Unit 6 At one with nature 作文解析：主题-与自然和谐相处讲义--高中英语外研版（2019）必修第一册.docx

必修一-外研版 Unit 6 At one with nature(作文解析：主题-与自然和谐相处）主题写作-与自然和谐相处1写作任务目前治理雾霾任务艰巨，保护环境、保护大自然，人人有责。作为中学生，我们也应该从自身做起。请你以“How to protect our environment”为题，用英语写一篇报道。注意：（1）内容具体，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（2）80词左右。参考词汇：雾霾 n. haze_.2写作构思（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁：应用文-新闻报道主题：倡导爱护大自然，提出治理雾霾、保护环境的具体措施（2）二定：确定时态和人称时态：以一般现在时为主人称：以第一人称为主（3）三明确：明确写作要点内容要求：a. 开篇表明态度-我们要减少雾霾；b.阐明雾霾对我们有危害；c.提出解决问题的具体措施。词数要求：80左右。（4）四分段文章整体为一个段落即可。3素材整理（1）关键词语 take action to do sth.采取行动做某事 do harm to对······有害 first of all 首先plant trees 植树 encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 public transportation 公共交通 last but not least 最后但同样重要的是call on 呼吁，号召（2）重要句型我们应该采取行动来减少雾霾，它对我们的健康有害。（which引导非限制性定语从句）_.首先，我认为种更多树是一个好方法。（I believe that.)_.其次，政府应该惩罚那些产生太多污染物的工厂。（which引导定语从句）_.再次，我认为鼓励人们使用公共交通工具是一个好主意。（Its a good idea to do. ）_.最后但同样重要的是，如果他们作短途旅行的话，我们可以呼吁市民骑自行车。（last but not least，call on）_.Keys: We should take action to reduce haze, which does harm to our health.First of all, I believe that planting more trees is a good way. Second, the government should punish the factories which produce too many polluted things.Third, I think it's a good idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens to ride bikes if they go on short journeys.4高分作文How to protect our environmentWe should take action to reduce haze, which does harm to our health. First of all, I believe that planting more trees is a good way. Second, the government should punish the factories which produce too many polluted things. Maybe we can move the factories to the areas where few people live. Third, I think it's a good idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens to ride bikes if they go on short journeys.【综合点评】（1）人称时态运用恰当。（2）关联词运用恰到好处，如 first of all，second，third， last but not least等。（3）复杂句表达精准，如定语从句、宾语从句和状语从句。复杂多变、错落有致的句式给人一种美感。5佳作背诵（金星原创）假设你是李华，你家附近的公园最近环境状况很差，很多市民有乱涂乱扔的行为。为此，你写信给市长，反映此事，并希望采取措施。注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mayor,_.Yours,Li Hua参考范文：One possible version:Dear Mayor,I am Li Hua, a senior high school student. I'm writing to tell you some bad behaviour in the park.First of all, some citizens draw pictures and put up advertisements on the walls, poles and buildings. It makes us feel uncomfortable. Some citizens throw rubbish and spit everywhere. In addition, some people walk their dogs without tying them, therefore destroying the park's harmony and beauty.I hope you can take some measures to prevent such bad behavior to make our environment more and more beautiful and comfortable.Yours,Li Hua学科网（北京）股份有限公司