2023年统考版高考英语总复习 写作小册.docx

写作层级训练英语写作层级训练层级一各司其职的8大句子成分句子由各个组成局部构成，这些组成局部叫作句子成分。句子成分可分为主语、谓语、 宾语、表语、定语、状语、补语和同位语等。学生只有明白了句子成分，才能真正地理解句 子，读懂文章的含义。美句输入一、主语句子的主体主语是句子的主体，用于说明谓语所表示的动作或状态的执行者。主语通常由名词、代 词、数词、动词不定式、动名词（短语）或从句等充当。2021 ,全国甲卷Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire.（名词短语作主 语）2021 全国乙卷，书面表达Second, it is wise to take a short break after learning for 30 minutes .（不定式作真正的主语）2021全国乙卷，书面表达Staring at the screen is harmful to our eyes, （i?. ing 作主语）©What attracted me most was that a great many famous artists* works were on exhibition. （从句作主语）二、谓语一一主语的行为谓语用来描述主语的行为动作、状态或特征。1 .实义动词（短语）可以单独作谓语，有时态、人称和数的变化；2 .系动词不能单独作谓语，系表结构才可以作谓语；3 .助动词和情态动词也不能单独作谓语，“助动词/情态动词+实义动词”可以作谓语。2021 浙江卷 6 月,写作As far as I know this exhibition will last for a month in the school art gallery.2021 新高考 I 卷,读后续写He immediately understood what had happened.2019全国 I 卷,书面表达I can give a brief introduction of these masterpieces from the perspective of a native speaker of China.2021 新高考I卷,读后续写Soon, the breakfast was ready, too.（系表结构作谓语）三、宾语动作的对象宾语是动作的对象或承受者，一般位于及物动词和介词的后面。可以用作宾语的有：名 词、代词、数词、不定式、动名词和从句等。2021 新高考 I 卷，读后续写Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions. （名词作宾语）2020全国卷，书面表达Both students and teachers hope to hold such activities again.（不定式作宾语）2020全国 I 卷,读后续写You may send Bernard popcorn every day.（双宾语）全国 II 卷，书面表达If you are interested in the Chinese folk art, please email me.（名 词短语作宾语，代词作宾语）四、表语主语的特征表语与前面的系动词一起构成复合谓语（系表结构），用来说明主语的特征、类属、状态、 身份等。（not）.All the students, whether their academic performance is good or not, are all preparing themselves for the coming exams.所有的学生，不管他们的学业成绩是好是坏，都在为即将到来的考试做准备。Every student, no matter how talented or hard-working, will come across difficulties in his or her study.每位学生，不管他或她有多么聪明、多么努力，在学习中总会遇到困难。佳句输出用状语从句补全句子1 . 2020.全国n卷，书面表达我们可以早点出发，这样我们将有更多的时间来采摘水果。 We can set out early.2 . 2020.全国I卷，书面表达不管他从事什么工作，都应该根据具体情况给予表扬。， praise should be given on a casebycase basis.3 .2021 .新高考卷如果你外出时没人照顾你的孩子，詹妮弗和我很乐意让他们和我们 住在一起。Jennifer and I would be glad to have them stay with us.4 .天津卷，书面表达我们比照赛如此感兴趣，以至于我们组成了一个小组参加比赛。We were a group to take part in it.5 .不管你是谁，你都必须遵守校规。, you must obey the school regulations.6 .全国I卷，书面表达由于天气越来越热，在室内学习是个好主意。, it is a good idea to study indoors.7 .天津卷，书面表达虽然这些天我在埋头读书，但为了提高自己，我仍然参加了几个 俱乐部。, I have still joined several clubs in order to improve myself.8 .江苏卷，书面表达当人们被要求做他们不想做的事情时，他们可能感到被强迫。 People may feel forced.兀美文早利用所学状语从句的相关知识，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵。Dear Jamie,I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It's never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. You don't have to feel upset 1. （因为以中文为母语的人也觉得很难学好它们）. Here are some useful tips. First, 2.（当你遇至II 问题时，上网 寻求帮助），where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I'm always here to help. But 3. （最重要的是坚持学习和实践）.You are sure to make progress!Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua层级五光彩夺目的“定语从句”定语从句的正确使用能够比拟明显地反映出考生对于语言具有较高的掌握能力，所以建 议考生一定要在写作中至少使用一个恰到好处的定语从句。美句输入一、限制性定语从句与先行词关系密切，没有逗号与先行词隔开，应正确使用关系代词和关系副词。20213 月天津卷，书面表达Beijing possesses a kind of power that makes us feel the long history of Chinese culture over 5, 000 years.北京拥有一个让我们感受到中国文化5000多年漫 长历史的力量。2021全国乙卷，书面表达Those students who lack self-discipline may find their minds wandering when they are facing a screen rather than a teacher.那些缺乏自律的学生或许会发现，当他们面对屏幕而非老师时，他们开小差了。二、非限制性定语从句对所修饰的成分做进一步说明，有逗号隔开。2021全国甲卷Our school will hold a theme class meeting, which will be exhibited on the English website.我们学校将举办一个主题班会，它将在英文网站上展示。2020全国 I 卷，书面表达Faced with the outbreak of the epidemic, she went to Wuhan without a second thought, where she helped to save hundreds of lives.面对疫情的爆发，她不假思 索地去了武汉，在那里她帮助挽救了数百人的生命。三、“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句关系代词指人用whom,指物用which2020全国 II 卷Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross-country race, the route of which started from our school gate to the South Mountain.上周日,我校举行了一场 5 公里越野赛，比 赛路线从校门开始，一直到南山。四、which, as引导的非限制性定语从句which和as引导的定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。北京卷, 书 面表达Last week, we took the foreign students to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.上周，我们带着外国学生体验了正宗的茶文化，结果证明非常值得。佳句输出As is often the case, people tend to talk loud in public places, annoying others around.人们倾向于在公共场所高声谈话干扰周围的人，这是常有的事。用定语从句补全句子1 . 2021 .天津卷，书面表达我依然记得在你家度过的欢乐时光。I still remember the wonderful time.2 .比赛定于本周六下午在市体育场举办，比赛旨在促进我们与你学校的交流和增进我们 的友谊。The match is due to be held this Saturday afternoon in the city's stadium,and promote our friendship.3 .天津卷，书面表达同时，我也有兴趣在你们的讲座中学习一些民间舞蹈，这将有助 于提高我的舞蹈水平。Meanwhile, I'm also interested in learning some folk dances from your lecture,*4 .全国n卷，书面表达我们都知道，一起成长这部优秀的英文短片看起来很有趣。, the outstanding short English film, Growing Together, is interesting to watch.5 .浙江卷6月，应用文写作我想申请这个职位的原因是我想提高我的英语口语水平, 并且帮助外国学生更好地了解中国文化。I want to improve my spoken English and help foreign students have a better understanding of Chinese culture.6 .我要去四川旅行，那里有很多名胜古迹。I will go on a trip to Sichuan,完美文章利用所学定语从句的相关知识，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵。Dear Tom,How are you going these days? I'm writing to share with you something about our schoofs Sports Club, and the detailed information is as follows.The Sports Club is located in our schoofs gym,1.（在体育俱乐部 每天下午放学后都举办各种各样的活动）.At weekends, it is available all day for all students 2.（对体育赛事感兴趣的学生）.Badminton, basketball and table tennis are especially popular among students. What excites me most is that there are some kinds of competitions held every few weeks, 3.（吸弓I / 许多学生来观看和丰富我们的学校生活）.In a word, it is an ideal place to relax ourselves after class.Best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua层级六丰富多彩的“名词性从句”名词性从句是高中阶段重要的语法工程之一，也是写作中常用的高级表达。它包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。美句输入一、主语从句2021 新高考 I 卷，书面表达Of all sections, what I like best is reading, from which not only have I raised the awareness of reading, but I have also increased my knowledge.在所有的栏目中，我最喜欢的是阅读，从中我不仅提高了阅读的意识，而且也增加了我 的知识。2022河北衡水中学二调，书面表达What I want to tell you is that it is common for Senior Three students to have an experience of depression.我想告诉你的是高三学生有情绪低落期是正常的。However, it is important that we never lose the enthusiasm to keep on trying.然而，重要的是，我们从来没有丧失过继续努力的热情。二、表语从句（that在表语从句中不作成分，但不能省略）2022呼和浩特高三调研，书面表达As we all know, reading classics is of great importance. This is because it can not only improve our studying career but also enrich our everyday life.众所周知，阅读古典文学对我们来说非常重要。这是因为它不仅能提高我们的 学业而且能丰富我们的日常生活。2022陕西质量检测,书面表达But the problem is that a number of middle school students are growing increasingly addicted to phones.但是问题是越来越多的中学生沉溺于手机。三、宾语从句（注意语序和时态）I'm more than delighted to receive your letter and know you've been admitted to the University of Cambridge.我非常高兴收到你的来信，知道你已经被剑桥大学录取。I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.我诚挚地希望你能接受我的歉意并理解我的处境。2020全国 H 卷，书面表达Then the farmer showed us how we can pick apples.然后那位农民向我们展示如何摘苹果。四、同位语从句（前后互相解释，地位平等）©We hold the firm belief that the visitors will know more about traditional Chinese culture and at the same time enjoy the beauty of it.我们坚信游客会了解更多的中国传统文化，与此同时享受中国传统文化的美。There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists.毋庸置疑中国古代的小说家创造了许多了不起的人物。佳句输出用名词性从句补全句子1. 2020浙江卷7月，应用文写作你要做的就是听从医生的建议，好好休息。is follow the doctor's advice and have a good rest.2 .全国n卷，书面表达可以预测，这是一场势均力敌的比赛。It can be predicted.3 .天津卷，书面表达我坚信这也给了我一些生活和学习的动力。I hold the firm belief4 .全国n卷，书面表达接着有消息说，我们学校将放映一部英文短片，它是一部关于 我们学校历史的纪录片。Then came the newswhich is a documentary on the history of our school.5 .北京卷，书面表达这就是为什么我建议你申请中国最好的大学之一北京大学。 Peking University, one of the best universities in China.6 .北京卷，书面表达我确实希望我的建议能对你有些帮助，也希望你在中国玩得开心。I do hope my advice will be of some help to you and7 .全国I卷，书面表达然而，我不确定措辞和格式是否正确。However, I am not sure about.8 .全国I卷，书面表达你要记住的最后一件重要的事情是在6月28日前必须把这篇 文章发给我。The last important thing you should remember is完美文章利用所学名词性从句的相关知识，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵。My Dream CareerGood morning, everyone! Today, please allow me to give you a speech on the career 1.（我将来要从事的工作）.2. （毫无疑问，我对未来的工作抱有很 大的期望）like everyone present. And 3.（我梦想的职业 是成为名导游）.From my early age, I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere, sharing the knowledge of the local culture and customs as well as enjoying the brilliant landscapes at the same time. 4.（只有 努力工作，我才能取得资格，为人民服务）.Thank you for listening!层级七言简意赅的“非谓语”恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而 且读起来结构紧凑，言简意赅。美句输入一、动名词作主语、表语、定语和宾语等。©Therefore, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty. 因此，请花些时间简单地看看唐朝的历史。2021 全国乙卷，书面表达Learning online has become an important way to study these days.如今，在线学习已经成为一种重要的学习方式。二、过去分词作表语、宾语、补语和状语等。2021 全国甲卷，书面表达Faced with these difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.面对这些困难，我不得不求助于你。2022贵阳检测，书面表达What excites me most is that there are some kinds of competitions held every few weeks, which attract many students to watch and enrich our school life.最让我兴奋的是每隔几周就有一些比赛,吸引了很多学生观看，丰富了我们的学校生活。 三、不定式作主语、表语、定语、宾语、宾语补足语和状语等。2021 天津卷,书面表达This is the best chance to realize my dream, so I'm looking forward to it.这是实现我梦想的最好机会，所以我很期待。2021 天津卷，书面表达To further improve my English, I plan to read more by studying and practicing online during the vacation.为了进一步提高我的英语水平，我计划假期期间通过在线学习和练习来多阅读。2022长春质量检测一The purpose of this program is to appreciate the beauty of Chinese ancient poetry and learn from the wisdom of the great minds of ancient China.这个节目的目的是欣赏中国古代诗歌的美，学习中国古代伟大思想的智慧。四、现在分词作表语、定语、补语和状语等。2021 新高考 I 卷,读后续写It was not long before a perfect breakfast was well done, giving off nice smell.没过多久，一顿丰富的早餐就做好了，散发出阵阵香味。2020全国 I 卷,总分值作文Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.她为我们学生树立了一个好典范，值得我尊敬。(3)1 received a telephone call saying your mother was sent to the hospital because of the terrible accident.我接到一个 ，说你母亲因为可怕的事故被送进了医院。佳句输出补全句子1 . 12021全国乙卷On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, （让我们很难不受影响）.2 .2021 新高考 I 卷， 书 面表达Youth is an excellent window for me （了解外界）.3 .2021 新高考I卷，读后续写（看到早餐），the mother felt a little confused,（问）“Where did you get this breakfast794 .全国I卷，书面表达（在中国生活了超过18年）, I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.俳谓语作状语）5 . It carries articles（外国朋友所写的）about the cultures of their home countries.（非谓语作定语）6 . （有你帮助我），my English has greatly improved.（with 复合结构）7 .2020浙江卷，读后续写（充分利用这次近距离的相遇 encounter）, I took some pictures of the bear.8.2020全国H卷，书面表达（绿树环绕，花团锦簇），the farm looked like a large garden.完美文章利用所学非谓语动词的相关知识，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵。Dear. Mr. Jason,Pm Li Hua ， a high school student. I am writing to apply for the position 1.（在网站上做广告的）.First of all, 2.（学英语大约十年了），I'm convinced that I 3.（与外国客人交流没有困难）.Furthermore, growing up here, I'm familiar with the history and traditions of Shanxi Province. More importantly, 4.（被认为是一个善良，自信和外向的男 孩）,I can make friends with different people in no time.I would appreciate it if you could give me the precious chance. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely, Li Hua层级八 委婉动人的“虚拟语气”虚拟语气句型在写作中属于高级句式，它的合理运用能给文章增色添彩。美句输入一、if型虚拟语气，意为“如果，就”Secondly, if I were you, I would take a walk in the evening with my friends.第二，如果我是你，我会在黄昏和朋友一起散步。If I were you, I would certainly make good use of the time to improve my performance at school and prepare myself well for the future.要是我是你，我肯定会充分利用时间来提高成绩, 为未来做好充分准备。If you should accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.f Should you accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.如果您接受我的申请，我将竭尽全力使您满意。二、wish型虚拟语气，意为“希望”全国 II 卷I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.希望大家抓住这次机会，进一步学习中国传统文化。三、asif/though型虚拟语气，意为“好像”Everything in my childhood crowded upon my mind as if/though they had just happened.童年的一切一下子涌入我的大脑，仿佛刚刚发生似的。四、if only型虚拟语气，意为“要是就好了；但愿”2020浙江卷，书面表达As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there!我们一唱完歌，所有观众给予我们热烈的掌声。要是你当时在那里就好了！五、(high/about) time (that)型虚拟语气，意为"是的时候了”It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.确实到了孩子和父母行动起来做出改变的时候了。六、(should) do型虚拟语气，意为“应该”To master Chinese, I strongly suggest you (should) practise with Chinese people.为了掌握汉语，我强烈建议你和中国人一起练习。七、without/but for/but that含蓄型虚拟语气，意为“没有,要不是”2020全国 I 卷，书面表达Without his aid, my skills in English wouldn't have been greatly improved!没有他的帮助，我的英语技能不会提升得这么快。2020全国 I 卷，书面表达But for his encouragement, I couldn't have made such great progress.要不是他的鼓励，我不会取得这么大的进步。佳句输出用虚拟语气补全句子/翻译句子1 .建议每个人都应该有均衡饮食和经常锻炼。It is suggested that everyone.2 .如果不是你的帮助，这次实验我就不会成功。If it were not for your help, I in the experiment.3 .如果我是一名清洁工，我会让我们的城市更干净，大街上没有垃圾。, I would make our city cleaner with no rubbish lying on the street.4 .如果你来早一点，就会赶上那班火车了。If you had come earlier, you the train.5 .你建议青少年应该远离电脑游戏的提议被接受了。Your suggestion that teenagers computer games is accepted.6 .是我们该下定决心努力学习的时候了。It's high time that we to study hard.7 .要是我昨天听了你的建议就好了。If only I.8 .老师劝我们要好好利用在这里的每一分钟。The teacher advised that we here.9 .如果我当时听了你的建议，我的考试就不会有问题了。Had I followed your advice, I.10 .没有你的鼓励，我不可能取得如此好的成绩。完美文章利用所学虚拟语气的相关知识，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵。I feel honored to be invited here to deliver a speech. My topic today is "If I Were a Dustman.Perhaps you are surprised at my choice, but I do think being a dustman is a great choice. I wish 1.（我能成为一名环卫工人）because I hope we can make our city a more beautiful place to live in.If I were a dustman, 2.（我会让我们的城市更干净）with no rubbish lying on the street. I would tell others without us dustmen our city 3.（彳艮难居住）. 4.（我宁愿你们支持我的主意）.My suggestion is that, whatever you do, 5.（你应专心做好它）.层级九彰显文采的特殊句式美句输入句式（一）话多话少不如来个强调强调结构1. It is/was +被强调局部+that/who+其他2021 ,3 月天津卷，书面表达It is the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and so on that attract a large number of tourists from all over the world every year to Beijing.正是颐和园、故宫、长城等每年吸引着大量来自世界各地的游客来到北京。2. It is/was not until.thatIt was not until 8 o'clock that he realized he had spent the whole day on the Internet.直到八点钟，他才意识到自己一整天都在上网。3.强调谓语用"do/does/did +动词原形”2021 新高考 I 卷，写作I do sincerely hope Youth can make new progress.我真诚地希望青年杂志能取得新的进步。2020,全国 II 卷，书面表达We did hope there would be more meaningful activities in the coming future.我们确实希望今后有更多有意义的活动。句式（二）反其道而行之倒装结构1. Only+状语/状语从句十 .（局部倒装），意为"只有”20205 月天津卷，书面表达Only when the two aspects are connected can a man show his talent to g