四川省南充市2019-2022三年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编：书面表达专题.docx

四川省南充市2019-2022三年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编 书面表达专题四川省南充市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末英语试题第二节 书面表达 (满分25 分)假如你是红星中学学生李华。得知英国好友Jim 在他们学校运动会的接力赛 (the relay race)中摔倒, 导致腿部骨折, 请你用英文写一封邮件给他, 内容包括：1. 表示慰问;2. 康复建议。注意： 1. 词数100左右。2. 开头语和结语已给出, 不计入总词数。Dear Jim, _Yours, Li Hua四川省南充市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末英语试题第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是光明中学高二学生李华，你校将举行庆祝建校20周年音乐晚会。请写封邮件邀 请外教Allen参加，内容包括：1.时间、地点（周日晚上7:00-9:00,学校操场）；2.活动安排（校长致辞、政府祝贺、节目表演）；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Allen,How has everything been recently?Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua四川省南充市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末英语试题第二节 书面表达52.假如你是南充市某中学高二学生李华，最近你班对“中学生是否应该在网上交友”展开了讨论，同学们持不同意见。请你根据以下要点提示，给中学生英文报“Teens”写一篇短文，讲述讨论情况并发表自己的看法。1.赞成。理由：表达思想、学习外语。2.不赞成。理由：浪费时间、上当受骗。3.你的看法：注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。3.可增加适当细节，以使行文连贯。Dear editor,Recently, our class held a heated discussion about whether we middle school students should make friends online. Opinions are divided among the students._Yours sincerely,Li Hua 参考答案四川省南充市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末英语试题第二节书面表达(满分 25 分)【参考范文】Dear Jim, I am so sorry to hear that you broke your leg in a terrible fall during the relay race. Please don't feel too distressed about your injury. Given your health condition and age, I believe you'll soon be well. As for how to speed your recovery, I'd like to share some advice from my own experience, Without doubt, it is necessary to follow your doctor's advice and take your medicine on time. What's more, a healthy diet, low in fat and high in protein and vitamins, contributes a lot to your recovery. Additionally, proper regular exercise is beneficial to your health improvement after enough rest. If you need any help, do not hesitate to ask, Wish you a speedy recovery. Yours, Li Hua一、各档次评分参考标准档次给分范围语言要点表达情况划档依据第五档2125要点齐全, 语言基本无误, 行文连贯, 表达清楚第四档1620包含绝大部分要点, 语言有少量错误, 行文基本连贯, 表达基本清楚第三档1115包含多数要点, 语言有一些错误, 尚能表达第二档610只涉及少数要点, 语言错误很多, 影响表达第一档05只能写出与要求内容有关的一些单词二、扣分参考依据1. 其表达未能达成正确句意的, 不给分, 如： 写出了主语或谓语等关键词, 但未能达成符合 要点要求、意义正确的句子。 2. 句子结构完整、但关键点出现错误或漏掉部分关键词, 扣半个要点分, 如： 主谓一致错 误, 或关键词拼写错误(如主语, 关键性名词等), 或谓语动词时态/语态错误等： 3. 凡使用铅笔答题、或答题中使用了涂改液或不干胶条, 一律不给分; 4. 凡多次出现非关健性单词拼写错误或其它同类错误, 原则上每4 处扣1 分： 5. 文章内容要点全面, 但写出了一些多余内容(连接或过渡词句不在此列), 原则上不扣分： 6. 凡书写超出规定的答题区域, 全卷不给分; 7. 书写潦草凌乱、但基本不影响阅卷的, 酌情扣卷面分12 分。四川省南充市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末英语试题One possible version Dear Allen, How has everything been recently? In order to celebrate the 20th anniversary of the founding, our school will hold a music evening this Sunday evening on the school playground. And Im writing in sincerity to invite you to join us. At 7:00 pm, the opening ceremony will start with a speech delivered by our headmaster. Then, some congratulations from local government will be offered on the great achievements we have made in the past decade. Finally, there will be a variety of fantastic performances played both by us talented students and by our honored teachers. I would be appreciative if you could accept my invitation. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our evening. Im looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua四川省南充市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末英语试题【答案】Dear editor,Recently, our class held a heated discussion about whether we middle school students should make friends online. Opinions are divided among the students.Some students say yes. They express their reasons as follows. To begin with, they can express their feelings and thoughts freely. Besides, chatting on line is also helpful for our language study.However, others hold the opposite view. They argue that making friends online is a waste of time, which should be spent on study. In addition, some students may get cheated online.In my opinion, every coin has two sides. On one hand, we students should place our study, health and safety before other things and wed better develop friendship with our classmates. On the other hand, making online friends is not a bad thing if were careful enough. Anyway, the Internet broadens our horizons and enriches our knowledge.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达要求给英文报写一篇短文【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇短文：假如你是南充市某中学高二学生李华，最近你班对“中学生是否应该在网上交友”展开了讨论，同学们持不同意见。请你根据以下要点提示，给中学生英文报“Teens”写一篇短文，讲述讨论情况并发表自己的看法。1.赞成。理由：表达思想、学习外语。.不赞成。理由：浪费时间、上当受骗。3.你的看法：注意时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：hold a heated discussion（进行了热烈的讨论）；make friends online（在网上交朋友）；a waste of time（浪费时间）；develop friendship with our classmates（与同学发展友谊）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。our class held a heated discussion about whether we middle school students should make friends online.句中使用whether引导的宾语从句；chatting on line is also helpful for our language study.句中动名词作主语；On the other hand, making online friends is not a bad thing if were careful enough.句中if引导条件状语从句；另外，To begin with, Besides, However, In addition, In my opinion, On the other hand,等的运用为文章增色添彩。学科网（北京）股份有限公司