高中英语作文--建议信(共5页).doc

精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上 建议信(1)-阐释原因；提出建议类 请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括： 1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重。 注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteenDear Principal, Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. _ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua作文范文：Dear Principal,Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as follows.Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.As far as Im concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of all, its suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, its better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!需注意的词汇、表达：1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)price 价格2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格4. varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品5. For one thing,. For another,6. make sb (not)do sth7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time8. The kinds of food are few.表达食堂出现的问题：9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us cant afford them.10. There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which cant satisfy our needs.11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.12. The food in the canteen doesnt taste good./ nice. The taste of food in the canteen isnt good. 13. The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted14. Its a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.15. The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.16. In the long run, its bad for our health and study.17. It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.表达提出的建议：18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.19. I think its necessary to provide more kinds of food.20. Its high time that we took measures to solve the problems.So its high time for us to take measures21. To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students needs.22. We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.23. The canteen should open more windows so that we neednt wait so long.24. As far as Im concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. Whats more, different kinds of food should be provided.25. Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.建议模板：Dear .,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to.(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.建议句型积累：1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most effective ones.2. Id like to make some suggestions on .3. Its of great importance for sb to do sth.Its necessary for sb to do sth4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if.5. It contributes /helps a lot if 6. I suggest that ./ My suggestion is that Its suggested / advised / recommended that7. Youd better do sth./ Wed better do sthIts better to do sth 8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sthWe are supposed to take effective measures to do sth9. Its high time that sb did sth. / Its high time for sb to do sth建议信(2)-阐释原因；提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?写作要点：1.表明了解她的问题； 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议 要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。Hi，Sad Mother， I have learned that_作文范文：Hi,Sad Mother,I have learned that your daughter told lies to you. As a peer of your daughter, I think the reasons are as follows.To begin with, maybe the reason why your daughter told a lie is that you are too strict with her and she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she has no choice but to lie . Here are some suggestions for you. First of all, youd better have a heart-toheart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, dont be too strict. Its suggested that you should allow her to make some minor(微小的) mistakes.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：主格宾格形容性物主代词名词性物主代词反身代词第一人称Imemyminemyselfweusouroursourselves第二人称youyouyouryoursyourselfyouyouyouryoursyourselves第三人称hehimhishishimselfsheherherhersherselfitititsitsitselftheythemtheirtheirsthemselvesdaughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事1. It was because she didnt want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores.2. She isnt aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.3. Being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. And its you who can do this.4. It is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.5. You should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.6. It goes without saying that lying is bad behavior.7. The reason why she didnt tell you the truth may be that she didnt want to let you down.8. It is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you.9. To avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams10. The reason that leads to the problem may be various.11. Confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter.12. As far as Im concerned, its better to communicate with her in a friendly way to let her know its wrong to tell lies.13. Its suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health. Moreover, its better to encourage her to do what she wants.改错：1. There are some advice.2. Dont sad.3. You should give her more encourage.4. She may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.5. If she has difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out.6. She doesnt want you angry.7. Please not to be so worried.8. One of the reason is that she isnt dare to tell you the truth.9. Because she afraid parents.10. So she dont want to mention it.11. You should apology to her.12. Youd better to encourage her to be a honest people.13. Youd better be care about her health and study.14. Im very understand your condition.15. She may doesnt want you to be angry.建议信(3)为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment. Yours, JamieHi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips. First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble youre faced with, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you'll soon become calmer and better. Yours, JamieHighlights:1. First, you are supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it.2. Whats more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.3. To solve the problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about your trouble.4. Carried by two, burdens are lighter.5. Its high time that you should relieve your pressure.6. Measures are supposed to be taken to control your temper.7. There is no denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens.8. Instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper from now on.9. Its common for teenagers like you to lose your temper, which of course will have a bad effect on your normal study and life.建议信(4) 高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:1、劳逸结合； 2、健康饮食；  3、适当锻炼；  4、保持乐观心态。注意：1、短文必须包括所列内容；2、词数120左右；      3、文章开头已给出；           4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。作文范文： With the approach of Senior 3, students are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students life, preventing them sleeping well and causing problems with their health. In order to improve the condition, Id like to offer some advice.First, Combine work with rest. Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Second, it is important to keep a healthy and balanced diet. Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish will benefit you. Third, go outdoors and take regular exercise, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and mentally healthy. Keeping an optimistic state of mind will contribute to a good physical state.I sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you.句型及短语积累：1. My advice is as follows.2. The following is my advice.3. Finally, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. 4. Then it also helps to take proper exercise. Not only can it strengthen your health, but also it can make you feel relaxed.5. Go outdoors and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy.6. Second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy.7. Third, go outdoors and take exercise. Not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it is a good way to reduce pressure.8. First of all, I think it is a good idea to combine study and a good rest, which can help us keep energetic and active.9. Second, you are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy.10. In addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study.11. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.12. Gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us.13. Go out to breathe fresh air and relax your brain.14. Keeping a healthy diet is essential to you, which helps you keep fit.15. The most important thing I think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure.16. keep a balance between study and relaxation17. keep fit/healthy keep( in) good healthkeep in good condition/shape keep in a good state of health18. with time going by /as time goes by19. take exercise纠错:1.Exercise everyday so that you will be much stronger.2.remain a optimistic attitude towards life3.Eat more vegetables, which can strength your health.4.In addition, have a balanced diet can keep your health.5.Only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal.6.take good rest7.Under pressure of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处错)8.Last but not least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits.9.Taking exercise properly contributes to make you full of energy.10.You should eat something which agrees with you .11.At the same time, we are faced with much stress that results in many students cant sleep well.12.Here are some advice on how to solve it.13.Only you ensure enough nutrition can you study better.14.Finally, keep an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.15.write-_-_-_(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词)occur-_-_-_专心-专注-专业