高三一模概要写作Musictherapy讲解课件.pptx

浙江宁波市2021届高三一模概要华侨国际学校 蓝小云SUMMARY WRITINGAround the world, music therapy (疗法) is being used to treat different medical conditions and illnesses. Some of the ways people use music therapy are to reduce pain, such as in childbirth or during cancer treatments, or to stimulate brain activity after an injury. Music therapy has also been successful in aiding children to overcome disabilities. Children can move their bodies with the music and stamp along to the beat. Why is music a useful therapy? Being comforting and relaxing, music stimulates our brains. We respond to the sounds of music emotionally and physically. The complexity of music( the different tempos, rhythms, melodies and harmonies) provokes(激发) the biggest response. Thus, classical music is most typically used for therapies due to complex sounds and patterns. Although rap or hip hop might be fun to listen to, its unlikely that such styles of music would produce the same kind of therapeutic effect. Playing a musical instrument rather than simply listening to music can also be therapeutic for some people,helping relieve stress and anxiety. Have scientists been able to prove that music can heal disease? Music has been shown to reduce pain by increasing the release of endorphins(内啡肽). Endorphins are the bodys natural painkillers, and when we listen to music,our brains respond by releasing these natural painkillers. It has aIso been known to contribute to the brain development of the babies who have just been born and even babies still in the mothers womb. Certain types of music have also been found to lower blood pressure and slow a persons heart rate. Many people are hopeful that music could replace the need for some medicines that are normally used to treat certain illnesses. At present, music therapy is used in a variety of settings such as hospitals, rehabilitation centers, nursing homes, day cares, and schools. Although music therapy is not yet considered a mainstream treatment, it is recognized more and more as a useful addition to traditional treatment. So next time if you are feeling low or stressed out, put on some relaxing music and let the music heal you.1. Whats the topic words?2. Whats the writing style of the passage?A. Narration B. Exposition C. Argumentation3. Whats the structure of the passage?A. B. C. music therapyStep 1: Careful reading for the key words and topic sentences in each paragraph.Anwser the following questions.Around the world, music therapy (疗法) is being used to treat different medical conditions and illnesses. Some of the ways people use music therapy are to reduce pain, such as in childbirth or during cancer treatments, or to stimulate brain activity after an injury. Music therapy has also been successful in aiding children to overcome disabilities. Children can move their bodies with the music and stamp along to the beat.Tip1 The topic sentence is usually in the beginning or at the end.Topic sentenceTopic sentence Tip2 Read sentence by sentence and delete the detailed information.Why is music a useful therapy? Being comforting and relaxing, music stimulates our brains. We respond to the sounds of music emotionally and physically. The complexity of music( the different tempos, rhythms, melodies and harmonies) provokes(激发) the biggest response. Thus, classical music is most typically used for therapies due to complex sounds and patterns. Although rap or hip hop might be fun to listen to, its unlikely that such styles of music would produce the same kind of therapeutic effect. Playing a musical instrument rather than simply listening to music can also be therapeutic for some people,helping relieve stress and anxiety.QuestionAnswersTip3: Pay attention to the information word “ also”, “in addition”, etcDetailed informationActivity 2 : Work in pairs and analyse paragraphs 3&4 with the help of the tips.Tip1 The topic sentence is usually in the beginning or at the end.Tip2 Read sentence by sentence and delete the detailed information.Tip3: Pay attention to the information word “ also”, “in addition”, etc. Have scientists been able to prove that music can heal disease? Music has been shown to reduce pain by increasing the release of endorphins(内啡肽). Endorphins are the bodys natural painkillers, and when we listen to music,our brains respond by releasing these natural painkillers. It has aIso been known to contribute to the brain development of the babies who have just been born and even babies still in the mothers womb. Certain types of music have also been found to lower blood pressure and slow a persons heart rate. Many people are hopeful that music could replace the need for some medicines that are normally used to treat certain illnesses. At present, music therapy is used in a variety of settings such as hospitals, rehabilitation centers, nursing homes, day cares, and schools. Although music therapy is not yet considered a mainstream treatment, it is recognized more and more as a useful addition to traditional treatment. So next time if you are feeling low or stressed out, put on some relaxing music and let the music heal you.Step 2: Rewrite the key information in our own words Method 1: Employ the synonyms(同义替换） Method 2: Change the sentence patterns(句式变换） 1.非谓语结构 2.从句 3.主语转换（主被动转换） 4.强调句型 5.独立主格结构Around the world, music therapy is being used to treat different medical conditions and illnesses. _ (change the phrase “Around the world”)_ (change the word “different”) Globally, music therapy is being used to treat different medical conditions and illnesses. worldwide (change the phrase “is being used to”)contributes to treatingmakes forGlobally, music therapy contributes to treating various medical conditions and illnesses. (diverse)Employ the synonyms(同义替换）Why is music a useful therapy?Being comforting and relaxing, music stimulates our brains. Playing a musical instrument rather than simply listening to music can also be therapeutic for some people,helping relieve stress and anxiety. (combine the three sentences) The reason is that.reason 1 reason 2 and/as well as/along withThe reason is that relaxing music can stimulate our brains as well as relieve stress and anxiety.Change the sentence patterns句式变换: clauseEmploy the synonyms(同义替换）Step 3 WritingMethod 1: Employ the synonyms(同义替换）Method 2: Change the sentence patterns(句式变换） 1.非谓语结构 2.从句 3.主语转换（主被动转换） 4.强调句型 5.独立主格结构Activity 3: Work in groups and rewrite the key sentences in the third and fourth paragraphs.Have scientists been able to prove that music can heal disease? Music has been shown to reduce pain . It has aIso been known to contribute to the brain development of the babies . Certain types of music have also been found to lower blood pressure and slow a persons heart rate. Although music therapy is not yet considered a mainstream treatment, it is recognized more and more as a useful addition to traditional treatment.Employ the synonymsEmploy the synonyms非谓语结构主语转换Organize Music therapy is a useful way to treat various illnesses worldwide. (要点一)The reason is that comforting music or playing musical instruments can activate our brain and help ease pressure and anxiety.(要点二)_, music has already been proved to generate positive effects of reducing pain, developing the babies brain, lowering blood pressure and slowing heart rate.(要点三) Though music therapy is not adopted widely, it is regarded as an effective helper to traditional treatment.(要点四)Writing tip: use linking words to make the article coherent. 并列：also, besides, additionally, furthermore, moreover, in additionDoes your summary cover all the main points?Yes./NoAre grammar and vocabulary used correctlyYes./NoAre the linking words uesd to make the article coherent?Yes./NoDo you use your own language completelyYes./NoGrading Standard Step 4: Homework1. Write a summary2. Evaluate the partners article 3. Polish your own summary.