24写作-上海市2021年中考英语真题&模拟卷分题型分类汇编(共17题).docx
24写作-上海市2021年中考英语真题也模拟卷分题型分类汇编一.提纲作文(共17小题)1. (2021 上海)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一 篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant):球类(Ball Games) 演讲(Speech)器乐(Inslrumenlal Music)戏剧(Drama)手工(Handicrafts)摄影(Photography)假设你是李华,请给教导处张老师写封信,结合你的兴趣和特长,说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助 手及理由。(注意:(1)信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。)(2021 嘉定区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少 于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们,不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中,我们也会碰到很多项选择择。请以T chose to”为题,结合自身的经历,说说你是怎么做的?你为什么会做出这样的选择? The following is for reference only choose to be / do, make up my mind, encourage me to(注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。)(2021上海二模)Write at least 60 words on the topic "In three years, time"(以"三年以后” 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)你是否想象过,三年以后你的生活或周围的世界会发生怎样的变化?你对三年以后的自己或周围的世界有 怎样的期待?你能为此做些什么?2. (2021 宝山区二模)Mile at least 60 words about the topic "made me a better person”. (请以使我成为更好的自己为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或某个人使我们发现了自己 的潜力与天赋;使我们由依赖到独立,敢于选择、敢于承当责任;使我们勇于面对未知,尝试新经验,主 动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历,谈谈什么促使你成为更好的自己,你又在哪些方面做 出了改变。3. (2021 青浦区二模)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "A valuable lesson” (请以珍贵的一课为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)提示:在学习与生活中,我们会因为经历一些事情,获得体验,增加阅历,吸取教训。请以珍贵的一课”第1页共13页 take exercise there. There is a smal 1 kindergarten behind Block 3. (介绍理由)It is convenient and comfortable for me to live there.【高分句型二】What a wonderful place it is! I love my housing estate very much.11. (2021 黄浦区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不 少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)在生活中,要取得成就,往往需要勇气。你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难,成认错误,拒绝他人,或者克 服恐惧。你是如何理解勇气的呢?请以I have the courage to(我有勇气),为题,结合自己的经 历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。【解答】I have the courage to overcome nervousnessIn our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more conf ident.(对勇敢的理解)I used to be afraid of speaking in public.【高分句型一 I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher, s encouragement, I entered for i t and made ful 1 preparations for i t. Luckily, I finished i t smooth 1 y. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now 1 have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.【高分句型二】(自己的经历)Don't let the fear take you. Just step forward and you wi 11 find you can do it!(总结全文) 12. (2021奉贤区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不 少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)王老师是你们学校的一名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写一份信给他。你可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。(注意:(1)短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名等个人信息.否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。)【解答】Mr Wang,Time flies so quickly. The teaching building of the school has been rebuilt. It was surrounded by trees and flowers. My home is far from my school. I usually go to school by bus. I start school at eight in the morning and finish school at four in the afternoon.(到校及作息介绍)I have six classes every day. In the morning, I have four classes from eight to twelve. In the afternoon, we have two classes from two thirty to four. I can learn Chinese, maths, English, P. E. and so on. I like English best because it is interesting.【高分句型一】(简单课程介绍)I have lunch at school because my home is far from my school.【高分句型一I am crazy about DIY. For example, I like to make fruit salad. First, peel two bananas and cut them up. Then, put them in the blender ,第10页共13页and then pour the milk into the blender. Turn on the blender. Finally, You can enjoy the frui t salad.(学校活动)My school life is so wonderful that we all feel very happy at school.【高分句型二】(对学 校生活的感受)YoursXXX 13. (2021 杨浦区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given "_has changed me”.(以_改变了 我为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)世间瞬息万变,凡事都在变化,都在开展,我 们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活 方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历,谈一谈自己的改变。(注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 【解答】Music has changed meEveryone has his own hobby, it may give him lots of happiness.(点题)My hobby is 1 istening to music. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon music, though I wasn't good at it,【高分句型一】I often lost myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable. When I am angry wi th something , it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.【高分句型二】(提供自己的经历和看法)Do you 1 ike 1 istening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial. (总结全文)(2021静安区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation (根据所给情境写一篇不 少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)。美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室工程,在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣 有益的工程,并给你留下了深刻的印象。请以"Making learning fun (乐中学)”为题,提供你的经历或感想。注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。【解答】Making learning funLet me tell you my school activity - Learning Lei Feng.【高分句型一】(引出话题)We , the volunteers , went to the Nursing Home and did many things for the old people there. When the old people saw us , they were very happy. Wc gave them lots of flowers and fruits. Wc did cleaning for them. After that we chatted with them. We talked very happily. Some of us sang great songs for them. And others danced. The old people told us stories. We wished them good luck. All of us had 第11页共13页a wonderful time there.(具体的活动)I felt happy that I cared for the old people and showed our respect to them. If I have another chance to go there , I will take it.【高分句型二】(感想)(2021闵行区二模)Write at least 60 words on the topicMy funniest fami 1 y memory”(根据 提示,以我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格.)提示:回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历,描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿,并 谈谈感想。注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。【解答】My funniest family memoryWhen I was in grade six, I was very shy and timid. My mother encouraged me to make a speech in front of the class.【高分句型一】 I tried my best to prepare for it and practiced it many times. My father and mother played the audience. But I'm still a little nervous. Just then, my pet cat ran up to me and sat there. Seeing the attention, I suddenly relaxed and began my speech. Finally, I succeeded in making it. (提供故事)My cat was so lovely that it changed my 1 ife.【高分句型二】It made me become more confident.(感受)(2021普陀区二模)Write at least 60 words on the topic "_has won my respect”(以赢得了我的尊敬为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)提示:Aunt Sandy用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心这你的成长? 请先补全标题,再结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感受。【解答】My father has won my respectThe one I respect most is my father.(点明我最尊敬的人)First, he is very strong, he makes me feel very safe. Secondly, he is good at many things such as basketball and ping - pong.【高 分句型一】I think he plays ping - pong as well as Wang Hao. Thirdly, he is very popular in our big family, everyone in my family loves my father very much. The most important of al 1, he is a great father, he loves me and my mother a lot, he also helps me a lot.(尊敬的原因以及对 我的影响)I do think he is as great as a superman.【高分句型二】I respect him!(感想) 17. (2021 金山区二模)Write at least 60 words on the topicKeep your mind open".(以"敞开心 扉/心胸开阔”为题,写一篇至少60个单词的短文,标点符号不占格.)在生活中,你对你的生活满意吗?不满意的话,是什么原因呢?如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物, 从不同的角度去思考问题,可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、 乐于接受各种顺境或逆境的。(注意:短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否那么不予评分。)第12页共13页【解答】If we can keep our minds open to di fferent people or things, we may get unexpected harvest. 【高分句型一】(点题)Last week, my good friend Lucy got a good grade in her English exam. But mine was very poor. I felt very sad. However, she always talks about the Engl ish test. It makes me annoyed. But I didn, t tell her how I felt. Later, I told my mother about it. My mother encouraged me to talk to Lucy and tell her how I felt. 【高分句型二】My mother said that friends should keep their minds open to each other. The next day, I shared my feelings with Lucy. She suddenly realized that she had not thought about my feelings and apologized for it. She thanked me for keeping my mind open to her.(提供自己的故事)第13页共13页 为题,结合你的经历,谈谈你的感受。6. (2021浦东新区模拟)Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topicHeret s a new start”. (请以"这是一个新的开始”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的作文,标点符号不占格。)提示:岁月的长河中,我们所做的每件事情,都如同随手洒下的种子,在时光的滋润下,那些种子慢慢的 生根、发芽、抽枝、开花,最终结出属于自己的果实。人的生命只有一次,但生活可以每天不同。你有了 什么新的开始呢?你为此做了什么准备呢?打算怎么努力或改变呢?请结合自身经历,谈谈你的感受。(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否那么不予评分)(2021浦东新区二模)Write at least 60 words about the topic A (n) with love” (请以"爱的"为题,写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格)在上文中,祖母收到的生日礼物包含了祖父对她真挚的爱。我们的生活也充满了爱,我们一定收到过带有 满满爱意的物品。请你提供一下关于这个物品的故事,并谈谈你的感受或它对你的影响。注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。7. (2021 长宁区二模)Write at least 60 words about the topic "Keep patient when facing difficulties(请以面对困难保持耐心”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)阅读文章(C)篇告诉我们日常生活中不能缺乏耐心,还提出用2种方式来帮助我们克服这样的缺点。在 我们的生活和学习中遇到的各种困难也很容易使人失去耐心,请你以一个具体的例子谈谈怎样面对困难保 持耐心。8. (2021徐汇区二模)Suppose you are interested in dearMars Project, and you send an e - mail to dearMarsproject©*. com based on one of the given situations.Situation 1: You want to be one of the crew members to the Mars. You write to apply for a seat in the rocket.Situation 2: You want to know more about the project, hoping to get more detailed information.假设你对dearMars的工程感兴趣,你选择所给情境之一完成一封发送给dearMarsproject©*. com的电 子邮件(不少于60词).(注意:邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否那么不予评分。标点符号不占格)Dear dearMars Project,Yours sincerely,XXX9. (2021虹口区二模)Write at least 60 words on the topic "I'd like to get close to ” (以我想要走近为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)人的一生会遇见很多美好的事物,人、物、景等各种美好的存在都会吸引我们走进。请写写你想走近什么? 怎么走近?说说你的理由。10. (2021黄浦区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不 第2页共13页少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)在生活中,要取得成就,往往需要勇气。你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难,成认错误,拒绝他人,或者克 服恐惧。你是如何理解勇气的呢?请以"I have the courage to”(我有勇气),为题,结合自己的经 历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。11. (2021奉贤区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不 少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)王老师是你们学校的名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写份信给他。你可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。(注意:(1)短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名等个人信息.否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。)(2021杨浦区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given "_has changed me*.(以_改变了 我为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)世间瞬息万变,凡事都在变化,都在开展,我 们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活 方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历,谈一谈自己的改变。(注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。12. (2021静安区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation (根据所给情境写一篇不 少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)。美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室工程,在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣 有益的工程,并给你留下了深刻的印象。请以"Making learning fun (乐中学)”为题,提供你的经历或感想。注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。13. (2021闵行区二模)Write at least 60 words on the topic"My funniest family memory”(根据 提示,以"我最有趣的家庭回忆为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格.)提示:问忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历,描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿,并 谈谈感想。注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。14. (2021普陀区二模)Write at least 60 words on the topic "_has won my respect"(以"赢得了我的尊敬”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)提示:Aunt Sandy用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心这你的成长? 请先补全标题,再结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感受。15. (2021金山区二模)Write at least 60 words on the topic,zKeep your mind open*.(以“敞开心 第3页共13页扉/心胸开阔为题,写一篇至少60个单词的短文,标点符号不占格.)在生活中,你对你的生活满意吗?不满意的话,是什么原因呢?如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物, 从不同的角度去思考问题,可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、 乐于接受各种顺境或逆境的。(注意:短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否那么不予评分。)第4页共13页参考答案与试题解析一.提纲作文(共17小题)1. (2021上海)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一 篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(leaching assistant):球类(Ball Games)演讲(Speech)器乐(Instrumental Music)戏剧(Drama)手工(Handicrafts)摄影(Photography)假设你是李华,请给教导处张老师写封信,结合你的兴趣和特长,说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助 手及理由。(注意:(1)信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。)【解答】Dear Mr Zhang,I want to work in Instrumental Music as an assistant.(写信目的)As for me, I prefer Instrumental Music. YouAs for me, I prefer Instrumental Music. Youknow I have learnt piano for manyyears. And I want to learn more about musicyears. And I want to learn more about musicfrom others.【高分句型一】What/s more,I can make more friends sharing the sameI can make more friends sharing the sameinterest with me. Life in senior highevery day. Therefore, that will be aschool is quite different. We are so busy good chance for us to relax ourselves.(介绍自己)I am looking forward to hearing from you.【高分句型二】Yours,Li Hua2. (2021嘉定区二模)Write at least 60 words on the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少 于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们,不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中,我们也会碰到很多项选择择。请以T chose to为题,结合自身的经历,说说你是怎么做的?你为什么会做出这样的选择?The following is for reference only, choose to be / do, make up my mind encourage me to(注意:(1)短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否那么不予评分。(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。)第5页共13页【解答】I chose to be a reporterEveryone has a dream and my dream is to be a reporter. Because I wou1d like to see different people and I can make friends with more people. 【高分句型一What's more, I can tell people the truth about something popular.(我的梦想及原因)What can I do to become a reporter? I want to write articles for magazines or newspapers.【高分句型二】(打算)When I finish high school I wcint to go to college in Beijing. Because I think I can learn more there.(毕业后的打算) 3. (2021上海二模)Write at least 60 words on the topic "In three years' time"(以"三年以后” 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)你是否想象过,三年以后你的生活或周围的世界会发生怎样的变化?你对三年以后的自己或周围的世界有 怎样的期待?你能为此做些什么?【解答】In three years' timeThe world is changing fast. I believe that my life will be different in three years* time. 【高 分句型一】(点题)On one hand, it will be more convenient, wc can study at home. Whether wo go to school or stay at home depends on our choices. On the other hand, the environment may become worse especially white pollution. Sadly, the number of people who like to throw rubbish everywhere is still rising.【高分句型二】I hope the world will be more beautiful.(怎样的变 化)To achieve this, I need to 1 earn more knowledge about how to protect the environment. Cal 1 on more people to take part in fighting against pollution. Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.(做些什么)(2021 宝山区二模)Write at least 60 words about the topic "made me a better person”. (请以”使我成为更好的自己为题,写一篇不少于6()个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某次经历或某个人使我们发现了自己 的潜力与天赋;使我们由依赖到独立,敢丁选择、敢丁承当责任;使我们勇丁面对未知,尝试新经验,主 动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历,谈一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己,你乂在哪些方面做 出了改变。【解答】Understanding other people makes me a better personAs is known to all, everyone is a special unity that has his own mind and story. When facing the similar circumstances, they may make different choices. Every decision we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others. So it is very important to understand others especially when we get along with other people.【高分句型一】(点题,生活中应理解他人)There are several reasons. First, understanding can avoid quarrels among people. If we put ourselves第6页共13页in other people* s shoes, we can understand others better, which can avoid misunderstandings that may break other people* s heart. Second, understanding is also a self - cultivation. Everyone has their own difficulties, which means that we can't impose our minds on other people.(为什么 要理解他人)I cilways remind myself of understanding others and from what we have d