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专题56书面表达读后续写5种常用修辞手法Part 1暗喻Part 2表人物动作或心理活动的高级词汇Part 3表人物个性品格的高级词汇Part 4描述地理位置&天气的高级词汇Part 5描述人物体型&日常活动的场景词汇修辞手法(figure of speech)是根据表达需要，运用有效的语言手段来提高语言的表达效果，使语言表达具有 准确性、鲜明性和生动性的语言运用方式。恰当地使用修辞手段，可以使文章更加生动，更具有表现力， 蕴意丰富，引人入胜。常用的修辞手法有：夸张(Exaggeration)、明喻(Simile)、暗喻(Metaphor)、拟人(Personification)、平行法 (Parallelism)> 头韵(Alliteration)、比照(Contrast)、矛盾修辞法(Oxymoron)、双关(Pun)、移情(Empathy)等。 对于高中生来说，最好能通过例句，结合具体的语境，体会修辞的表达效果。同时，要求学会欣赏并能模 仿造句。学习和运用修辞手法，相信对高考新题型“读后续写”也有帮助。Part 15种写作常用提分修辞之暗喻Metaphor也是也叫隐喻，是简缩了的明喻，但不用比喻词like或as作比照，是将某一事物的名称用于另一 事物，通过比拟形成，从而更生动，更深刻地说明事理，增强语言的表现力。例如：她是个天使。(She is an angel.)是暗喻；而她像天使般天真无邪。(She is as innocent as an angeL)是明喻。1. Time is money.2. The stars are sparkling diamonds.3. The curtain of night fell upon us.4. Life is a journey.5. Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.6. Books are the keys to your imagination.7. Spending too much time with him is worse than swimming in a sea of sharks.8. Her hair was a flowing golden river streaming down her shoulders.14. He likes television shows that have deep characters, interesting stories and good actors.15. My fellow Americans, ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your countryThe political leader said, nThe present government has ruined the economy; it has ruined the education system; and it has ruined the health system of our country.n16. The president promised to reform health care, preserve social security, and a balanced budget.1.1 1 have to learn how to use the phone, how to pay bus fare, and how to ask a shopkeeper for things I didn't know the English for.19. The movie was thrilling, exciting, and suspenseful （悬疑的 sos'pensfbl）.20. My parents did not approve of what I did nor what I said.21. Olympic athletes usually like to practice, compete, and eat ice cream sandwiches.22. What counts isn't how you look but how you behave.Writing 1（2022.江苏省泰州市教育局模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成 一篇完整的短文。May 18, 1986, was the kind of beautiful, sunny day that regularly brought the Rodriguez family to Santa Catalina Island for some fishing on their nine-metre pleasure boat, the DC Too. They spent the day fishing in the Pacific Ocean, then left the island in the early evening.Soon thick fog rolled in. Louise fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Trisha, at a table on the boat's lower deck. Their father's sharp orders frightened her awake: “Get out of the boat. It's sinking!, Louise pushed her sister into the cold, dark water The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Rodriguez* Both girls wore life jackets,but the adults did not. Within seconds, the boat capsized, leaving just the tip of its bow in the air.After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. Louise watched him disappear into the darkness.A while later, her mother went still. Then her sister died, too.Pisano and Strasser, both 25, were going on a fishing expedition. The fbg was so thick that they couldn't even see the stem（用台尾）of the boat. They decided to try one more spot before going home. Late that afternoon, the fog cleared and the sun started shining. On their return voyage, about 11 kilometres away from Catalina Island, Pisano noticed something yellow floating in the water.Strasser steered（驾驶）the boat closer and Pisano jumped into the water. He swam toward the figure and grabbed the life jacket. Fortunately, Louise was saved and quickly sent to hospital. The little girl soon recovered, but the search for Louise's father, sister and mother was in vain.Louise was adopted by her aunt and uncle. She attended college, got married in 2013 and gave birth to a son. In her late 20s, Louise began to wonder about her rescuers. She even tried to find them but no luck. One day, Louise came across a magazine article featuring Pisano talking about the 1986 rescue.注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Realizing Pisano was the very person she was looking for, Louise decided to find him.Louise recognized her rescuer the moment she saw Pisano.Writing 2（2022福建省福州第一中学三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。Grandfather was a wise and honorable man. His house was not far from ours, and I would visit him often going home after school.No matter how rotten I had been, I could tell Grandpa anything. My secrets were safe. Whenever there was a problem, he gave me the tools to fix it. I knew I would always find the best answer from him. He always understood. He loved me.I remember a time when a bunch of us were playing baseball in the field behind Mrs. Ferguson's house. I hitone pitch just right and slam! It was a home run that soared high and away, and ended up breaking Old Lady Ferguson's kitchen window! We all ran! Walking home, my best friend, Tom, asked, "How will she ever know who did it? She's blinder than a bat!" He had a point.I was afraid that Mrs. Ferguson would stay mad at me, so I ran. T didn't know what she would do. I tried to calm down. However, my stomach was in knots. On the way home. I imagined that she was a mean witch （女巫） chasing me, and the further way T ran, the larger she grew. until finally she towered over the whole town, seeing my every move with an evil eye. Thoughts rushed through my mind. Would Mrs. Ferguson stay mad at me? Would she call police? Worse still, would she tell my parents I couldn't even imagine the disappointment on Mom and Dad's face. They were hoping I would act honestly and in a responsible wayI decided to stop by Grandpa's. I felt ashamed. I wanted to hide. I wanted to knock my head against a tree a thousand times and make the world just go away -as if punishing myself could undo things.“I would tell everything to Grandpa J a voice inside me said.“I was wrong. I told him, with my head down. He must have known something was up by the expression on my face. He knew we had been warned many times about the dangers of playing where we shouldn't. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Para 1: But he just listened while I continued talking.Para 2: Grandpa smiled when he knew I had figured it out.Writing 3（2022.湖北.武汉市第十二中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Seeing the world through the eyes of a child is the purest joy that anyone can experience.It was Sunday and we were late for family dinner. We had just got in the car when I heard June, my six-year-old daughter, shouting, "Go back, Mom! Go back!” "Go back?” I quickly peered into the back seats and noticed her expression was one of pure panic.“Mom, we have to go back J she insisted. "Someone needs our help!” As I looked back from the driver's seat, I saw a messy young man dressed in rags playing his guitar. His brown skinny dog rested next to him near an old cardboard sign, reading/6 Homeless, please help." My daughter's innocent eyes fixed on me, I anxiously searched for some cash, only to find the credit cards."I'm sorry, sweet heart. But I don't have any cash”, I said.“I have some, Mom!, June replied. She opened her little pink unicorn purse and pulled out a five-dollar bill.“Oh, good. Til pay you back when we get home J I responded with a sigh of relief.“No, Mom J she insisted, "I want to give him my money, not yours.”I drove down the parking-lot, approaching the man, saying, "Excuse me, sir! He cautiously walked toward our car and answered/9 Yes, ma'am?“Here you go, sir." June stretched out her entire body to hand him her five-dollar bill through the window and explained, "I want you to have this.”He smiled and hesitatingly asked, “This is your money?”“Yes! I want you to have this. she proudly answered.“Thank you, he said, touched by her thoughtfulness.I hurriedly drove away. At the traffic lights, I found my younger daughter Scarlett holding two quarters in her tiny hands with tears in eyes.“Mom, I wanted to give all my money to him. I wanted to help, too“ she said, weeping and feeling like she had missed out. I replied, "Sweetheart, it's only two quarters.Before I could finish, she interrupted, "Mom, he needs help! I sighed and drove back to where we saw the man. But what could be found was only the guitar leaning against the wall.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para 1: Scarlett began to cry and I promised her we would find him.Para 2: Outside a KFC, we spotted the man talking to an old granny with a walking stick.Writing 4（2022福建厦门模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的 短文。On my seventh birthday, I got a gift from my father, which was a book titled Guide to Reptiles and Amphibians. It was my favorite. I kept it under my pillow and read every page over and over every night enjoying the pictures of colorful animals. Some of the sakes were the most beautiful creatures I had ever seen.Little did I know that my book would end up saving a life.Years ago, my family moved into a new house near the woods. My father built a sandbox in our yard. The cat sometimes used the sandbox for a litter box, so my father had to put a plastic cover over it .When I wanted to build sand castles, I had to pull the cover off.One day before dinner, I ran to the sandbox to build 8 miniature city. I pulled off the plastic cover, and there in the sandbox was a snake. It was lying very sill, all coiled up, and it was beautiful. The snake had rings of color around it. I had seen a picture just like it in my guidebook, and I remembered that it was one of the prettiest snakes in it. It said in the book that the poisonous coral snake looked very much like the harmless king snake, the only difference was in the order of the colors. 1 ran inside to get the guidebook.“Mom! Mom! There's a snake in the sandbox!” I yelled. "I have to find out what kind it is!”Mom came running. 6Don,t touch it, Chris! It might be poisonous!,Dad was at work, so my mother went to get our neighbor, Mr. Cook."Mr. Cook!” my mother yelled across the fence, "We have a snake in the sandbox, and it might be poisonous! Mr. Cook was retired and lived with his wife in the house on the other side of our back fence. He came running toward the gale with a shovel and tried to kill the snake.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand.“So what to do now?” Mr. Cook put down the shovel.Writing 5（2022.山东师范大学附中模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。You know how when big things in your life aren't going well, the little things bother you more? Yet one tiny kind act that appears in the path may easily light up your whole life and give you hope again.Like many people during the pandemic, my husband, Paul, had been laid off. I was still working, but my job would likely be ending soon too. I was worried about money, Covid-19 and our future. Thafs when our mailbox really started getting to me.The mailbox, relic from the previous homeowners, had already been in rough shape when we moved in. The paint was faded. The metal pole holding up the box was rusted. It stood at the end of our long driveway, far enough away from our house. Every time I saw it, it just reminded me of all the problems in my life. "I wish we had a better mailbox, ,5I found myself thinking as I pulled out of the driveway. I probably would have forgotten all about it if it were not for the news we got one morning."Shelly just texted, “Paul said. Shelly was a neighbor and a good friend. "A girl drove her car right into the mailbox. Completely mowed it down. "I sighed, heart almost falling apart. "Shelly saw it happen. The driver Just a teenager, wasn't hurt, but she was really upset, “Paul added.As much as I wanted a new mailbox, getting it would be expensive. "That certainly wasn't in the budget, "I thought. I guess it's true what they say: Be careful what you wish for.I went to work in low spirits. While doing the usual tasks, I received a text from Shelly again, “That teenage girl named Audree came by and repaired your mailbox.” 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Upon reaching the driveway, I was totally shocked at what I saw.With the help of the note, we called at Audree s home.Writing 6（2022辽宁实验中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完 整的短文。I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept my company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine.She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed.At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon distracted. I had not expected the arrival of the “bib-bibs"“bib-bibs" were birds. “Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I come with her to the window.“In a minute. Just let me finish this question.I said. She pulled me by the hand （two fingers, actually） toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the “bib-bibs” They sang and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk.Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a long line of scrabbled （舌L 的）letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. "No, thank you,Meghan. Daddy's seen your work. Til do it myself. She backed off.注意：1.词数150字左右；2 .按照格式在答题卡相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.Paragraph 2:I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.Writing 7（2022广东广州.三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。People use the proverb “seeing is believing to describe situations where it's hard to believe something is possible if you haven't seen it happen. I am here today to tell you that the proverb is true and to share with you how a girl and her grandmother made a positive transformation in a community.It was a year ago when I was studying life cycles in my science class. I wrote a paper about the life cycle of the monarch butterfly （帝王蝶）and received a perfect score. I was so thrilled; I called my grandmother Nana and told her the exciting news. My talk recalled memories from Nana's childhood. "I remember when I was a girl,“ she said, "those orange and black butterflies were a common sight. Come late summer, there would suddenly be hundreds of them, and before long there were so many it felt like you were standing in an orange cloud.“It sounds like you witnessed a migration （迁徙）,but what happened to them? I asked. "To be honest, I've never known,“ Nana admitted. "But there do seem to be fewer monarchs around the neighborhood.N