2022年高三英语应用文写作之道歉信.docx

精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 赔礼信赔礼信是由于自己的过失或疏忽,赔礼赔礼而写的信件；给别人带来了麻烦或缺失, 发觉后为了给对方赔礼信应当反映出自己详细的过失或疏忽,语言应当简练恳切, 并且期望收信人能够原谅自己的过失或疏忽；赔礼信通常在主段首句立刻表示歉意,并说明缘由；在信终止前,可依据情形再次表达歉意；写作模板 Dear _, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to _. The reason is that _. I am sorry that I cannot finish _ in time, but is it possible that I make up the loss by _. If so, I will put everything else aside to _. I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology. Yours, Lihua Dear _, Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to _. It is mainly because at that time I will be full occupied by _ which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with your _. Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your _. I sincerely hope that you will enjoy a good time. By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week. I hope to see you soon. I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand. Yours, Lihua 必备词语短语；forgive v. 原谅inconvenience n. 不便apologize v. 赔礼appointment n. 商定much to one s regret 特别遗憾apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth. 因某事向某人赔礼say sorry to 向 说对不起accept my apology 接受我的赔礼名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - forgive sb. for sth. 为某事原谅某人make up for 补偿；赔偿have no intention to do sth. 并非有意做某事 cause you much trouble 给你带来很多麻烦accept sb.s sincere apology 接受某人真诚的赔礼miss the opportunity 错过机会 fix another time for 支配另外一个时间 consider my situation 考虑我的情形必备句型【闪亮篇首句】1. I am writing to apologize for / I am writing to say sorry for 我写这封信是由于 向你赔礼；2. I would like to give you my apology for 对于 我向你赔礼；3. I express my regret at being unable to do 对于未能做 ,我表示遗憾；4. Much to my regret that I am unable to 让我感到极为遗憾的是自己不能 5. I owe you an apology for the damage I have done to the flat. 我为损坏房子这件事而向您赔礼；6. I am indeed very sorry for what I said / did, but believe I had no intention to 对于我说的 /做的事,我的确感到很愧疚；但请信任,我并非有意要 7. Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email in time. 特别愧疚我不能准时回复您的邮件；8. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. 我特别愧疚没有准时回信；9. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 错过了在一起的机会,我感到很遗憾；【出彩中篇句】1. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 请原谅我说话欠妥；2. Please accept my apologies for my oversight. 请原谅我的疏忽；3. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. 为此我感到特别内疚,所以想告知你实情；4. I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally. 我真心期望你能懂得,我并非有意冒犯；5. And so I missed the appointed time. 因此我错过了商定的时间；6. Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity. 对突然的转变我感到特别愧疚,对错过这个机会感到很惋惜；7. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for . 无论如何,我真心期望我们可以再找一个时间 【出色篇尾句】1. I will try my best to avoid the same accident happening again in the future. 我将接近全力防止将来再发生同样的事故；2. I will try to make up for my fault. 我将尽力补偿我的过错；3. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. 真诚期望你能懂得我的境况,并接受我的赔礼；4. I hope that you will understand and forgive me. 我期望您可以懂得并原谅我；名师归纳总结 5. I shall be obliged if you 第 3 页,共 10 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 假如您能 ,我将特别感谢；6. I hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes. 我期望对此事的处理能满意您的愿望；7. Please allow me to say sorry again. 请答应我再次表示歉意；8. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. 我再次为我的错误真诚地赔礼；9. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. 请再次接受我真诚的赔礼；高考真题2022 年全国卷【真题再现】假定你是李华,与留同学伴侣 他写封邮件,内容包括：Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约；请给1.表示歉意；2.说明缘由；3.另约时间；【试题分析】题目要求写一封赔礼信,因不能如约一起去书向 和一般现在时进行写作；【得分要点】Bob 赔礼,使用第一人称题目是常规的书信作文, 要求写一封赔礼信, 是应用文的一种； 写作的内容 已经给出,表达歉意的同时, 仍要与对方另约时间； 因此,不仅仅是一封赔礼信；写作时留意涵盖全部要点,仍要兼顾上下文的连贯性；【参考范文】Dear Bob, I m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning. We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outsschool gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li HuaDear Bob, How are you doing. We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. Unfortunately, I cant make it. So, I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. How I wish I could go with you. However, I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken English. As a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to you. How about going to the bookshop this Sunday. Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the competition with you. Please. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 2022 山东卷【真题再现】假如你是新华中学的同学李华, 你的美国伴侣 Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的准备, 但你因预备期末考试未能准时回复；回封邮件：请依据以下要点给他名师归纳总结 1. 未准时回信的缘由；2. 你假期的准备（如做兼职、旅行、做理想者等）；第 5 页,共 10 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 【经典套路】第一段：问候 +写信背景 +写信目的其次段： “赔礼”部分 相当于 “写信背景 ” 第三段： “假期支配 ”部分第四段：补充说明 +客套话【高分范文】Dear Tom, How are you doing. 问候 You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. 写信背景 I am sorry that I didnt reply without delay. 写信目的 How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice. 其次段为赔礼信常见套路 By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation. 主题句 First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved. 拓展句 1 Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School. 拓展句 2 Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant. 拓展句 3 s yours. I am looking forward These are my plan for the summer vacation. Whatto your earliest reply. 以合理的客套话结尾 Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 【满分佳作】Dear Tom, I m terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email which you sent me a week agimmediately. I was so occupied with the final exams. As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant. Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it. And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. Finally, Ill go to Yaan to work as a volunteer. There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help. I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them. Do you have anything for the summer. Please write to me and let me know. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【满分赏析】先用 I m terribly sorry 对未能准时回信赔礼, terribly 加强了赔礼的语气；接着简洁讲明缘由； be occupied with sth./doing sth.忙于某事 /做某事 的运用表达了作者的语言功底, 不是用简洁的词汇 busy,可给评卷老师留下好印象；Not only but also 连接并列句,属于本书在 “写作基础 ”部分训练的句型；留意：not only 在句首,谓语动词要用倒装形式； gain some social experience的运用也表达了作者平常留意积存语言素材；运用了where 引导的定语从句修饰地点,使句式防止简洁化；places of interest名胜古迹 也运用得当；考生需留意积存,否就只能生造出中式英语；运用了 There is no doubt that毫无疑问 这样的万能句型；be badly in need of help急需帮忙 这一短语也使评卷老师眼前一亮；make a difference起作用、产生不同 这一短语也是增分点；本篇句句高级、词词地道,怎能不拿满分？名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 7 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 【模拟题 1】假设你是李华,前天是你的外国伴侣Anne 的生日；你本答应要参与她的生日聚会,但你当时正忙着预备期末考试,忘了赴约；请写封信向 Anne 表达你的歉意,说明缘由,并提出补救的方法；【参考范文】Dear Anne, I am indeed very sorry that I didn't attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you. But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Yours truly, Li Hua 【模拟题 2】假如你是李华,好伴侣Sarah邀请你去参与他的生日聚会,但由于弟弟突然生病,医生说需要住院 5 天左右,请写信给 Sarah表达未能和老伴侣一起给他庆 祝生日的歉意,并请 Sarah帮忙转达对伴侣们的问候；【优秀满分范文】Dear Sarah, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening. That is owing to（由于） the fact that （同位语从句） my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave. I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends. I have chosen a 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 8 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party. Cordially, （sincerely）Li Hua 【模拟题 3】假如你是新华中学的同学李华,上周在外教Mr. Jackson 的口语课上使用手机被老师发觉, 手机被收走； 请用英语给外教写一封赔礼信,内容应包括以下要点： 1表示歉意； 2说明上课使用手机的缘由；【参考范文】Dear Mr. Jackson, 3提出自己的恳求并适当表态；I m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student. I know any word might sound a made-up excuse. But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to find a part-time job last weekend that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered. Anyway, using a mobile phone in the classroom is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will not happen again. But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others. Will you be so kind to give it back to me. Thanks a million. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【模拟题 3】假设你是红星中学高三同学李华, 请给你的美国同学 Jim 写一封电子邮件,告知周末你不能参与他的生日聚会,期望他谅解；邮件的内容包括：名师归纳总结 1. 表达歉意；2. 说明理由；3. 告知已预备了生日礼物；第 9 页,共 10 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 【参考范文】Dear Jim, I m terribly sorry that I cant go to your birthday party this Saturday. My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon. My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up. So its a pity that I cant have fun witthen. I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well. By the way, I have bought the latest CD of Jay Chou for you as a birthday present and I will give it to you on Monday. Best wishes, Li Hua 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 10 页,共 10 页