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读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。    One afternoon after school, Mary and her brother, Keith, were eating at a cafe near their home. That afternoon, they had to share their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realizing, she had left her headphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.    Mary saw the headphone on the table. She quickly told Keith, “Keith, the girl left behind her headphone.”    Keith looked at the headphone. It took his breath away. It was one of the latest models on the market. Keith had always wanted a headphone. But his parents had told him, “You dont need one. You can always use the house phone.”    He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly, pausing on every word, “I want to take the headphone.”    Mary could not believe her ears. She merely stared at her brother. “You cant! What if the owner comes to look for it?”    Having made the decision, Keith quickly grabbed the headphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Marys hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.    Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Inside his room, he took out the piece of beauty. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own headphone. Soon, he was polishing it happily.    But Mary told him, “Keith, you cannot keep the headphone. What will you tell Father about this? He will ask you how you got the headphone.”    Keith said quickly, “I will say a friend lent it to me.”    Mary said, “Now you are lying too.” Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest?   Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the handphone. “This is the girls phone number. Why dont we just call this number? We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her headphone.” She was trying to talk some sense into him.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time.                                 Mary was very happy to hear that.     1试题分析前文中的“人物”“情节”“隐含的主题”等文本分析1. 人物：  Mary:could not believe her ears. She merely stared at her brother. “You cant! What if the owner comes to look for it?”“Keith, you cannot keep the headphone. What will you tell Father about this? He will ask you how you got the headphone.”“Now you are lying too.”“This is the girls phone number. Why dont we just call this number? We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her headphone.” She was trying to talk some sense into him.Keith:Keith had always wanted a headphone.He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly, pausing on every word, “I want to take the headphone.”Having made the decision, Keith quickly grabbed the headphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Marys hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Inside his room, he took out the piece of beauty. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own headphone. Soon, he was polishing it happily.2. 主要情节：       有一天下午放学后姐弟俩Mary和Keith在家附近的一饭店吃饭，同桌坐了一个20岁来岁的女孩。这个女孩吃完饭去了趟洗手间，把手机拉在了桌子上，Keith看到后，就把这手机拿走了，因为一直来，他就想拥有一只手机，父母亲一直没同意，更何况这只手机又是最新款的。Mary一直希望Keith把手机还给主人，在与Keith沟通的过程中，发现手机背后有主人的座机电话号码。于是，Mary再三想让Keith听进去。 续写情节安排：段1：That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time.   （为什么翻来覆去睡不着？到底要不要归还？该怎么做？）翻来覆去睡不着是因为矛盾的心理的存在：想拥有手机，但是在道义上又不允许（与开头句衔接）最终，还是做出了一个决定一大早就起床，Keith与姐姐Mary说明了他的想法（与下一段开头句hear衔接） 段2：Mary was very happy to hear that.  （听到了什么？为什么高兴？接下去怎么办？）姐姐Mary催促马上联系手机的主人Keith向手机主人说明了事情的经过并表示深深的歉意这件事情对Keith的成长影响一生（主题升华）下水作文  That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time. It was so contradictory for him to decide whether to keep it or not. So attractive was the model of the headphone that Keith didnt allow it to go. However, his inner voice echoed, telling him lying shouldnt be his ugly quality. Different thoughts were struggling in his mind. He lay wide awake for a long time. Eventually, a decision came to him. Hardly had he got up early the next morning when he went to his sister, saying he would contact the owner. （84 words）    Mary was very happy to hear that. Before leaving for school, Mary urged Keith to call the owner without delay. Getting in touch, Keith shared the incident happening in the cafe the day before and apologized for his rude behavior. The young lady expressed repeatedly her forgiveness and gratitude instead of blaming him. Seeing the headphone went happily to the young lady, Keith felt greatly relieved because of his honesty. It was this incident, as a good friend and reminder that accompanied him to be a better person. （81 words）参考范文   That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time. He had difficulty sleeping, uncertain about what he should do. Of course, he liked the new headphone. However, he was feeling sorry for the owner. When he thought how sad the young lady would be at the loss of her headphone, he was full of guilt and shame. The next morning, after a long and restless night, he was determined to return the headphone to the owner. After school, he told Mary, “I am going to phone the owner.” (79 words)   Mary was very happy to hear that. Back home, they phoned the owners house phone. A girl answered the phone. Kevin asked, “Are you the owner of the headphone? Im Keith. I have your headphone. Can you come and get it?” The girl replied "Yes" excitedly, expressing her gratitude repeatedly. Ten minutes later, she was at the same cafe to meet Keith. Handing back the headphone to her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized that honesty was indeed the best policy. (75 words)学科网（北京）股份有限公司