热点 10 广场舞 -备考2022年年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点10 广场舞 广场舞无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：广场舞。 【预测题目】（一）你是李华,你很烦恼。最近,每天早晚,你们小区广场上都有很多人在跳广场舞,持续时间长且噪音大, 给你和小区里其他人带来了很多的不便请你给小区委员会领导写封信, 反映现象及其导致的不便(要求涉及生活、学习和工作等方面)并提出合理建议。注意：1、词数 120左右;2、短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇：广场舞 square dance 组织者 organizers_【参考范文】Dear Sir,Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, the long-time dancing and the noise pollution really bring about unbearable inconveniences.We cant rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working.Here are some suggestions to solve the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and letWould you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?Best wishes,Sincerely yours,Li Hua（二）随着人们生活水平的提高，“广场舞”成为一种风潮，甚至把广场舞跳出了国门。请以广场舞为主题，完成一篇文章。_【参考范文】The popularity of square danceIn china, the woman who is more than 40 year-old is called da ma, it has to be admitted that da ma is a powerful group, they own certain money at hand, we always hear about the news about them buying house everywhere or flying to the foreign country to buy the brands. the large group now has invaded the square at night, when the night comes, several groups of da ma go to the square, playing the music and dance until 9 oclock. about few years ago, only few women would do this, but now, as the economy develops, people live a better life, so they begin to find entertainment. da ma have made the square dance popular, when we go out at night, we may find them dance everywhere.（一）随着人们生活水平的提高，“广场舞大妈”们掀起了一场广场舞热潮，甚至把广场舞跳出了国门。请以广场舞为主题，完成一篇文章，内容包括：1. 描述当前广场舞的现状2. 分析这种现象产生的原因3. 陈述利弊以及表明个人态度_【参考范文】It is a common phenomenon that people,including the elderly people as well as some young people, will gather in the dancing square late in the evening due to the fact that peoples physical and mental life develop rapidly.When it comes to square dance, it is universally acknowledged that it makes a tremendous difference to peoples life. For instance, not only dancing women promote peoples relationship but also it makes contributions to peoples health. However, dancing has some disadvantages of its own despite its advantages. When dancing, the dancing women play loud music unconsciously, which gives rise to dissatisfaction.Personally speaking, I am definitely in favor of such behaviors. By the way, I do hope the dancing women can try their best to regulate the volume of music. Only in this case can we create a harmonious community together.（二）“广场舞”square dancing作为一种集体娱乐健身的活动方式越来越受到中国大妈的追捧，但其所产生的噪音，或因抢占地盘所引发的矛盾也越来越多，请谈一谈你对“广场舞”的看法并提出适当建议。advantagekeep fitmake new friends.disadvantagemake much noisefight for a dancing place.My opinion注意：(1)短文必须涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；（3）词数：80100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。Square DancingSquare dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China._【参考范文】Square DancingSquare dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China. Not only is it a good way of keeping fit, but also its a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends. No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident. However, when people in large number dance to loud music, they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear. Whats worse, some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding.In my opinion, we shouldnt dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others life. Lets dance politely and happily.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：这篇短文使用了连接词Not only but also、However，以及Whats worse，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（三）当今中国，什么活动最火？毫无疑问是广场舞(square dancing)。对于这一社会现象，人们各抒己见。请根据下列提示写一篇80词短文，谈谈它的优缺点，并提出你自己的解决办法。优点强身健体；丰富人们的业余生活；提供认识新朋友的机会缺点噪音污染；影响他人的学习，睡觉和工作解决办法降低音量；政府提供更多的跳舞场所These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. Its unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings._【参考范文】These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. Its unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings.Its true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy. It can also enrich our spare time. Whats more, its such a good way to communicate with each other and make new friends. However, the loud noise causes noise pollution and disturbs the people who live around the square. They can not work, study, or sleep well. So we sometimes see news about arguments of them. In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing. In addition, our government should provide more public places for them. Then people can have fun without disturbing others.【解析】试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是叙述广场舞来反映主题，所以要用一般现在时。但本文必须用第三人称。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如Its true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.复合结构等。还运用了However, So等连词，并注意了句子的衔接，如：In my opinion, In addition,等等。（四）近年来，广场舞风靡全国，广场上、公园中、小区里到处可见老年人舞动的身影。今天请同学们以"Square dancing"为题，写一篇英语短文，谈论广场舞带给大家的好处和烦恼。AdvantagesDisadvantagesGood for health; make friends; Noisy; 要求:1.包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.语言通顺、行文连贯、内容充实；3.80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Square dancingIn China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life. I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time.【参考范文】Square dancingIn China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. Whats more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people's study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music. Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.【解析】1. 题干解读：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于广场舞的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，要把题目所给的提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，要注意主谓一致。2. 例文点评：文章主要分三段描述。第一段总的指出广场舞风靡全国，第二段分别指出广场舞的优点和缺点，第三段提出自己的看法和意见。整个文章结构完整，内容描述的比较全面，语言的表述符合语法的结构，语言表达通顺，意思明确。3. 高分亮点：短语：public place；take exercise；Whats more；have a bad effect on；because of。句型：who引导的定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；though引导的让步状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。1. It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.2. In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem.3. Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time. 4. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.5. Whats more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. 6. Its true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.7. These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China.8. To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit.9. In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing. 10. It is a new way of life.The topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由一）What is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三).From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .（一）如今，中国掀起了广场舞（square dancing）热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。利一种健康、省钱的活动弊噪音污染，影响他人的工作、学习和生活解决措施降低音量；政府提供更多跳舞的空间.要求：1. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；2. 词数：不少于 100。参考词汇：suffer from 遭受 volume 音量Nowadays square dancing is becoming more and more popular._【参考范文】Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have different ideas about square dancing .To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit.Also, it is money-saving. However,some others think square dancing is bad for their lives. The loud music and noise make a difference to their life、study、 work .They feel uncomfortably and suffer from it .In my opinion, I think square dancing is good for peoples health, as long as the dancers show care about others needs and turn down the volume. And then, our government should offer right places for square dancers to dance square dancing【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是以“广场舞”这一社会现象为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述 “广场舞”对我们生活的正反两方面的影响。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后要表达出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中get popular with，be crowded with, to be honest，also，however, make a difference, in my opinion, care about等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密、逻辑清晰；文中还多处使用了宾语从句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。（二）目前广场舞的话题非常热。有些人认为：广场舞能丰富人们的生活，促进身心健康；有些人认为：广场舞的音乐声给周边市民带来了麻烦，影响了晚间休息。请选择一个观点结合你的经历简略谈谈你的看法。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Suggested phrases:enrich peoples life;bring trouble_