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如何取得作文高分如何取得作文高分-四级四级CET-4作文写作精讲作文写作精讲(二二)Fear can hold you prisoner;Hope will set you free.-“Andy”from Shawshanks Redemption TYPE1 大模板分析P3第三段n nS1：关于以上问题，我认为n nS2：因为。n nS3：总的来说，如果能很好的结合两种观点，XX将会更加完善、有效。P1n nThe issue over()is heatedly discussed.n nSome people claim that 选择A is a preferable choice.n nThey emphasize that todays world is not what it was before.n nWith the evolution of society it is sensible ton n3分钟，自己写一个P2模板P2n nS1：Others,however,may not accede to such idea.n nS2:They hold on to the belief that we should (选择B)n nS3:Take YY for example,P3n nS1:So far I am concerned,I agree to the former/latter viewpoint because.n nS2:Judging from the two sides of the story,if we can achieve a balance between A and B,XX will function more appropriately for us.总结n nT1(正反我型正反我型)的命题有什么特点？的命题有什么特点？n n1.选择性疑问句选择性疑问句 Should we.Or should we.?n n2.提纲中出现提纲中出现“有些人，另一些人有些人，另一些人”“赞成，赞成，反对反对”，“好处，弊端好处，弊端”“正面，反面正面，反面”。n n有有“我的看法我的看法”不一定是不一定是T1。反模板训练反模板训练n n临摹训练n n滴水穿石n n点石成金写作技巧（上）写作技巧（上）n n1.词汇多样性：词汇多样性：(详见所有词汇替换词表)观点 idea-opinion-viewpoint-notion认为 think-argue-claim-maintain-insist-adhere to the belief that练习练习 词汇词汇n nMany people _ it and _ that.n napplaud,arguen nIt has become _ for college students ton nFashionablen nRecently,there has been a _ over the issue.n ndispute,n n_ has not been reached among people as to the issue ofn nconsensus写作技巧（上）写作技巧（上）2句子结构句子结构n n长短句（必）n n被动语态（必）n n倒装（选）n n插入语（必）n n问句（选）长短句长短句n nOur college is completely overcrowded.The lack of space is apparently in all parts of the campus.With thirty students sit in only forty-odd square meters,the classrooms are so jammed that students look like sardines.n n短长长、短长、短长短短长长、短长、短长短n nNowadays people tend to buy more things online.They simply squander their money on the Internet ranging from books to cosmetics,from clothes to bags.This is called cyber shopping or E commerce.被动语态被动语态n nFrom the above mentioned,a conclusion can be easily drawned.n nConsensus among people can not be reached when it comes to the problem ofn nFrom what has been discussed above,n nDisagreement was incurred when we talk about the issue of倒装倒装n n位置？位置？n nOnly by striking a balance between the two can we have a more objective idea of n nOnly through joint efforts can people really have a sound and efficient future.n nSolely by energy from the two parties can human race forever prosper.插入语插入语nOthers,however,do not agree.nThey argue that,with the progress of human society,integrity is becoming increasingly important.练习练习 插入语插入语n nThe issue of building a green university,_,calls for more attention than any age in human history.n npresentlyn nThe conclusion,_,can be naturally worked out.n ntherefore问句问句n n位置？位置？n nWhat is happiness?Apparently,peoples agreement can not be reached.n nHow shall we look at the problem of reading books?n nWhat is the reason for such phenomenon?n nBut,do lucky numbers really bring good fortune?写作技巧（上）写作技巧（上）3 亮点亮点n n修辞修辞 My love is a red,red rose.My love is like a beautiful red rose.Robert Burnsn n警句名言警句名言 n nPractice makes perfect.n nEven Homer nods.练习练习 句子结构句子结构n nThere are countless reasons accounting for such noticeable phenomenon,according to my humble understanding.First,recreational activities are important.Second,they bring us a lot of fun.Finally,we can get a lot from them.n n句子间的平衡感句子间的平衡感写作技巧（上）写作技巧（上）4.修改注意事项修改注意事项四遍修改法四遍修改法n n大小写大小写-固定的几个表达固定的几个表达n n拼写拼写常用单词的拼写常用单词的拼写n n主谓一致主谓一致需要一定量的练习，关键需要一定量的练习，关键位置绝不能错位置绝不能错n n动词时态动词时态议论文和记叙文不同议论文和记叙文不同homeworkn n自己创造一个自己创造一个TYPE1(正反我型正反我型)作文模板作文模板