【精品】中考英语话题写作课件:地震(可编辑).ppt
中考英语话题写作课件:地震 A terrible earthquake happened in Japan on March11th,2011.As a result of the extreme(激烈的)earthquake,the huge waves washed away all the coast area northeast of the country.The more serious danger is nuclear power station explosion(核电站爆炸)Though a lot of countries including China have sent much help to Japan,the Japanese are still in trouble,because many people were killed in the disaster.And some earthquakes even cause tsunamis(海啸).It was said that 300 thousand people died in Indonesian tsunamis as a result of the earthquake in 2004.How awful it is when we talk about them!As natural phenomena(自然现象),earthquake happens just like it would rain and thunder.People cant avoid earthquakes but can try our best to predict and evacuate(疏散)before it happens.Building stronger houses and teaching people how to protect themselves when there is an earthquake are also good ways to reduce damage.Information card1.The date of earthquake in Japan in 20112.Whats the more serious danger in Japan after the extreme earthquake?3.The disaster which usually comes with earthquakes4.The number of the people who died in Indonesian tsunami5.How to reduce damage?and teaching people how to protect themselves.Read a passage about the earthquake in Japan,finish the information card.On March 11thNuclear power station explosionTsunami300 thousandBuilding stronger housesWhat will you do if an earthquake happens?If you areHow will you protect yourself?Brain-stormWhat to do during an earthquake.Video timeoutsideA:what to do during an earthquake?B:_buildingsMove away from Do not stand near_or under _If you are in a bus or car,_.street lightspower linesstay in itBe carful of _.Run away from _and move quickly to _falling rocksthe seahigher groundBe _Be _Keep _calmbravehelpful Writing书面表达书面表达书面表达书面表达作为一名中学生,假如有一天你所在的地方突然发生地震,作为一名中学生,假如有一天你所在的地方突然发生地震,作为一名中学生,假如有一天你所在的地方突然发生地震,作为一名中学生,假如有一天你所在的地方突然发生地震,你认为你能做些什么和不能做什么?请你以你认为你能做些什么和不能做什么?请你以你认为你能做些什么和不能做什么?请你以你认为你能做些什么和不能做什么?请你以“How to keep safe“How to keep safe when an earthquake happens?”when an earthquake happens?”为题写一篇短文。为题写一篇短文。为题写一篇短文。为题写一篇短文。内容包括:内容包括:内容包括:内容包括:1.1.保持镇定,迅速躲到安全的地方保持镇定,迅速躲到安全的地方保持镇定,迅速躲到安全的地方保持镇定,迅速躲到安全的地方(move to a safe location)(move to a safe location)去,去,去,去,如坚固的桌子下面。如坚固的桌子下面。如坚固的桌子下面。如坚固的桌子下面。2.2.可以用手或软的东西保护可以用手或软的东西保护可以用手或软的东西保护可以用手或软的东西保护(protect)(protect)脸和头。脸和头。脸和头。脸和头。3.3.当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外,若已在户外,就要远离当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外,若已在户外,就要远离当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外,若已在户外,就要远离当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外,若已在户外,就要远离高的建筑物。高的建筑物。高的建筑物。高的建筑物。4.4.不要乘坐电梯。不要乘坐电梯。不要乘坐电梯。不要乘坐电梯。作文要求:作文要求:作文要求:作文要求:1.1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。的真实姓名。的真实姓名。的真实姓名。2.2.语句连贯,词数语句连贯,词数语句连贯,词数语句连贯,词数8080个左右。个左右。个左右。个左右。抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文集句成段,集句成段,添连接词添连接词组段成篇,组段成篇,加主题句加主题句审清题意,审清题意,构建框架构建框架连词成句,连词成句,变换句式变换句式抓住要点,抓住要点,列关键词列关键词抄写规范,抄写规范,避免错误避免错误如何写作如何写作审清题意审清题意 弄清写作弄清写作主题主题 弄清写作弄清写作人称人称 弄清写作弄清写作字数字数 弄清写作弄清写作时态时态 弄清写作弄清写作信息信息 弄清写作弄清写作补充补充弄清写作弄清写作要求要求 作为一名中学生,假如有一天你所在的作为一名中学生,假如有一天你所在的地方突然发生地震,你认为你能做些什么和地方突然发生地震,你认为你能做些什么和不能做什么不能做什么?请你以请你以“How to keep safe when an earthqueke happens”为题写一为题写一篇短文。篇短文。内容包括:内容包括:1.保持镇定,迅速躲在安全的地方保持镇定,迅速躲在安全的地方(move to a safe location)去,如坚固的桌子下面。去,如坚固的桌子下面。2.可以用手或软的东西保护可以用手或软的东西保护(protect)脸和脸和头。头。3.当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外,若已在当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外,若已在户外,就要远离高的建筑物。户外,就要远离高的建筑物。4.不要乘坐电梯。不要乘坐电梯。作文要求:作文要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的 真实姓名和学生的真实姓名。真实姓名和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯,词数语句连贯,词数80左右。左右。字数字数主题主题人称人称时态时态以一般现在时为主以一般现在时为主已知信息已知信息endingbodybeginninghamburger审清题意,构建框架审清题意,构建框架1.List some keywords about how to keep safe in an earthqueke words or phrases:_ _ _ 抓住要点,列关键词抓住要点,列关键词pay attention topay attention to、keep calm keep calm run outrun out、keep away from keep away from asas possibleasas possible、try to do sth.try to do sth.1.List some sentence patterns about how to keep safe in anearthquake.sentence patterns:_ _ _ 2.List some sentence patterns about giving advice.sentence patterns:_ _ _It is+adj.+for us.+to do When引导的时间状语从句引导的时间状语从句If引导的条件状语从句引导的条件状语从句 should/must do try to doremember to do连词成句,变换句式连词成句,变换句式集句成段,组段成篇集句成段,组段成篇Linking words:_ _ First of all,first,second,third,whats moreFirst of all,first,second,third,whats moreat last,last but not least,in a wordat last,last but not least,in a word写作前:认真审题,划出要点写作时:注意要求,规范写作写作后:反复检查,追求完美1、批改符号2、内容要点和分数分布3、档次和标准1.统一批改符号统一批改符号,例如:例如:删除删除 插入插入 替代替代 佳句佳句 句子不通畅句子不通畅记住批改符号记住批改符号Look the book read Beginning引出话题。(引出话题。(2分)分)卷面书写,酌情加减分卷面书写,酌情加减分(1分)分)1 保持镇定保持镇定(3分)分)2.可以用手或软的东西保护可以用手或软的东西保护(3分分)3.当确定震动停止时当确定震动停止时(3分分)4.不要乘坐电梯不要乘坐电梯(3分)分)总结话题(总结话题(1分)分)每语句中有错误酌情每语句中有错误酌情扣扣0.5-1分。分。WritingBodyEnding作文自评,按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。作文自评,按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。(满分满分15分分)作文展评,小组讨论评分,作文满分作文展评,小组讨论评分,作文满分1515分分第一档:第一档:12-15分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点,表达清楚,的要点,表达清楚,几乎没有几乎没有语言错误。语言错误。第二档:第二档:11-12分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点,表达清楚,的要点,表达清楚,但有但有少量少量语言错误。语言错误。第三档:第三档:8-10分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖大部分大部分要点,表达要点,表达尚尚清楚清楚,但有但有一些一些语言错误。语言错误。(以上为及格线)(以上为及格线)第四档:第四档:4-7分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖部分部分要点,写出少量句子,要点,写出少量句子,但表达不连贯,语言错误较多。但表达不连贯,语言错误较多。第五档:第五档:0-3分分 只写出个别单词,不成句子,表达不只写出个别单词,不成句子,表达不清楚。清楚。评分档次和要求:展示展示(show your passage)How to keep safe when an earthquake happens?Its important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens.We should pay attention to the following:First of all,we must keep calm,and then move to a safe location quickly,such as under the hard tables.Second,we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things.Third,when the shake stops surely,we should run out as soon as possible and try to be far away buildings.If you are outside,remember to keep away from tall buildings.Last but not least,dont take the lift at this moment.I hope these suggestions can help you a lot.beginningbodyendingIf an earthquake happened,what shall we do?抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文组段成篇,组段成篇,加主题句加主题句审清题意,审清题意,构建框架构建框架连词成句,连词成句,变换句式变换句式抓住要点,抓住要点,列关键词列关键词Summary集句成段,集句成段,添连接词添连接词抄写规范,抄写规范,避免错误避免错误Homework:After class,self-edit your composition according to what we have learned today and hand it in tomorrow.Thanks friends!