雅思G类写作书信部分(培训班资料).doc

如何写一封关于索取信息的信？普通培训类TASK 1部分和学术类的TASK 1部分的评分标准基本一致，对字数要求也相同。所不同的是普通培训类TASK 1部分要求考生写一封信。考生在写作过程中要分清信的类型，如抱怨信，感谢信，道歉信，求职信等。要注意信的格式和结构，要开门见山，直截了当，又要注意文字规范和礼貌。时态要准确，避免用词重复，要展示出写复杂句子的能力, 这是高分的前提。至于如何索取信息信的基本格式，请参阅我曾写过的一篇例文如下：题目：You are interested in history and intend to major in it, but you are told computer science will make it easier for you to find a job. Write to the college, asking for their recommendation.正文：Dear Sir,I am writing to seek your advice regarding which subject I should choose as my major, history or computer science.I am studying in the last year in high school now. Next year, I hope that I will be able to enroll in your college. I began to take a special interest in history when I was a primary school student. I can still remember the historical stories my teachers told in class, so I was wondering if I should continue to study history in your college. However, several days ago, one of my friends told me that computer science is more popular nowadays. As a matter of fact, many jobs need IT skills. I was advised that it is more important to find a job than merely to satisfy personal interest. Therefore, it is now very hard for me to decide which subject I should choose. Must I give up my favorite subject and take employment need as a priority? I would be more than grateful to you if you could tell me your advice about this. Your early reply would be highly appreciated.Yours faithfully,Wang Rutao雅思普通培训类TASK 1的抱怨信应如何构思并举例说明。写抱怨信要首先要注意信的格式和结构，一般是提出问题说明问题提出解决问题的建议和想法。考生在写作过程中要根据题目的要求提供足够的信息，要注意时态准确，句型多样化，避免用词重复，要展示出写复杂句子的能力, 还要注意礼貌，这是取得6分或以上的关键。下面请看一封抱怨信的例文：题目: The government will build a new airport near where you live. Write a letter to the newspaper explaining where you live and why you do not want this development.Dear Editor,I am writing to complain about the construction of an airport in the vicinity of my home, which is going to commence in a few months. I live in the western suburb of a city called West Haven. This area is the most suitable living area because most local industries are located on the other side of the city. However, to my surprise, the government had decided to build an airport here.I would strongly protest this inconsiderate action of the local government. For one thing, the noise of aircraft would inevitably break the tranquility of this area and peaceful lifestyle of the people around here. For another, because there are often lots of birds flying about in the sky, this may cause aviation safety problems. Obviously, it would be a foolish and even dangerous decision to build an airport here.Therefore, for the sake of our lovely city, I hope the press can do something to help to avoid the short-sighted development of the airport. It would be highly appreciated if you could forward this message to the authorities concerned. Yours faithfullyAdam Li为便于大家理解，现附上中译文如下：尊敬的编辑：据悉数月后在我居住的附近地区将修建一座机场，现特致函提出不同意见。我现住西黑文市西郊，该地区是最合适的生活区，因为当地许多工业都位于城市的另一边。然而，令我惊奇的是政府竟然将在这里修建机场。对当地政府这种贸然做法，我表示强烈抗议。因为一方面飞机发出的噪音不可避免地打破了这一地区的宁静和人们平静的生活方式，另一方面，因为这里空中经常有鸟飞过，这会给飞行安全带来隐患。显然，在这里建机场是一个愚蠢，甚至危险的决策。因此，为了我们这座可爱的城市，我希望报界能做些事情来设法避免这种缺乏远见的做法。并请将此函转交给有关当局为盼。您忠实的，亚当 李 You have bought a Walkman at an airport. On reaching home, you discover a fault with it. Write a letter to the airport authority explaining the situation, and ask that the problem be put right. Dear Sir,I wish to make a complaint about a Walkman which I bought three days ago in the Duty Free section of your airport. As is my habit, I made a point of trying it out on the spot. It worked perfectly well, and so I went ahead and purchased it.However, when I got home and tried it again, it seemed that the volume knob had ceased to work. Removing the back of the case, I found that the internal components of the Walkman were all rusted. Not only that but some of the wires were broken.I am sure that you will agree that this is a most unsatisfactory situation. Therefore, I request you to arrange to replace this Walkman with another one, which should be in perfect condition. Failing that, I will have to insist on a full refund of the price which I paid for it.Yours sincerely,John Jones雅思普通培训类写作Task 1的求职信写作方法：求职信属于正规信函，因此，应采用正规文体和用词。在开头的称谓上，既应使用Dear Sir or Madam, Dear Manager, 等。此外，在信中要写出你对应聘的工作感兴趣，自己的优势和特长及人品，性格等， 最好在信中表明自信心，认为自己是合适人选。信的结尾要注意礼貌。请参考下面的例文：Dear Sir or Madam, I have just seen your advertisement in the “Sunday Times” of 12th April for a guide to accompany parties of British tourists in the south of France during the summer months. I am therefore enclosing a curriculum vitae, together with references from two companies I have worked for. As you can see, I was born and brought up in Nice and therefore know the French Riviera well. I studied modern languages at school and afterwards went to England, where I obtained the Cambridge Lower Certificate two years ago. Since then I have worked as a free-lance translator and interpreter. I have often been asked to act as a guide to groups of English-speaking businessmen attending conferences in different towns on the Riviera and am confident that I would be suitable for the kind of work you are advertising. If you would like any further information, I would be very pleased to supply it. Thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfullyJosiane Duval 为便于大家理解，现附上中译文如下:尊敬的先生/女士：我刚在4月12日的星期日时报上看到贵公司招聘导游的广告，该导游将陪同夏季来法国南部旅行的英国旅游团。兹附上本人简历以及过去工作过的两家公司提供的推荐信。您从我的简历中可以得知我在尼斯长大，因此对法国的Riviera地区较为熟悉。我上学的时候曾学过现代语言，后又去了英国，并在两年前在那里获得“剑桥初级证书”。此后，我一直是从事翻译工作的自由职业者。我还经常给来Riviera河两岸不同城镇参加会议的讲英语的商务团组担当导游。因此，我相信我适合贵公司广告上招聘的职位。如果您需要了解更多情况，我将非常愿意提供给您。谢谢您的考虑。盼复。您忠实的，乔安 杜瓦尔 如何完成普通培训类TASK 1部分感谢信: 题目：You were taken good care of by your friends while you were receiving medical treatment in hospital after a traffic accident. Write a letter to express your gratitude for them. 感谢信一般可在信的开始即写出表示感谢的话，然后说明感谢的原因以及事情大致的来龙去脉，在结尾部分还可以再次表示感谢。感谢信可分为正式和非正式两类，你所提供的题目显然是要求写一封非正式的信函。以下是我写的范文，仅供参考。Dear Friends,Thank you for your kindness and good care while I was hospitalized several days ago. As you know, just a couple of weeks ago, I was hit by a car and my legs got broken. Now I have totally recovered from the injury caused by the traffic accident, which still haunts my mind like a nightmare. The surgical operation on my broken legs was a great success. I feel more than grateful to you for your frequent visits and kind effort to console me while I was receiving medical treatment there. Some of you had even come to help me practice walking. No doubt your words of consolation have not only helped to alleviate my post-surgery pains, but reaffirmed my faith in life as well. In addition, what you have done for me shows that friendship is a priceless treasure for every one of us. Thank you again for your loving kindness, and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.All my best,York为便于大家理解，现附上中译文如下:各位朋友好：谢谢你们在我住院期间对我的关照。大家都知道，就在两三周前，我被汽车撞伤，双腿骨折。现在，我已经从交通事故给我造成的伤害中完全康复了，但那次事故仍然噩梦般地萦绕在我的脑际。我的手术非常成功。我在接受治疗期间，你们经常来看我，设法安慰我，对此我深表感谢。你们有些人甚至来帮我练习走路。毫无疑问，你们安慰的话语不仅有助于减轻我手术后的疼痛，也使我重新确立对生活的信心。此外，你们为我所做的一切表明友谊对我们每个人都是无价之宝。对你们的关爱再次表示感谢，并期待不久和大家见面。祝 好！约克提供信息信：You are an overseas student in a college where there are no sports facilities. You intend to take part in a sports club near the college. Write a letter to the club manager for information about the club, such as cost, opening time, and activities, etc.Dear Manager,I am writing to request some information about your sports club.I am an international student at Dartmouth College. As there are no sports facilities available in the college, I intend to join your club, which is merely within walking distance from the campus. Now I would like to know some details regarding the following:How much is the admission fee? Is there any discount for a student? If a discount is given to the members of the club only, I will apply for membership.When does it open on weekdays and holidays? Does it have a 24-hour access? I am a sports fan. If possible, I would even spend most of my summer vacation in your sports club.What facilities are available in the club? I enjoy swimming in all seasons. Is there an indoor swimming pool? Table tennis is my favorite sport. Is it available there?I would be more than grateful to you if you could kindly send the relevant information by post to the above address, or via E-mail to infoseekAgain with many thanks,Yours faithfully,Wang RutaoYou have a pen pal abroad who is coming to see you for the first time next month. You were supposed to meet him/her at the airport. But later you found out you could not meet him/her on time that day.Write a letter to him/her explaining why you will be late and telling him/her where to find you and how to recognize you.Hi John:Im so glad you can come to China and see me. Its very nice to put a name to a face after two years writing.I confirmed with the airport that your plane will arrive at 4:45pm on Nov.26. But Im afraid I cant meet you at the airport on time. I have to attend an IELTS exam on the morning of Nov.26 and an oral exam in the afternoon as well. The oral exam will finish at 4:00pm. It takes me one and a half hours to get to the airport. I am afraid you will have to wait about half an hour after you get through Customs.Another thing, how can you recognize me? I will be wearing a traditional black silk Chinese jacket, which is a bit weird but distinct from far away. I will stand at the central exit door of the airport lobby so you cant miss me.Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours Alan.You are studying English in an English-speaking country. You have a friend in your hometown who is coming to study at your college and wants to know about possible accommodation. Write to your friend and tell him/her about the different types available. Give him/her a recommendation as to which is best for him/her.You should write at least 150 words.Dear Rebecca, I am glad to know that you are coming to study in the same college with me. Now, at your request, I would like to tell you something about the accommodation on and off campus. I am studying English here and sharing a flat with a local student. There are several types of accommodation available here: halls of residence, student hostels and flats. Halls of residence are located on campus, normally fully furnished, and the rent is very high, around 120 pounds per month, while student hostels and flats are very cheap, only about 80 pounds per month, but a bit farther away from the campus. All the accommodation is very convenient and available to you at any time.My suggestion is that, after you arrive here, you just share a flat with other students because it will be relatively cheaper. Also you may have the opportunity to practise your English with native speakers. I hope all the above will be of some use for you. If you need further details, please do not hesitate to contact me. Hope to see you soon!Love and all good wishes,Wang Rutao(192 words)其他： Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house or flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologizedescribe what action you will takeDear James, I was very shocked to get your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you some distress. I am really, really sorry about that. I had no idea that you would be able to hear so much, so I hope you will accept my apologies. As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I get home from work. Unfortunately it is all taking longer than expected and I have been having problems with getting things to fit properly. This meant a lot of banging and hammering. As the kitchen is still not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next day or two. Hell work only during daytime hours, so you wont be disturbed in the evenings again, I promise. Sorry to have caused these problems.BillYou have moved to another city and change your language school. Write a letter to one of your friends to tell him about the new school and your impressions of it. Dear Adam ,How are you doing? I have moved to Victoria, a lovely small town in the western part of British Columbia, and I have transferred to a new language school called “Pearson College of Language Training.”Pearson College is certainly much better than the one I attended in Vancouver. The campus is much more beautiful. Between the library and the classroom there is a nice pond, and all the buildings are surrounded by lawns and woods. Its really a good place for studying. I have chosen a couple of courses here. The teaching faculty at Pearson consists entirely of professional English instructors, who know how to get you involved in both classroom activities and afterclass readings. I believe I can make much more progress here. The only drawback is that I am quite lonely so far. But I am sure I will make friends as the course progresses.RegardsJackYou have just returned home after living with a family in an English-speaking country for six months. You now realize that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room. Write to the family describing the things you left behind. Ask them to send some or all of them to you. Offer to cover the costs.Dear Mr and Mrs. Hopper,I hope you care all well. The flight home seemed very long but my family all came to meet me at the airport, which was fantastic. Thank you so much for having me- I enjoyed my time with you very much.I have a favour to ask. When I got home, I realized that I had left a small black handbag in my bedroom. You may recall that I bought myself a new bag while I was Sydney and Im pretty sure I put the old one under the bed. I dont really need the bag but some of the things inside are of sentimental value and I would be very grateful if you send them to me. There is a red address book, a small leather wallet with some photos and a silver necklace. None of the other things are important so please dont worry about them. Could you please let me know how much the postage is and I will send you the money to cover the cost.Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you once again for your help. Love to all the family.MariaYour mother sent you a parcel two months ago, but you havent received it so far. Write a letter to the post office inquiring about the situation. Make clear the contents of the parce