【精品】中考英语复习写作课件：朋友与人际关系(王彦婵 余小莉飞鹅中学）（可编辑）.ppt

中考英语复习写作课件：朋友与人际关系(王彦婵 余小莉飞鹅中学）T:Boys and girls,do you often have any problems in your daily life?What are your problems?S1:I cant get good grades.S2:S3:cant learn English welltoo much homework to doargue with friends/cantget on well with classmates cant get good gradescant get enough time to sleepcant get on well with our parents/cant communicate with our parentsnot clean the bedroom/do housework If I_.My parents will _.dont clean the bedroom or do houseworkpunish me/be angryIf I cant_（获得好成绩），（获得好成绩），my parents will be angry.They will(not)_ _ Because they _（过分注重成绩）（过分注重成绩）.allow me to watch TV or play computer games.get good gradespay too much attention on my exam resultsThink of three problems you have in your daily life with your parents.Make notes about them in the problem boxes.problems1.eg.234My parents dont allow me go out with my friends at night.Can you give some suggestions according to the problems?2、Try(not)to3、What about4、Why not6、Its a good idea to5、Youd better(not)1、You shouldHow to give suggestions认真上课认真上课按时完成按时完成 problemsAdvice You should work harder to get better marks and discuss with parents to get more time to do the things you like.My parents dont allow me go out with my friends at night.My parents dont allow me to play computer games.My parents want me to spend all thetime on study.My parents will punish me when I cant get good grades.Advice:You should/Try(not)to/Its a good idea toReading:Read and fill in the information CardThe time when Jia Meng began to write her diary in English 81.The way that Wu Lei writes his diary82.The university which had a national survey among over 23000 parents83.The percent of parents read their childrens secrets84.The age of Jia Meng85.one year agoonlineRenmin University of China40%14/14 years old Jia Meng,a 14-year-old girl,used to keep a diary in Chinese.But one year ago,she began to write her diary in English,because Jia found her mother was reading her diary secretly.She changed the language because her mother cant read English.Jias mother is not the only mom who reads her childs diary.Recently,Renmin University of China had a national survey among over 23,000parents.The results show that 40%of parents read their childrens secrets.Thats why,like Jia,many teenagers try to find ways to protect their privacy.Wu Lei,15,of Shanxi,keeps a diary,too.But he doesnt write it on paper.He writes online which he thinks is perfectly safe because his parents know nothing about the Internet.Writing:书面表达（书面表达（15分）分）学校报社就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为学校报社就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动加此次活动。内容包括内容包括:1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题。父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题。2.你对这些问题的看法。你对这些问题的看法。（请给出两点）（请给出两点）3.你与父母你与父母 保持良好关系的做法。保持良好关系的做法。（请给出至少两点）（请给出至少两点）作文要求：作文要求：1.不能抄照原文不能抄照原文 字数；不得在作文中出现学校（或班级）字数；不得在作文中出现学校（或班级）真实的名称和学真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总数，也不必抄个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。写在答题卡上。How to keep a good relationship with parents In my opinion,I have too much rules at home._ _Writing请请以以“How to keep a good relationship with parents”为为题题，写写一一篇篇80词词左右的文章。左右的文章。内容包括内容包括:1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题。父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题。2.你对这些问题的看法。你对这些问题的看法。（请给出两点）（请给出两点）3.你与父母你与父母 保持良好关系的做法。保持良好关系的做法。（请给出至少两点）（请给出至少两点）1、What problems between you and your parents?2、What do you think of the problems?Body3、What do you do with it?EndingBeginning In my opinion,I have too much rules at home_ Beginning家里父母规矩太多，导致你与父母的问家里父母规矩太多，导致你与父母的问题（题（5分）参考短语与句型：too many rules,It causes the problems between1 你对这些问题的看法（至少你对这些问题的看法（至少2点点)（4分）分）参考短语与句型：In my opinion/I think你与父母保持良好关系的做法（至少你与父母保持良好关系的做法（至少2点（点（6分）分）参考短语与句型:1,What should I do to keep a good relationship with my parents?Firstly,WritingBodyEndingLets begin to write now 展示（show your passage）Beginning家里父母规矩太多，导致你与父母的家里父母规矩太多，导致你与父母的问题（问题（5分）卷面书写，酌情加减卷面书写，酌情加减分（分（1分）分）1 你对这些问题的看法（至少你对这些问题的看法（至少2点点)（4分）分）你与父母保持良好关系的做法（至少你与父母保持良好关系的做法（至少2点点)（6分）分）每语句中有错误酌情每语句中有错误酌情扣扣0.5-1分。分。WritingBodyEnding作文自评，按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。（满分作文自评，按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。（满分15分）分）作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分1515分分第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚,但有一些语言错误。（以上为及格线）第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。评分档次和要求：Summary:How to write a composition about problems between you and your parents?*Read the demands(要求）carefully.*Dont miss any points while writing.*Collect it by yourself when you finish writing,try to make it better and better.Thanks friends!