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同等学力英语考试第二卷包括翻译（30分钟，20分）和作文（30分钟。15分）。考试时候第二卷得分必须大于等于18分，才能算及格。翻译翻译分为中翻英（100-120汉字），和英翻中（80-100英语单词）。对于两种翻译最重要的是单词，所以这一点请大家自己努力提高。英翻中tips第一， 找主干1）如果英语句子主干很容易找到，主干前没有修饰语时，顺译。2005年英翻中第二段。 2）如果主干之间有较长的修饰限定语时，一定要分析清楚主干，一部分一部分的翻译，然后综合。时间状语，可以直接翻译到句首或者句末，不参加到汇总综合中，以降低难度。 例 2005年 第一段第一句 3）句中出现that which what where who这一类引导词时，要明确知道他们引导的是从句。例 2005年 第一段第二句第二，遇上生词怎么办？ 1）分析词性例2005年 第二段第一句circulation 2005年 第二段第二句中 entails integrate 2) 联系上下文作文出题人，评卷人，考生出题人：出题内容：常见社会话题，一般不会出很专业的东西。比如工作，住哪里出题形式：（一）提纲作文 1）阐述观点 2）解决问题 3）谚语警句型例，98年，Why We Work 99年 The qualities of the Cross-Century Talents 2000年Which is more Important, Wealth or Health? 01年 the Greatest Invention in the Past Century05年 whether College Students Should Be Allowed to Get Married. 06年 College Graduates Work as Village Officials 07年 Who and How to Take Care of the Seniors? 09年 My opinion about blog （二）看图作文 08年Self-confidence is the Key to Success. 02年The Increase in the Number of Chinese Traveling Abroad. （三）摘要作文 03年What will money bring us, fortune or misfortune? 04年 The Goal of Life （四）书信作文同等学力;英语;写作 同等学力作文评分原则： 作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判，就总的印象给出奖励分（Reward Scores），而不是按语言点的错误数目累计扣分。评分标准如下表格：得分表达能力1411852切题与否切题切题基本切题基本切题思路紊乱内容表述清楚清楚不够清楚不清楚条理不清文字表达通顺，连贯性较好连贯勉强连贯连贯性差谈不上连贯语言表达能力表达灵活多样；基本上无语言错误，仅有个别错误表达灵活；有少量语法错误语法错误相当多，其中有些是严重错误严重语法错误较多语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误总体印象切题，内容丰富，语言流畅连贯，表达能力较强切题，内容较丰富，语言流畅可读基本切题，内容能说明主题，语言基本可读基本切题，表达能力差，文章勉强可读思路紊乱，基本上不具备书面表达能力，文章不可读注：1白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。 2如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。 3规定三段的作文，如只写一段，04分；只写两段，09分。 4字数不够酌情扣分： 字数149140139130129120119110109100<99扣分123579作文模式：根据提纲先翻译， 如果没有提纲自己审题时，先写出提纲。但是现在的考题一般都有提纲，所以考生不需要在写作内容上费神。作文字数；150字，25分钟， 也就是10到15个句子。一般说来，第一段2-3个句子对情况进行说明。后面的两个或者三个段落，一般都是说明自己观点。对每个话题一般正反面观点分别三个。然后每个观点加一个句子进行拓展。需要总结的时候，2-3个句子足够。作文但是一定要记得：尽量使用简单的，以表达的观点。为自己降低难度。因为阅卷老师没有时间仔细看你的内容是否有深度。例：06年 Directions: In this part, you are to write a composition of no less than I50 words about "College Graduates Work as Village Officials". You should write according to the outline given below. Please remember to write it clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.Some college graduates choose to work as village officials. 1.    Do you think it is a good idea? 2.    What can they offer the countryside? 3.    What can they gain from their village positions? 09年 Blog is an on-line diary that one keeps on his frequently updated personal web page. Blog often reflects the personality and experiences of the author.    1. Introductory remarks.    2. My opinion about blog:       For or against, and reasons, OR       What I think blog can do.    3. Conclusion单词和翻译表达能力最重要准备的过程，可以综合参考过去的作文真题，先用中文把自己要写的内容表达出来，你就会看到写作文，你自己最常用那些句式。然后去模式中找到最易于自己记忆的一个模式，这样作文就变成了填空题，简单多了。With the development of technic, it becomes true that every family has a computer. The internet gives us more opportunity to communicate with the others all over the world. And Blog is one of the way for our communication. In my opinion, it is good for us to have a blog on the internet. We can record everything which we want, it will be a great wealth for us in future. And the blog is also a good platform for us to show ourselves. From the blog, we can make more friends, because we can know each other from our blog, from the blog, we can find the guys who have the similar hobbies or interestings, and we can discuss the subject which both of us like. Sometimes it is also another enjoyment to read the strangers blog, maybe you can find your potential friends in this way. Of course, the blog also gives us more trouble in our life. Sometimes the blog becomes the tool of the cheater. They spread the fake news or information by the blog. It is not easy to identify. And some bad guys can get your information easily, but you dont know what they will do for you, and some of us are cheated. The influence of blog is actually a double-edged sward. We should try to make the most advantages and avoid its harmfulness at the same time. Let the blog be a happy and useful thing to everyone. 比较法开头 （1）Until recently the general attitude toward day-dreaming remained hostile. Day-dreaming was viewed as a waste of time. Or it was considered an unhealthy escape from real life and its duties. But now some people are talking a fresh look at day-dreaming. They think it may contribute to intellectual growth and lead to the attainment of actual goals.句型： For years/until recently had been/was seen/viewed/regarded as . But (that is changing now) (people are taking a fresh look at it). With the (growing/mounting) (demand for/interest in/concern over) , people . （2）In recent years there is a tendency towards living alone -a dramatic step on the path away from the close-knit, extended families so common just a few decades ago. According to a census report, households consisting of just one person have increased to 14 percent in the past year, compared with 4 percent 20 years ago. Why are people living alone. 句型： In recent years, there is a (steady/subtle/significant shift of) (general/growing/healthy tendency to)(upward/welcome/undesirable trend toward) . According to a poll/study/survey, there is X percent of , compared with Y percent last year. Why ?（3）throughout our lives we are tyrannized by paper-and pencil tests that purportedly rate our intellect and predict future success. IQ tests, CETs, TOEFLs, GREs, job-aptitude questionnaires all calibrate our potential in the eyes of the world, and often in our own eye as well. But most psychologists concede that real-life achievement has little to do with these test scores. As Garrison Killor, a noted psychologist wrote, “smart does not count for much.”句型： (Throughout our lives) (Historically) (Traditionally), we tend to . But most scientists/researchers/doctors have now found that . (4) Sever years ago, people were often a little surprised when they heard that a college student was doing a part-time job. “why? Maybe he is short of money, “ they thought. Nowadays, it is not an uncommon occurrence that college students are working as tutors, salesmen and tour guides. Many students put up advertisements on bulletin boards or lamp posts to search for odd jobs. Why do many students show great interest in a part-time or a summer job? 句型： several years/decades ago, people . Now/today, . Why (do people ?) (has such change taken place?) Solidification Drill: topic: Where Should the Dying Spend Their Remaining Time Some people think a hospital is a good place for a dying patient to spend his remaining time. Other people believe it is at home. What is your opinion? Use the sentence patterns which have been introduced above to give an opening to your composition. sample There seems to be an increased tendency that when a person is dying of a form of cancer, or other kinds of incurable diseases, his family will send him to a hospital, no matter how much it may cost. They think that this is a correct expression of their love for him, for he can receive the best possible medical and surgical treatment at a hospital. Despite their good intentions, however, I believe, a dying person should spend his last remaining days at home, with his family around and in the warmth of their love.比较法句型： Just as sitting in the drivers seat of a car becomes driving only when we take the steering wheel in hand and control the cars movement, so our minds movements become thinking only when we direct them.对立法开头句型1： When asked about , (the vast/overwhelming majority of /most/many/quite a few) people (say/think/believe/answer) that . But (other people regard/view/see/think of as./I think/view quite a bit differently.) 对立法开头1. When asked about the biggest problem today, many people say that it is the serious energy crisis. They are afraid that the world will soon run out of oil and run short of food. But other people hold optimistic views: they regard it as a natural result of the economic development and believe it will be only solved with further advances in economy and technology. 2. When asked what kind of career they will pursue upon graduation, most of college students say that they would choose a job which will bring them a lot of money and a comfortable life. Working in a big bank or company is what they desire. But I think quite differently. I would prefer a career which will help realize my potentials.句型2： There is a (public/general/much) (debate/discussion/controversy) (today/nowadays) (on/about/over/as to) the (problem/issue) of . These who (criticize/oppose/object to) (contend/argue) that . They believe that . But people who (advocate/favour) , on the other hand, (maintain/assert) that . 3. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college students doing a part-time job. Those who object to it argue that students should not spend their precious time in this way. But people who advocate it, on the other hand, claim that, by taking a major-related part-time job or summer job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks. 4. There is much discussion today about whether fast economic growth is desirable. Those who criticize economic growth argue that we must slow down. They believe that society is approaching certain limits on growth. These include the fixed supply of the natural resources, and the possible negative effects of industry on the natural environment. People who want more economic growth, on the other hand, argue that even at the present growth rate there are still many poor people. They maintain that only continued growth can create the capital needed to improve the quality of life and provide the financial resources required to protect our natural surroundings from industrialization.Solidification: 人们普遍认为青少年吸烟人数上升是经济发展不可避免的结果。他们认为：如果电视上没有香烟广告，香烟不是到处可买得到，孩子的零用钱不是很多的话，青少年不太可能染上吸烟的习惯。但我怀疑这是否是一个满意的解释。虽然有广告和其它尚业因素的影响，我认为主要原因是社会和个人因素而不是经济上的。 It is commonly believed that the rise in teenage smoking is the inevitable result of economic development. They argue that if there are no cigarette advertisement on TV, no cigarettes available everywhere, and no adequate pocket money, teenagers are unlikely to take up the habit of smoking. But I doubt that it is a satisfactory explanation. While conceding the effect of advertising and other commercial factors, I think that the primary cause is social and individual rather than economic. Solidification:Topic: my view on donating blood【范文】 My View on Donating Blood People's ideas about donating blood vary from person to personSome people think that it is glorious to donate bloodThey hold this opinion because those who are in urgent need of blood can be savedHowever，others hold that it is foolish for people to donate bloodIn their opinion，blood is very precious and losing 200ml or more may do harm to their health数据法开头Teenage smoking soars China now has experienced an alarming increase in the teenage smoking. In the past decade the rate of teenage smoking has almost tripled: it rose from 8 percent in 1982 to 23 percent in 1992. At the same time, the age of the smokers has dropped: they began to smoke at an earlier age-some as young as 7 years old. Even worse, more and more girls are taking up smoking. The statistics look disturbing. The factors for a great rise in the teenage smoking are complex. . .描写法开头 Advertisements, perhaps, are most omnipresent in a big city such as Shanghai. They shout at us from the television screen and the radio loudspeakers; wave to us from every page of the newspaper and magazine, gaze at us from the roadside buildings and passing vehicles all day and signal to us in colored lights all nights. Scarcely a day passes that we cannot meet an advertisement. Faced with a flood of advertisements, some people complain that . 惊语法开头 Each year thousands upon thousands of graduates flood the job market, waving their college diplomas and certificates, expecting better jobs in their majors, only to be frustrated and disappointed. According to the charts, only 58 percent of college graduates in 1992 could find jobs in their specialties, compared with 89 percent in 1981 when China had its first college graduates after the Cultural Revolution. Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get a rewarding job? One reason perhaps that . 故事法开头 The other day, I met Miss Lee, my old classmate, who told me that she had decided to quit her job as a teacher at the end of the school year and to go into a company. She said that she couldnt make a living in her chosen profession and that not even her moonlighting twice a week could put her out of the financial quagmire she was in. Miss Lees case is not unusual, it is typical of thousands of young teachers who are quitting their jobs in search of more lucrative work. Once in a newspaper I read of a crowd of people who remained appallingly indifferent to the plea of a mother. As she failed to offer the required amount of cash as a price to save her drowning son, the woman at last watched her son sink to death. The story is not rare in newspapers and on TV, and the casualness and detachment our people now have developed has aroused nationwide concern. I have a friend who lies in a hospital, slowly dying of a painful and incurable disease. Although there is no hope of recovery, the disease sometimes permits its victim to linger on for many months in ever great torment. My friend, apprised of the outcome and knowing that the hospital expenses are a severe drain on his familys limited financial resources, decides that death had better come at once. Should the family meet his demand despite the enormous love for him? Should the doctor run the risk of providing him with the necessary drug? Such a dilemma we often meet in our daily life. Once upon a time there were a brother and sister squabbling over an apple, with each insisting on the large slice. Just as the boy had gained control of the knife and was poised to hack off the larger share for himself, the parents said: “Hold it! I dont care who cuts that apple into two pieces, but whoever does has to give the other the right to select the piece they want.” Naturally, to protect himself, the boy cut the apple into two pieces of equal size. The tale may be apocryphal, but its underlying moral has continuing relevance today. There are some situations in which the needs of the protagonist