more attention to.I hope everyone can take action in daily life and make our country more beautiful.There is a lot of rubbish around us now.It is necessary for us to sort the rubbish.We dont throw about things we dont need anymore.In addition, there were community workers interviewing the people about the work.Now Id like to share some ideas about how I will prepare for my speech.First, its necessary to tell people to do waste sorting at the beginning of the speech.To make my speech more attractive, I plan to use some body languages.In recent days, we have to face I problem_A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, _（说明A的现状）. Second,  _（举例进一步说明现状）. Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,  _（解决方法一）. For another _（解决方法二）. Finally, _（解决方法三）. Personally, I