英语兴趣小组写作辅导第五课公开课.docx

Name第一章议论文第4讲用事例证明某个观点本类书面表达主要是以叙事为主，但叙事的目的是为了论证一个观点，相等于用事例 来论证，所以本书中把它归类在议论文中。这类书面表达可以考查学生叙事、描写、议论 等多方面的写作能力。在设题上常见的有四种形式：1.读写类。给一篇文章，先阅读，然后让简单概括文 章，再谈感想。2.给出一个情景图片，让先描述图片，再结合自身实际谈感想。3.给出一 个谚语或一小段话，让先谈看法，再举例说明。3.给出观点性标题，让直接用事例来论 证。这类作文典型的写法一般包括三局部：第一局部阐述谚语或观点、概括文章、描述图 画故事，可以写成“主题句一拓展句”结构。第二段结合个人或他人经历来进行例证。第 三段对自己的观点进行简短总结，再次扣题。1 .成功就是不断失败，而是不丧失热情如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求用 英语写一篇短文。"Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm/9Sir Winston Churchill 内容要求：L你对该引语的理解；2.你的相关经历；3.恰当的结尾。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3.词 数：120左右。This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us thatTo ease the pain in her back, I removed the heavy load from mom's shoulders.2 .孩子也要体谅父母的负担下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情 景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短 文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1 .描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；2 .举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1 .可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作 必要的发挥想象。2 .词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3 .作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.Name疯狂背诵背诵日期 教师签名Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: " Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hand. 非常同意can't agree more with艰苦的努力painstaking efforts由决定be determined by被认为是be regarded as 以为例take.for example激人上进的人物an inspiring figure扮演重要角色play an important role背诵日期 教师签名鼓励能增强自信The encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance to his or her student, especially when the student has trouble with study. Timely encouragement can raise his confidence and inspire his motivation to work hard.When I was in middle school, I had some difficulty in learning English. I couldn't memorize new words, so I always did poorly in the English exams. For some time I even decided to give up learning English. However, everything changed when I met Mrs. Jones, my new English teacher. She encouraged me to try some different methods to remember English words, and when I made a little progress, she always praised me, so I worked harder than ever.Gradually I became interested in memorizing new words and began to catch up with others. At the end of the term I got the highest mark in English in my class.Now I owe my progress in English to Mrs. Jones whose encouragement has made me achieve what I have now. Here I want to send my sincere thanks from heart to her.有重要意义of great significance 适时的鼓励timely encouragement 激发动机inspire motivation 放弃学英语give up learning English 鼓励某人做某事encourage sb. to do sth.赶上别人catch up with others得最高分get the highest mark归功于oweto