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第19讲高中新题型之书面表达（四）读后续写题型解读与解题技巧题型解读第一局部读后续写考试要求和评分标准读后续写的要求读后续写任务要求考生在一段350词以内的语言材料基础上，根据该材料内容、所给段 落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右）,将其开展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、 情节和结构完整的短文。续写局部分为两段。原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语， 所续写短文应使用5个以上。二：考查的能力读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查学生的综合语言运用能力。与 应用文不同，故事续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情 节衔接的能力。主要聚焦在以下四个方面：1 .是把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解给定短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文 表现出来。2 .是语言运用的准确性和丰富性。期望学生在词汇和语言结构的使用方面准确、恰当，能够根据内容需要使用较为高级的词汇 和语言结构，阅卷老师会感觉这个学生很有水平。3,是对语篇结构的把控能力。考查学生对上下文逻辑关系的掌握情况，希望学生续写的短文 语句连贯、有序。4 ,是创造性思维能力。这是对学生续写短文内容得要求，期望学生续写的短文具有较丰富的内容。该试题具有一定 的开放性，要求学生详细和生动地描述情景、态度和感情，符合课程标准的要求和学生的能 力水平。三：读后续写的特征考试说明中评分原那么局部规定，读后续写阅卷时按5个档次给分。参考最高档次第五档 （21-25分）的描述并考虑写作局部评分的其它因素，可以认为一篇优秀的读后续写具备以 下特征：1 .内容丰富充实，与所给短文融洽连贯；后续情节一般为故事的高潮或延续，是原作者声 音的延续、态度的延伸，因此，要尽量符合原文思路，并求得与读者的心理共鸣，让读者回 味无穷。2 .连接成分应用得当，寻求前文与续写段段首句之间的内在联系，站在作者的角度，设计 并开展情节，想象要合理，情节要连贯。Paragraph 2:After the rescue team caught and took the snake away, everyone went inside the home.【答案】Possible version 1:As Roman was farther from the snake, he jumped to the window and grabbed the curtain. He pulled it so hard that the curtain was torn off immediately. Without hesitation, he threw the curtain at the moving snake and covered it. Then he grabbed the two extremely frightened kids' arms and pushed them out of the room. The moment the kids went out, they started screaming. Roman went inside the room again and brought his mom out, who was standing still, frozen with fear. Later, he called the rescue team.After the rescue team caught and took away the snake, everyone went inside the home. Everything returned to normal except that the two kids were still scared. Roman felt guilty and even angry with himself. How could he have thrown the snake to two kids? But for the quick action, it would have hurt them! He went up to the kids, patting them on the head, and said carefuHyJTm so sorry. I mistook it fbr a fake one. Well.” After a short pause, he said in an excited voice, "Shall we play some game together now?” The kids burst into a smile. "What a thrilling day!” Roman texted his friend later that day.Possible version 2:As Roman was farther from the snake, he jumped to the window and grabbed the curtain. He pulled it so hard that the curtain ended up landing in his hand. Then without waiting a second, he threw the curtain over the snake. When the snake came under the curtain, he grabbed the kids' hands and brought them out of the room. He again went inside and took his mother to the front yard. Mom was shaking like a leaf and the kids were sweating hard. Later, he called the rescue team from his cell phone.After the rescue team caught and took away the snake, everyone went inside the home. Roman went back to his room and tried to sleep, but couldn't, so he went to the living room where he found his brother was watching cartoons. He sat next to his brother and his cell phone beeped. It was another text from his friend asking how his day was. Roman slowly typed: "Jaw-breaking day”. Then he kept his mobile aside and dragged his brother's head to his chest and started to play with his hair gently. Then he whispered something in his ear that sounded something like “Sorry”.Text 2（2022.黑龙江大庆实验中学高一开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语 续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the pomdge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.【答案】 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect. The children said loudly, "Happy Mother's Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.Text 3（2021辽宁沈阳高一开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。This past summer, I joined my sistefs family for their annual Adirondack vacation in a rented cottage on a lake, the same place my family has stayed since I was a little kid. There are plenty of activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and sand castle building on the beach.By the third day, I had noticed that my ten-year-old niece, Jannie, had spent most of her time watching cable TV and browsing through the gift shops in town. Not exactly the wilderness experience I remembered from my youth. So, at dinner, I told Jannie we should hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning, which was called Rocky Point because the peak is bare and rock-covered."Well." replied Jannie, "Tomorrow there are some shows on the Disney Channel, so I'm going to be pretty busy.1'"When your mother and I used to come here when we were your age, we were too busy swimming and hiking up mountains.n"Sounds more like punishment than a vacation.'* She shrugged her shoulders. nBesides, I don*t think I can walk that far.',When I said it only took a half-hour of steady walking to get to the top. She grumbled, "Fine, Fil go.n I knew she was agreeing just to shut me up, but I would take anything I could get.The next morning was a perfect day for a hike, with sunshine and clear skies. I got up early and took some sandwiches and water bottles, which I tucked into my backpack along with the bug spray and the camera.Jannie came shuffling downstairs, sighed dramatically, rolled her eyes and announced in a very unenthusiastic, robot-like voice. "I'm ready to go hiking, Uncle David.n Anyway, we climbed into my car and drove to the trailhead about ten minutes away. As we stood at the edge of the parking lot and looked down the shaded trail that led into the woods. nI am still not sure this is a good idea, but if you and Mom could do it, I can too, I guess.'1 注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2 ,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:For the moment she was determined to start our journey.Paragraph 2:A while later we did it to the top.【答案One possible version:For the moment she was determined to start our journey. About 200 yards into the forest, the trail began to climb a steep slope. I pointed out some rarely-seen trees and flowering plants, which I explained were endangered species. She didn't share my enthusiasm. She was thirsty, tired, sweaty and bored. I handed her the water bottle as she sat on a fallen log and took a break. "You know, I think we're almost to the top J I told her. "You already said that three times, and we're not there yet." she replied. She grumbled another complain as we continued on. She might not have been happy, but at least I was proud that she had the determination not to quit before we reached the top.A while later we did make it to the top. Jannie looked up, noticing we were no longer under the trees. When she stopped, looked around and saw where we were, her jaw dropped, her eyes opened wide and she shouted: "Oh, I don't believe it. We're on top of the world. It's awesome!” A refreshing breeze brushed the mountaintop, not a cloud was in the sky and miles and miles of trees and lakes spread out below us. We sat on a large rock and took it in the view, while eating our sandwiches and pointing out islands and roads and, of course, the cottage where we were staying. It had taken us almost an hour to make the climb, but it was worth it.真题初体验（2021新高考I卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect. The children said loudly, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.（2021新高考II卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother's Day!" Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.3 .使用并用下划线标示5个以上短文中标出的关键词语；4 .词汇丰富高级，语法准确多变(主被动句式、各类从句、特殊句式、非谓语动词等的使 用情况灵活恰当、不拘一