热点08 广场舞-备考2022年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点8 广场舞 广场舞无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活增添了很多乐趣。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：广场舞。【预测题目】（一）假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下：（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但参考词汇：跳广场舞 do square dancing （对某人）有意见 have a complaint (against sb.)要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3） 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Boys and girls,Im very happy to speak here and Id like to talk about my grandma._Thats all. Thank you!【参考范文】Boys and girls,Im very happy to speak here and Id like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. Whats more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they cant fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldnt make a lot of noise.Thats all. Thank you!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言的发言稿。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：she is.，some neighbors have a complaint against .，They think that.以及But they should .等句式的应用。写作中注意运用连词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整地表达提纲中所列内容。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了发言稿的主题，要介绍自己的祖母，接下来介绍祖母现在和过去的比较，以及邻居们对广场舞的态度，最后阐述自己对人们跳广场舞的观点。此处be in love with, have a complaint against, a good way to do sth, keep healthy等这些词组的运用以及 状语从句so loud that they cant fall asleep at night.的运用也让文章增色不少。（二）近年来广场舞越来越流行。在公园、小区甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人们。上周, Helping Hands Club进行了一项问卷调查。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，并谈一谈对此事的看法。赞 成： 是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能锻炼身体 可以结交有共同爱好的朋友 人人都有权利(right)在广场和空地等公共场所开展活动反 对： 音乐声音太大，影响附近居民的正常生活 媒体报道噪音扰民引起打架伤人你的看法： 要求：1. 所写内容必须包含以上信息，可适当发挥。2. 自拟你对广场舞现象的看法，不少于两点。3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。4. 语句通顺，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing._【参考范文】One possible version:Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way totake exercise. Whats more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on peoples study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.【解析】试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于广场舞的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。­【亮点说明】这篇范文中出现一些不错的句式和短语，如Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years.近些年来，广场舞越来越多的受到人们的欢迎；make a survey做了一个调查；强调句式， It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样；In my opinion, 我的看法是；以及由if引导的条件状语从句等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。（一）目前广场舞的话题非常热。有些人认为：广场舞能丰富人们的生活，促进身心健康；有些人认为：广场舞的音乐声给周边市民带来了麻烦，影响了晚间休息。请选择一个观点结合你的经历简略谈谈你的看法。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Suggested phrases:enrich peoples life;bring trouble_【参考范文】Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China. Not only is it a good way of keeping fit, but also it is a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to meet and make friends. Most dancers say that this activity makes them look younger and feel more confident. At the same time, square dancing enrich their life.However, they make so much noise that people around feel uncomfortable. What is worse, sometimes they even fight for a certain place to dance.In my opinion, we should encourage more old women to take part in this outdoor activity. Meanwhile, they arent supposed to dance too late or to too loud music in order not to bring trouble.【解析】这是一篇话题作文，主题是关于广场舞，我们需要介绍不同人对广场舞的观点，并结合自己的经历谈谈你的看法。短文的主要内容分为三个部分：首先介绍广场舞以及它现在的流行程度；其次介绍支持广场舞的观点及原因以及反对广场舞的观点及原因；最后来发表自己的观点。写作时，首先要注意文章内容的完整，需要将上面的这些内容都用英语表达出来；其次要注意文章结构的完整，最好分段来写，观点要明确，不能含糊。同时在文章中还需要注意恰当的表达，准确运用英语词汇和语法，使用一些高级词汇和句型，增强文章的表现力。句子之间注意连接，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，文章分成了四段叙述，每一段的主题都很明确，叙述也很合理，层次清晰；其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯，文中多使用简单句，表达意思清楚、明了。句子之间注意了连接，如however, not onlybut also, at the same time, menawhile等。文中较好的句型有Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China . 、Not only is it a good way of keeping fit , but also it is a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to meet and make friends、At the same time , square dancing enrich their life .、However , they make so much noise that people around feel uncomfortable、Meanwhile , they arent supposed to dance too late or to too loud music in order not to bring trouble.等。（二）如今，中国掀起了广场舞（square dancing）热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。利一种健康、省钱的活动弊噪音污染，影响他人的工作、学习和生活解决措施降低音量；政府提供更多跳舞的空间.要求：1. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；2. 词数：不少于 100。参考词汇：suffer from 遭受 volume 音量Nowadays square dancing is becoming more and more popular._【参考范文】Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have different ideas about square dancing.To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Also, it is money-saving. However, some others think square dancing is bad for their lives. The loud music and noise make a difference to their life, study and work .They feel uncomfortably and suffer from it.In my opinion, I think square dancing is good for peoples health, as long as the dancers show care about others needs and turn down the volume. And then, our government should offer right places for square dancers to dance square dancing【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是以“广场舞”这一社会现象为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述 “广场舞”对我们生活的正反两方面的影响。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后要表达出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中get popular with，be crowded with, to be honest，also，however, make a difference, in my opinion, care about等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密、逻辑清晰；文中还多处使用了宾语从句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。（三）当今中国，什么活动最火？毫无疑问是广场舞(square dancing)。对于这一社会现象，人们各抒己见。请根据下列提示写一篇80词短文，谈谈它的优缺点，并提出你自己的解决办法。优点强身健体；丰富人们的业余生活；提供认识新朋友的机会缺点噪音污染；影响他人的学习，睡觉和工作解决办法降低音量；政府提供更多的跳舞场所These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. Its unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings._【参考范文】These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. Its unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings.Its true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy. It can also enrich our spare time. Whats more, its such a good way to communicate with each other and make new friends. However, the loud noise causes noise pollution and disturbs the people who live around the square. They can not work, study, or sleep well. So we sometimes see news about arguments of them. In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing. In addition, our government should provide more public places for them. Then people can have fun without disturbing others.【解析】试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是叙述广场舞来反映主题，所以要用一般现在时。但本文必须用第三人称。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如Its true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.复合结构等。还运用了However, So等连词，并注意了句子的衔接，如：In my opinion, In addition,等等。（四）近年来，广场舞风靡全国，广场上、公园中、小区里到处可见老年人舞动的身影。今天请同学们以"Square dancing"为题，写一篇英语短文，谈论广场舞带给大家的好处和烦恼。AdvantagesDisadvantagesGood for health; make friends; Noisy; 要求:1.包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.语言通顺、行文连贯、内容充实；3.80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Square dancingIn China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life. I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time.【参考范文】Square dancingIn China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. Whats more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people's study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music. Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.【解析】1. 题干解读：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于广场舞的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，要把题目所给的提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，要注意主谓一致。2. 例文点评：文章主要分三段描述。第一段总的指出广场舞风靡全国，第二段分别指出广场舞的优点和缺点，第三段提出自己的看法和意见。整个文章结构完整，内容描述的比较全面，语言的表述符合语法的结构，语言表达通顺，意思明确。3. 高分亮点：短语：public place；take exercise；Whats more；have a bad effect on；because of。句型：who引导的定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；though引导的让步状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。1. It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.2. In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem.3. Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time. 4. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.5. Whats more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. 6. Its true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.7. These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China.8. To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit.9. In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing. 10. It is a new way of life.11. Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China.12. It is a common phenomenon that people,including the elderly people as well as some young people.13. it is universally acknowledged that it makes a tremendous difference to peoples life. 14. when we go out at night, we may find them dance everywhere.15. Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popul