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2015 届初三上英语单元考试优秀作文选三201-202 雾霾 haze是一种大气污染。中国的雾霾越来越严重了。请以“The Haze in China”为题，写一篇 90 词左右的短文，客观地介绍中国雾霾的现状，雾霾的危害以及如何减少雾霾。初三 2 班陈钰铭The Haze in China Haze is a kind of air pollution.The haze problem in China is becoming more and more serious,especially in Beijing.It has caused many problems.The haze is mainly caused by factories.It does great harm to people.People who live in the haze always have breathing problems.The haze makes the air dirty and people hardly see clearly on the road.Therefore,more traffic accidents happen because of the haze.Since the haze is harmful to both the environment and human beings,we must do everything we can to reduce it.Here are some suggestions:First,we should ride bikes more often instead of driving cars.The cars produce too much harmful gas when working.Second,people oughtn t to burn waste,because it also harms the air quality.Third,we should plant more trees to clean the air.In short,I hope the haze problem can be solved as soon as possible.教师点评：1、行文流畅，结构合理清晰。2、擅于使用刚学的新词组来给文章润色。初三年 3 班林滟雯The Haze in China If you go to Beijing,Shanghai or other big cities in China now,all that you can see will be gray cloudy sky and smog everywhere.But it s not smog;it s the haze,a kind of harmful air pollution.This terrible phenomenon is becoming more and more serious in China.The haze can cause many kinds of breathing problems,even lung disease.It s great of harm to people s health.So how can we defeat this killer of health?First and foremost,everyone had better not drive cars often,and ride a bike instead.Second,the factories should reduce the discharge of gas.Last but not least,the government ought to plant more trees.If we can follow the rules above,our air will be clearer and our world will be better.教师点评：本文语言流畅，句型多样，能紧扣题目要求，写出自己的观点。比方在阐述观点时，使用了First and foremost首要的是,Second,Last but not least最后但同样重要的是 表达了作者灵活的句式运用能力。初三年 4 班陈铭尔The Haze in China It s reported that the haze in China has become more and more serious.The air in many places is bad because of the haze.It s important for human beings to have fresh air.However,many people in China don t have.What s worse,the haze can cause cancer.How terrible!So,we should do something to change the situation.First,we can plant more trees,because trees can clean the air.Second,we must stop usingmany chemicals.In China,some factories use too many chemicals and they produce much terrible gas.Third,our government can make laws against air pollution.Anyone who breaks the laws will be punished.As the saying goes,“Not a clean environment,the living conditions favorable meaningless.”From now on,Let s do everything we can to reduce the haze!教师点评：本文非常清晰的阐述了雾霾的现状、危害及解决措施。好的开头句+自然连贯的过度词句however;what s wor se,句+引用名言的结尾句译为：没有一个清洁的环境，再优裕的生活条件也无意义。=好文章。初三 5 班 王哲轶The Haze in China In recent years,the haze has appeared in many parts of China,including Beijing.In a city where air pollution is serious,when the wind blows strongly,the haze may form in a short while.The haze does great harm to people s health.It can cause people to have a breathing problem,even cancer.What s worse,the traffic can be much more dangerous because the drivers can not see clearly.As a result,there may be more accidents in such bad weather.To change the situation,planting more trees is a good way.And people had better go out on foot instead of driving a car.On the other hand,the government has a duty to stop factories producing too much terrible gas.In short,solving the problem of haze needs everyone s efforts.教师点评：本文行文流畅，层次分明。文中恰如其分地使用一些好词好句，使得文章读起来脍炙人口。初三 6 班 刘怡昕The Haze in China Haze is a kind of air pollution,and it s more and more serious in China especially in Beijing.It not only causes people to have breathing problems but also causes traffic accidents.So it has bad effects on our health as well as our daily life.The government has done something to reduce haze,but it s not enough.More should be done by us.First,we can encourage our friends to use cars less and use bicycles more.Second,we can plant trees to make the air fresher.Third,we can write to the local government to ask them to stop factories producing harmful gas.In a word,we should do our best to reduce haze.Although one person can do a bit,many persons can do a lot.教师点评：本文语句通顺，中心明确，表达正确。连词运用得恰到好处。结尾简洁有力，画龙点睛！初三 7 班 庄煜权The Haze in China As we know,the haze in China has appeared for many years.It has become one of the most serious problems in many big cities.The haze is a kind of air pollution.It is harmful to people s health and makes us be in a bad 文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 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should do everything we can to reduce the haze and protect our environment.Let s be greener people.教师点评：1、本文条理清晰，内容紧扣主题，结构合理。2、正确地使用了一些已学词组划线部分，做到学以致用。初三 8 班 叶宁忻The Haze in China The haze is a kind of air pollution.Nowadays,the haze in China is getting more and more serious,especially in some developed cities such as Beijing,Tianjin and Shanghai.The haze does great harm to people because it may cause people to cough,get a sore throat and even may cause lung cancer.On the other hand,there are more accidents because people can t see clearly when walking or driving on the road.So,what should we do to reduce the haze?First,we should plant more trees and stop people from cutting them down.Second,we should ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars because cars will produce terrible gas when they are working.Third,everyone should come to understand the danger of the haze and the importance of reducing it.Although we have passed laws against the air pollution,we still have a long way to go.Let s try our best to make the air cleaner and fresher.教师点评：1.文章结构合理清晰，贴合题意。2.划线句子优美，词组使用恰当合理，句子间条理清晰。初三 9 班 吴昕怡The Haze in China With the development of science,more and more environmental problems are appearing.Such as air pollution.It has caused the haze.And the haze is more and more serious.Especially in big cities.Haze is harmful to humans lives.If someone walks on the street in this kind of weather,he can hardly see anything.As a result,there will be more accidents than before.Of course,haze would also make people feel uncomfortable and unpleasant.And how can we reduce the haze?Here are some suggestions.First,we should have a low carbon life.It means that we should often walk or ride bikes to work or go to school instead of driving cars.Second,people shouldn t burn gas,oil and coal too much,Besides,scientists can discover better energy for humans.Finally,we should plant more trees to reduce carbon dioxide,If everyone can do everything we can to protect the environment,the earth will become nicer and nicer.教师点评：1.关于如何做的这一段条理清晰，内容贴合主题。2.多处用到本学期学的内容，学以致用。文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 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HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2初三 10 班 谢舒阳The Haze in China Haze is a kind of air pollution and it s very serious in some big cities in China,including Beijing,Shanghai.As we know,haze is bad for humans health.It can not only cause people to have a pain in their throat or eyes but even cause cancer.Besides,bad air will make people feel uncomfortable and unpleasant.What should we do to solve this problem?First,we should reduce the terrible gas made by factories and cars.Second,we shouldn t cut down too many trees and we should plant more trees instead.Trees can make the air fresher.Third,everyone should try his or her best to protect the environment.We should walk to school if you have enough time.Haze is harmful to people s health.We must do everything we can to reduce it.Let s become greener people and our world will become better and better.教师点评：1.文章内容紧扣主题，结构合理，中间的过渡段使得文章条理更清晰。2.划线部分可借鉴。初三11 班 林雅铭The Haze in China As we all know,the haze is a kind of air pollution and it is harmful to our health.However,the haze has become more and more serious in China.In recent years,many big cities in China especially Beijing have fought against the haze.Many people living in these cities have breathing problems.Because of the haze,we may have no chance to see the clear and blue sky.And it really does great harm to people s health.It might cause people to have cancer.So we must do something useful to improve the situation.We can go to school by bus instead of taking cars.And the government should stop the chemical factories from producing terrible gas.Let s try our best to make the environment better and better!教师点评：1.文章结构合理，条理清晰，紧扣主题。2.能恰当运用所学词组或句型，做到学以致用。初三12 班 吴少颖The Haze in China The haze is a kind of air pollution.The haze in China is becoming worse and worse.In many parts of China,the sky is gray and the air is bad.With the increase in population and the development of industry,the haze has become a serious problem.It does great harm to people s health.We may cough and become sick.It s hard for us to breathe.The haze can cause breathing problems and even cancer.We must do something to change the situation.For example,we should plant more trees and do our best to protect the environment.It s important for the government to stop the factories from producing terrible gas.Let s do everything we can to reduce the haze!教师点评：1.能根据现实情况点出雾霾的危害性，并建议大家重视环境保护。文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 ZI1J5C1T3P2文档编码:CL8M5C1E1A3 HY2B3U10Z3R10 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