人教版英语必修五unit1建议信.ppt

cholera in the moviebrainstorm If there is a cholera disease in your city,as a doctor,what suggestions will you give to the local people to prevent cholera?Role play:see a doctor A as doctor B as local people please make a dialogue and write down your advice.劝说建议信劝说建议信persuasive letter 篇章结构 劝说信以书信的形式劝说信以书信的形式劝说收信人接受或放弃劝说收信人接受或放弃某一种某一种想法、观点、提议或行动。想法、观点、提议或行动。有时还提出自己的建议有时还提出自己的建议并并让对方采取进一步的行动让对方采取进一步的行动1.开头（the beginning）交代写信的目的：劝说别人。（一般用一句话）2.中间（the body）理由（展开First Second.Third.）3.结尾（the ending）希望听从劝告【常用句型常用句型】模板模板 Para11.Im writing to persuade/advise you not to.我写信是要劝你我写信是要劝你 2.I am writing to express my views about 我写信来是要表达我关于我写信来是要表达我关于 的想法的想法 Para2 Para21.If I were you,I would.如果我是你，如果我是你，我会我会 2.It seems to me that you could 我认为你可以我认为你可以 3.First of all,I think it would be better if.首先，我想如果你能首先，我想如果你能 会更好会更好4.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 我想如果你能我想如果你能 会更有利会更有利 Para31.I believe you will take my advice into consideration.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。我相信你会考虑我的建议的。2.I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.我希望你觉得这些建议有用我希望你觉得这些建议有用/有帮助。有帮助。【写作模板】Dear _,Im writing to persuade you to _.First of all,I think it would be better if _.Secondly,_.Last but not least,_.I hope you will take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.Look forward to your reply.Yours,_ 例文 假设你是李华，你的好友李明在交友假设你是李华，你的好友李明在交友过程中遇到了困难。请你根据以下提示过程中遇到了困难。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信，给他提出一些建用英语给他写一封信，给他提出一些建议。议。1.帮他分析原因。帮他分析原因。2.给他提出建议给他提出建议 3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。陈述你帮助他的具体打算。4.100个词左右。个词左右。第一步：第一步：审题审题养成重养成重视审题视审题的的习惯习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的思考的问题问题样题样题分析分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的文章的题题材是什么？材是什么？要写的文章主要写的文章主题题是什么是什么(topic)怎怎样样安排信息点的安排信息点的顺顺序？序？(order)动动作是什么作是什么时时候候发发生的？生的？(时态时态)(when)第二人称第二人称一封信一封信好友李明在交友过程中遇好友李明在交友过程中遇到了困难，给其建议到了困难，给其建议 说理逻辑性说理逻辑性现在时现在时第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型 1.词汇：词汇：(1).很难与他人交流很难与他人交流 have trouble/difficult in communicating with others (2).感到孤独感到孤独 feel lonely (3).采纳下面的建议采纳下面的建议 adopt the following advice/suggestions (4).了解他人的兴趣了解他人的兴趣 learn about their interest/hobbies 第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型 1.词汇：词汇：(5).积极参与积极参与 be active to take part in/actively take part in(6).耐心听他人说话耐心听他人说话 be patient to listen to others (7).随着时间的流逝随着时间的流逝 as time goes by/with time going by(8).和和交朋友交朋友 make friends with (1).你在信中说，你与别人交流时有困难。你在信中说，你与别人交流时有困难。A.In your letter,you said you were not good at communicating with others.B.In your letter,you said you had difficulty/trouble in communicating with others.C.In your letter,you said it was hard to communicate with others.2.句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译 (2).我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下几我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下几点建议。点建议。A.I believe you can just overcome it so long as you can adopt the following advice.B.I think you can get over it_ so long as you can follow/take the advice.2.句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译(3).在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极表达自己的观点。表达自己的观点。A.In a class discussion,youd better actively take part in it and express your views/opinions actively.B.When taking part in a class discussion,you should take part in it and tell others what you think actively.C.You should participate in the discussion positively and make your voice heard actively.2.句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译(4).这样你就可以结识更多的人。这样你就可以结识更多的人。A.In this way,you can make friends with more people.B.Then you can make acquaintance with more people.2.句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译(5).必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主意。必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主意。A.It will also be a good idea to help others when necessary.B.It is also a good idea that you can help others when necessary.2.句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译Dear Li Ming,In your letter,you said you are not good at communicate with others and often feel lonely.I think you can just make it so long you can follow the advices below.First,you should learn about your classmates like and dislikes.Second,you should take an active part in the discussion hold in your class and show your own opinion active,and at the same time,learned to listen to others people patiently.Then you can make friends with more people.Third,it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.With time going on,people will know you good and like to make friends with us if you can do the above.I hope you will find these ideas practical.Yours,Li hua communicatingadvicelikesheldlearnbetterlong 后加后加asyouactivelyPeople 删掉删掉Dear Li Ming,In your letter,you said you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely.I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below.First,you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes.Second,you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively,and at the same time,learn to listen to others patiently.Then you can make friends with more people.Third,it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.With time going on,people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours,Li hua 实战演练实战演练:假如你是李明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健假如你是李明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到很难过。请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长同意开通教室内很难过。请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长同意开通教室内的网络。的网络。注意：注意：1.词数：词数：120左右；左右；2.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。3.信中要包括下表中的所有内容：信中要包括下表中的所有内容：建议学校开通网络的原因：建议学校开通网络的原因：1.有利于查找资料；有利于查找资料；2.浏览新闻，开阔视野；浏览新闻，开阔视野；broaden our horizons3.作为高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力。作为高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力。our sense of judgmentDear Headmaster,Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming