专题21 书面表达 考点1 观点看法类（第01期）-备考2022年中考英语真题分项汇编（全国通用）（解析版）.doc

备战2022年中考真题英语分项汇编专题21 书面表达考点1 观点看法类（一）【备战2022 北京市】40.“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress提示问题：What did you do to accumulate knowledge? What have you learned from doing so? Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. _【写作思路】本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。【参考范文】Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.【名师点评】1.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。2. 高分亮点：单词和短语：as for；take lots of measures to do sth.；first of all；provide sb. with sth.；used to do sth.；at the same time；last but not least；in a word；step by step；make progress。句型：who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；以only开头的倒装句。（二）【备战2022 贵州省安顺市】81.某英语网站正在开展关于良好生活习惯的征文大赛，请以“Good Living Habits Make Me _”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加此次大赛。要求如下：1.补全标题；2.征文应包含第一节所有信息（1. Whats your favorite food? 2. How often do you exercise? 3. How many hours do you sleep every night? 4. How do you relax yourself in your daily life? 5. What do you think of your living habits?）；3.重点谈谈良好的生活习惯对你的积极影响和作用；4.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。_【写作思路】本题为话题作文，要求补充完题目“Good Living Habits Make Me _”后写一篇短文。文章时态用现在时或过去时，人称用第一人称。【参考范文】Good Living Habits Make Me HealthierGood living habits are important in our lives. They influence us in many ways. I think good living habits make me healthier.I used to prefer meat to fruit or vegetables. But now I try all kinds of food. Whats more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day. Everyone needs sleep. I have eight to ten hours sleep at night. With enough sleep at night, I can be ready for school activities. In spare time Id like to do some reading. It makes me feel relaxed. I think my living habits are pretty healthy. Developing good living habits was quite difficult for me at the beginning, but now I am used to it and enjoy it. I look much stronger than before. I think it is good living habits that make me healthier and healthier.【名师点评】1.例文点评：例文分三段，第一段用于引出Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier这一话题，第二段则根据第一节的五个要点对自己的良好生活习惯进行了描述，第三段则对自己的生活习惯进行了评价并肯定了健康生活习惯给自己带来的积极影响。例文层次分明，思路清晰，叙述流畅，文中用了许多高分句型及短语，为文章增色不少。2.高分亮点：短语：used to do，prefer to ，all kinds of，whats more，be ready for，at the beginning。句型：（1）Whats more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day.（and连接的并列句）（2）I think good living habits make me healthier.（宾语从句）（3）Developing good living habits was quite difficult for me at the beginning, but now I am used to it and enjoy it.（动名词作主语）（三）【备战2022 贵州省黔东南州】86.请将文章用0. 5 毫米黑色签字笔写在答题卡相应的位置上。安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生, 我们可能遇到哪些安全问题?该怎样处理呢?校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会, 请根据以下要点提示, 以How to Keep Safe为题写一篇英文发言稿。中学生安全问题及对策一、交通安全:遵守交通规则。二、食品安全:注意饮食安全。三、活动安全:上下楼梯靠右行;体育锻炼要小心:不允许私自下河游泳。四、交友安全:注意网络交友安全。遇险建议遇到危险要保持冷静, 保证自身安全, 然后及时报警或向家长、老师求助。写作要求:1. 结构完整, 要点齐全, 可适当发挥;2. 表达通顺, 语言规范, 书写清晰;3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息;4. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。How to Keep SafeHello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe. _In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.【写作思路】本文是一篇话题作文。以“如何保持安全”为题展开描述，文中阐述中学生的安全问题及对策，以及遇险的建议。【参考范文】How to Keep SafeHello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe. Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What's more, we'd better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around. If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help. In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.【名师点评】1.例文点评：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的一般现在时。准确运用事态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。2.高分亮点：短语：pay attention to注意；too much太多；whats more而且；had better(not) do sth最好（不）做某事；in a word总之。句子：Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe用的是倒装句；Be sure not to eat too much junk food用的是祈使句；when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right中when引导的是时间状语从句。（四）【备战2022 贵州省铜仁市】101.全球新冠疫情依然严峻，而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目，全国万众一心，团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。你的美国笔友Michael想了解你对此的所见所闻和所思所想。请你根据下面的提示内容，回一封邮件。提示：（所见所闻）我们政府采取了很多措施，执行（carry out）隔离（quarantine）治疗（ reatment）的政策（policy）；兴建（build）许多特殊的（special）医院；许多优秀的（excellent）医护人员自愿（volunteer）去帮助灾区（disaster areas）.（所思所想）作学生，我们要保护好自己，比如（至少两点）；希望全世界人民。（ work together； save more lives）要求：1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑；3. 必须包含所有提示内容，但不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；4. 务必书写正确规范，卷面整洁。Dear Michael,Im glad to receive your email. Now Id like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First_Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【写作思路】对于写作题考生需认真审题，全面了解写作要求，理清思路，确定短文体裁、框架结构和写作内容。本文要求就新冠疫情向美国笔友Michael写信介绍自己的所见所闻和所思所想，属于书信类写作。写作时需要注意格式正确，用第一人称进行叙述。【参考范文】Dear Michael,Im glad to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID-19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First, we have carried out quarantine treatment policy. Second, many special hospitals have been built. Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas. As students, we must protect ourselves. For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air. Try to avoid going outside or going to places where there are many people. Wash your hands as often as possible, especially before meals and after returning from public places. Whats more, we should wear a mask when going out. II hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【名师点评】1.例文点评：本文首先直入主题Id like to share my opinions with you，然后分别介绍政府的三点防疫举措和个人的防护措施，最后表达希望I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives。本文是“总分总”结构，以第一人称为主，用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时三种时态展开陈述；内容充实，结构完整，方法合理，表达流畅，条理清晰，是一篇优秀的习作。2.高分亮点：高分短语：would like to do share sth. with sb., as students, stay at home, go out, carry out, volunteer to do, live in, for example, try to do , avoid doing, as often as possible, whats more, all over the world.高分句型：1). Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas.（定语从句）2). For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air.（并列祈使句结构）3). I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.（宾语从句）【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。例文中，First, Second, Third, Whats more等词的运用，增强了本文的条理性。（五）【备战2022 黑龙江龙东地区】82.本学期，我省中小学采取网上授课的教学方式。有些同学取得很大进步，也有些同学成绩下滑。对此，你有什么看法呢？ 请以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。提示信息：1）网络直播课是学校避免疾病传播的一种教学方式：（spread 传播 v.）2）作业形式丰富多样：（all kinds of）3）课后可以观看回放：（playback 回放n.）4）一些同学对自己要求不严格、不认真听讲、不按时完成作业；5）Wi-Fi不好，导致网课不能顺利进行：（go on well）注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。What do you think of learning online?At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.As for me, I think_【写作思路】本文要求根据所给信息，以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。首先认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；我们需要用正确的英语把所给出的要点表达出来，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。【参考范文】What do you think of learning online?At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.As for me, I think learning online is a teaching method to avoid the spread of disease in schools, and the homework is of various forms. We can record videos and share them with our classmates online. One of the advantages of online teaching is that the video lesson can be played back after class. It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students. However, every coin has two sides. Some students are not strict with themselves. They do not listen carefully or finish their homework on time. If a student is managed by a teacher in class, of course he may be more serious. But if teaching online, the teacher can't see what they are doing, the probability of a student wandering is probably much higher than before.Whats more, If Wi-Fi is not good, it will cause the online lessons not to go on well.I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform. Through communication, students can get answers to questions. Teachers can also understand the students and encourage students to learn.【名师点评】1.例文点评：文章在介绍的时候时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称，文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。2.高分亮点：短语：share with；the advantages of；Whats more；communicate with；encourage students to learn.句型：which引导非限制性定语从句。It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students. 宾语从句I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform.（六）【备战2022 山东省德州市】51.少年智则国智,少年强则国强。根据下图提示写一篇英语短文, 描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长，并说明原因或目的。除了提示中的内容，请你至少再补充一条。build up our bodies by;keep strong and healthydevelop some interests;for example,;make ourselves fully developeddo housework; such as;help parents; learn to be independent (独立的)?要求：1、语言通顺, 要点齐全, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范;2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称; 3、80100词, 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion._