Unit1单元话题写作指导课件2021-2022学年人教版八年级英语上册.pptx

Unit1 Writing-talk about festival activities 本单元以谈论节假日活动为话题展开，要求学生们会运用一般过去时态写一篇自己的旅行日记。日记属于典型的记叙文，首先要注意其格式，其次在写作时要注意时间、地点、人物、经过、结果等。同时要注意主次分明，详略得当，在结尾处最好表达出自己的感受。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：1.I arrived in Penang in Maleysia this morning with my family.今天早上我和我的家人抵达了马来西业。2.It was sunny and hot.天气晴朗而炎热。3.I felt like Iwas a bird.我感觉自己就像一只鸟。（比喻句）4.For lunch，we had something very special.午餐我们吃了一些特别的东西。5.I like this place because I learned something important.我喜欢这个地方因为我学到了一些重要的东西。6.We/I had a good time there.我们/我在那里玩得很开心。7.I went to Guizhou with my family.我和我家人去了贵州。8.We took quite a few photos there.我们在那里拍了不少照片。9.It was my first time there，so everything was really interesting.这是我第一次到那儿，所以一切都真的很有趣。10.I bought something for my parents.我给我父母买了一些东西。11.It was sunny and hot.天气晴朗并且炎热。12.It was so wonderful/exciting.那太精彩了/太激动人心了。13.The food there was delicious and the people there were very friendly.那里的食物很美味，那里的人很友好。题目：本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟裹。请根据下提示写一篇日记.写作要点1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈人们欢呼，队员们闭队合作，最终勇气队获胜。2.赛后活动我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如3.感想 Tony.，我.写作要求1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰;2.省略号处须作适当发挥（1-2句即可;)3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。第一步：仔细审题第一步：仔细审题1 1、格式、格式-2 2、时态、时态-3 3、人称、人称-4 4、体裁、体裁-日记一般过去时态第一人称题目：本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟裹。请根据下提示写一篇日记.记述文第二步：谋篇布局第一段 Today is the Dragon Boat Festival。For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture.I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived,it was crowded.There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river.During the race,the dragon boat teams competed with each other,while people on each bank cheered up.Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere.At last,the Courage Team won.介绍端午节现场的情况题目：本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟裹。请根据下提示写一篇日记.第二步：谋篇布局第二段 After the competition,I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival.We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.介绍赛后活动第二步：谋篇布局第三段 At the end of the day,tired as we were,we felt excited.Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.赛后感想。Sample Writing Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture.I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived,it was crowded.There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river.During the race,the dragon boat teams competed with each other,while people on each bank cheered up.Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere.At last,the Courage Team won.After the competition,I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival.We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.At the end of the day,tired as we were,we felt excited.Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.现场写作1 假如你是李华，今年五一节你和你的父母一起去岳阳游玩了。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容，用英语写一篇日记，可适当发挥。日期5月1日天气晴朗行程上午游览洞庭湖（Dongting Lake）、参观君山公园中午在一家餐馆吃牛肉面，下午参观名胜古迹岳阳楼（Yueyang Tower）感受虽然有点累，但是很开心。Sample Writing Sunny May 1st I had a school trip to Yueyang with my parents on On May 1.It was sunny.We visited the Dongting Lake and Junshan Park in the morning.There were lots of people.At noon,we had beef noodles at a restaurant.In the afternoon,we visited Yueyang Tower and took some photos there.Yueyang is a beautiful city.When I came back,I felt a little tried but very happy.All in all,it was an exciting day.写作指导：该题目属于应用文日记的写作。在写作时应根据题目提示的内容，叙述五一节和父母一起去岳阳游玩的过程，内容包括日期、天气、行程、感受。本文应用第一人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺、语法正确、叙述完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。现场写作2今天是周日，天气晴朗，你和朋友去心湖公园游玩。请根据下面所给提示写一篇日记，记录本次活动并简要谈谈你的感受和对户外活动的看法。内容提示1、到达上午9点，返回下午5点;2.活动乘船、搭帐篷、放风筝、骑行、野餐.3.你对本次活动的感受和对户外运动的看法。写作要求1.词数80左右，已给出的句子不计入总词数;2.内容完整并适当发挥;全文连贯、通顺;3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。Sample WritingDear diary,Its Sunny today.My friends and I went to Xinhu Park.When we arrived at nine,we first took a boat to visit the Birds Island.Then we put up a tent,some were flying the kites and others were riding freely.It was cool and comfortable.Finally,we went for a picnic by the lake.When lunch was over,we sang songs and played games.We started to go back at five.We had a wonderful time.写作指导：该题目属于日记写作，写作时注意格式。要求记录去心湖公园游玩活动并简要谈谈自己的感受和对户外活动的看法，在写作时应承接短文开头，将所给要点囊括其中。本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景;描述故事时，场景应描写细致;需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。