2022年中考英语作文评分标准.docx

名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -英语作文评分标准评分原就 ：1. 总分 15 分,按 5 个档次给分；中档属于第三档（7-9 分）；2. 评分时,先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要 求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最终给分；3. 总词数不足的,可在此题总得分中扣去1 分；14. 评分时应留意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确 性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性；各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（分）,内容 9 分（其中要点 5 分,语意连贯 4 分）,语法结构、单词拼写、标点（ 4 分）,词数（ 1 分）；5. 拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度 予以考虑；【各档次的给分范畴和要求】第一档（ 13-15 分）：写出全部内容要点,语句流畅；基本无语法和词汇方面 的错误,少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致；词数达到要求； 基本无单词拼写及标点错误；其次档（ 10-12 分）：写出大部分要点类容；语句较流畅；有少量语法和词汇 方面的错误,但不影响懂得；有少量单词拼写及标点错误；第三档（ 7-9 分）：写出部分要点；语句基本通顺；有一些语法和词汇错误,有少量单词及标点错误；第四档（ 4-6 分）：写出少量内容要点,语句不通顺；语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多；只有少量句子表达正确；第五档（ 0-3 分）：基本上没有写出内容要点,语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较 多；基本上没有通顺的句子；只写出一些单词,不知所云；【说明 】1、要点可用不同方式表达；2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；凡不写任何内容,抄袭、所写内容无法看清者一律给 0 分；2022 河南中考英语作文猜测 一）1 每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程,从稚嫩走向成熟,从逆境走向胜利；请你用英语写一篇 80 词以上的短文,谈谈你在成长过程中所经受的最大的一次蜕变；内容要求： 1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？2.促成你转变的主要缘由是什么？ 3.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？留意：短文中不答应显现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息；I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now like to say I changed a lot. In fact, It is because of my mother diaries. One day I saw my mother diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was surprised and began to read my mother diaries. In her diaries, she 1 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 1 页,共 10 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn help crying after reading my mother diaries.Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I ll try to understand my mother sfeelings. 2 .最近,你们班就 “ 幸福是什么 ”进行了一次争论,同学们发表了自己的看法,他们认为： 1. 仔细学习是幸福,父母总是关怀他们的生活与健康,是幸福 2. 有时当他们做错了事,四周的人会帮忙他们改正,他们感到幸福；3. 你同意同学们的看法,你认为当你做 你也会感到幸福；要求：第三要点的内容需用三到四句话绽开合抱负象, 进行适当发挥； 词数 80 左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数；Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness. I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too. When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us. 3. “安全你我他,幸福千万家”,关爱生命,确保平安,让我们的生活更加幸福安康；请以 “ Keeping safe_ at home/ at school /on the road 为题写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文；要求：补全标题：条理清楚,语言流畅；文中不得显现真实姓名、校名；内容 包括：1 Is it important to keep safe.2 Why do you think so., 3How can you be safe. Keeping safe at school It important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live mo re happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.First, be in order wh en we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doi helpful ng sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. It to us. If we follow the advice, well make ourselves safe at school. 4. 醉酒驾车,已经成为严峻的社会问题,越来越受到人们的关注,依据下面提示,写一篇 80 词左右的短文,谈谈你的看法；现 很多人不遵守交通规章,仍酒后驾车,对自己和他人的安全不负责任象后 由于酒后驾车,给自己和他人和很多家庭带来损害果建 为了自己和他人的安全,呼吁司机不要酒后驾车,呼吁更多严格的规章议 和制度出台提 示 词 ： 酒 后 驾 车drunk driving 不 负 责 的 irresponsible 交 通 事故 traffic accident 对 造成损害 do harm toEveryone should obey the traffic rules. Yet there are still many people drunk driving.2 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 2 页,共 10 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -It irresponsible不负责任的 not only to the drivers themselves but also the others. Many drivers drive very fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk. Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents. Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year. In order to keep the public safe, we shouldn t drunk drive. We must obey the traffic rules. If you drink too much, you shouldn't drive by yourself. Youd better take a taxi or ask others for help. The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible. 5. Keep Healthy Every one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we dontpay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the mornin g. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at w eekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke. It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning . We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy. ” 为题写 6. 以“ I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）篇不少于 60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格； ）（留意：短文中不得显现考生的姓 名、校名及其他相关信息,否就不予评分；）I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean. "But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmates to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple. 7. 全国实施公共场所禁烟规定,针对这一话题,某中学对该校同学的吸烟情形 进行了一次调查,结果如下列图；请就此话题用英语写一篇短文；要求： 1. 对调查结果进行描述；2说明自己的看法并提出建议；3词数在 80 左右；提示词 : do a survey about 做一个有关 的调查 3% of the students 百分之三的同学 A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. Thats terrible. As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. Its a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking. In short, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it. 8. 目前,越来越多的中同学利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教；对于这一 现象,存在两种不同观点：有些人认为有必要 另一些人认为没有必要3 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 3 页,共 10 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -跟老师学比自己学好可以巩固课堂所学内容可以学到更多的东西 简单养成依靠习惯同学需要时间休息请您依据以上提示,以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary . 为题,写一篇 120 词左右的短文,反映表中内容,并简要阐述自己的观点；文章开头 已给出,不计入总字数；要求：层次清楚,连贯流畅；表达敏捷,不要逐字逐句翻译；参考词汇：巩固 strengthen；Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary. More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it._ _ _ _ 【参考范文】Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary. More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it. Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, its more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe its OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money. 9. 最近,你班同学就“ 父母是不是最好的老师” 这一话题绽开了争论；有些人 认为父母是最好的老师,有些人认为也不尽然；请依据下表提示,写一篇短文介绍争论结果以及你的个人观点；观点缘由 同意 不完全同意1 教会如何生活 过分溺爱 2 指出缺点,指明方向 强加爱好、价值观 3 教会富有爱心 期望值过高 要求： 1、依据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文通顺连贯；2、词数 110左右；3、开头已给出,不计入单词总数；【参考范文】Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. Whats more, parentslove helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are 4 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 4 页,共 10 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -their most important teachers. However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach. In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap. 10. 新农村 -A New Village Yesterday we went to visit a village. On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of nice rice, vegetables and fruit in the fields. Also we saw new schools, factories and buildings. We got a warm welcome at the village. Some farmers invited us to their houses. They had moved to the new buildings. Their living room was large and bright. In it there were all kinds of new furniture. Nearly every family had color TV sets, fridges,washing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes. Everyone had a smile on their faces. It was said that some guests from a foreign country would come to visit it. We were very glad to find the farmers' life will become better and better. life had changed a lot. We hope their 11. 很多学习生活中的苦恼都会使人产生压力 ,为了更好地发觉及解决同学们中 存在的心理压力问题 ,你们班特意开展了一次以 "Less Pressure, Better Life"为主 题的英语演讲竞赛 ,请你预备发言稿 ,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好方法 ,与同学分 享,内容包括 : 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；我的压力是什么；我是如何胜利缓解我的压力的；留意：文中不得显现真实的姓名和校名；出不计入总词数 ；词数 80100；短文的开头已给Less Pressure, Better Life s world. Students in Hello, boys and girls. Pressure is a serious problem in todayour class are under too much pressure. _ That s all. Thank you. 参考范文 : Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls. Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our cla ss are under too much pressure. Some students canothers may worry about their exams. t get on well with their classmates, while I m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That s all. Thank you.12. 你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？一名受欢迎的老师应当有什么样的特点环绕这个主题,用英语写一篇80 词左右的短文；5 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 5 页,共 10 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -The Good Teacher in Your Heart Firstly, a teacher should be able to play different roles in school. He can care about us like a mother. He can give us knowledge. He can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend. Secondly, a teacher should be patient and helpful. When we are in trouble, he can always help us patiently. Thirdly, a teacher should be fair. He should have the same rules for everybody. Fourthly, a teacher should be fun. He can make his class interesting and make us laugh. 13.爱是心中的太阳, 融解你我身边的冰雪； 假设你是李明, 你们学校的 “ English Garden” 正在举办主题为 “ 付出即是收成 ” 的征文活动,请你联系自己平常的爱心 行为和感受写一篇文章投稿； 要求：1.文中不得显现真实人名和校名等相关信息；2. 80100 词；标题和文章开头已给出,不计入总词数；Giving is Receiving I am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me. 中考英语书面表达背诵范文（二）一、 Great changes in my hometown More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life . Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government s efforts . My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful . 二、Save the earthHow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world . It s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. 6 We shouldn t leave rubbish 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 6 页,共 10 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better . 三、 Improve our environment Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment . We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fiel