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54书面表达读后续写精彩结尾内容精彩结尾i画面定格 人物动作的画面定格精彩结尾2回曲定格特殊寓意的写景Iffl面精彩结尾3对话结尾精彩结尾4主题升华精彩结尾5结尾留白精彩结尾6首尾呼应精彩结尾01：画面定格人物动作的画面定格01They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一 眼，立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放 在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。02His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮 的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴 得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。03The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face, "No." God felt a bit relieved and said, "Tomorrow you can become human again.But she shook her head and said, "No, I want to be a butterfly fbr the rest of my lifb.” Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the cookies for us all. Our Christmas season should have been perfect.It couldn't feel perfect, though, because Pepper's health was deteriorating. Her life had already been longer than we expected 一she was fourteen -and yet her mind was still sharp. Her enthusiasm for life made us feel better. But her body could not keep up with her spirit. She'd already shown the usual signs of deafness and stiffness. That year, her hips and back legs started giving out on her. We knew we would soon have to make a difficult decision.It was likely Pepper's last Christmas, so we decided to make sure she enjoyed it. On Christmas Eve, we gathered around the tree to open an early present. We each took a turn and then called Pepper to open one more. But her tangled legs could not navigate the boxes and shredded wrapping paper on the floor. She stumbled over the obstacles, and soon she disappeared into the next room. She crumpled back to the floor, as out of the way as she could get.We were heartbroken. Could Pepper even participate in her last Christmas? Pepper stayed on the periphery of all our holiday activities. Throughout the day, we gave gifts but did not feel very giving. We shared stories over cinnamon rolls that tasted bland. We played games by the tree whose twinkles had dimmed.That evening, Kaei said what we'd all been thinking: "I wish Pepper could have helped open presents this year., We all put down our mugs of spiced tea. "Maybe she still could J Kara said. “But there's none left；' Mom reminded her. Kara jumped up and left the room. We heard her opening drawers and cabinets in the kitchen.注意：（1）字数150左右，请按如下格式在答题纸上作答。Kara returned with a box of dog biscuits, scissors, a pile of color paper, and a roll of tape.Soon, Pepper selected her first Christmas gift.【答案】One possible version:Kara returned with a box of dog biscuits, scissors, a pile of color paper, and a roll of tape. She cut a small section from the paper and wrapped a single dog treat in it. She held it up as if she had just struck gold. "Now there's a present fbr her!, I knelt on the floor next to Kara and wrapped another. Kaei and Mom joined in, too. Soon, we had four elegantly wrapped dog biscuits in a row on the floor, we cleared the floor of discarded wrapping paper. “Go get Pepper,“ we urged, bouncing eagerly. Mom went into the next room. "You wanna open a present, girl“ she coaxed. In a moment, Pepper stuck her head into the room, ears fully perked with anticipation and curiosity. Skidded on stilted legs to the row of presents, she sniffed all four in order and looked back and forth. She d never had such a wide choice before.Soon, Pepper selected her first Christmas gift. She nimbly turned the present with her forepaw, just like she was a spry young dog once more. She tugged every last scrap of paper off the dog treat before she chewed it with her customary grace. Our family swelled with glee. Pepper licked the last crumb from the floor. She eyed the remaining three presents, then turned to Mom as if asking, "May I please open another? “Go ahead, girl!” Mom encouraged. For the next few minutes, Pepper opened each of her Christmas presents. While she did, she reminded us of the sheer joy of being together. Our family felt whole not because we were in the same room, city, or country, but because our love bonded us together.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者家每年总是让他们家的狗Pepper来拆圣 诞礼物，但是Pepper的年纪越来越大了，健康状况很不好。于是今年家人们为Pepper 准备了礼物，让Pepper自己来拆。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Kara拿着一盒狗饼干、剪刀、一堆彩纸和一卷胶带回来了可知， 第一段可描写Kara为Pepper准备礼物的过程。由第二段首句内容“很快，Pepper选择了她的第一份圣诞礼物。”可知，第二段可描写 Pepper拆礼物的经过和作者的感悟。2,续写线索：Kara准备礼物让Pepper拆礼物开始拆礼物作者感悟3 .词汇激活行为类回来：return / get back翻开：open /unfold进入：go into/ get into情绪类期待：anticipation/ expectation快乐：joy /happiness【点睛】高分句型1 She held it up as if she had just struck gold.（运用了 as if引导方式状 语从句）高分句型 2 Our family felt whole - not because we were in the same room, city, or country, but because our love bonded us together.（运用 了 because 引导原因状语从句）Writing 2（2023浙江省杭州第二中学模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之 构成一个完整的故事。Edun did not want to go on a hike. She especially did not want to go on a long hike in the mountains that led to a tiny cabin （、木屋）with no electricity and no running water. She wanted to stay home reading a book instead while wrapped in a warm blanket.“Ready?” Mom asked cheerfully after breakfast. Edun looked out the window and only saw rain, lots of it. "We should go another day,“ Edun suggested. "Maybe a hundred years from now. She worried she would get tired on the hike. She worried about getting bored at the dark cabin. Mom said it was time to stop worrying and get into the car.Edun's brother, Will, was waiting in the garage, who wore a camera around his neck. Will was four years older than Edun and had climbed many more mountains. He'd started hiking when he was two and loved it.Because it was raining, Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. Her jacket had a rough material on the inside. She didn't like how it felt against her skin.After about half an hour's drive, they parked at a trailhead （登山 口）. The rain had stopped but the ground was still dripping wet. "We'll be there by afternoon!,9 Mom promised. The afternoon sounded far away.Will identified a bird sitting on a nearby branch“Fox sparrow!”then he raced down the trail and was soon out of sight.Edun rested under a pine tree. "You can't force me to walk J Edun said. “You're right J said her mom smilingly, standing under the tree, too, "But you will never know what may lie ahead and amaze us.” 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail.Paragraph 2:Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin.【答案】Paragraph 1:Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. They passed a waterfall, tiny yet clear. The trickling of water made Edun feel better. To her amazement, as they walked on, there was always something to look for in the wet green woods: animal tracks, wildflowers, little creeks. Soon they caught up with Will, who eagerly showed them the photos he took of the Fox sparrow resting on a branch. Together they went on, strolling past scratchy bushes, climbing over gray rocks and hiking through dwarf trees. Edun loomed above those little trees, exclaiming, "Look, Mom, I'm a giant." Unknowingly they had already done most of the climb.Paragraph 2:Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. Edun and Will started racing up the hill. Finally, there they were in the small but cozy cabin. Through its window, Edun saw faraway meadows and lakes, and many more mountains, a whole new world emerging before her eyes. That night, everybody stayed up late to see the stars. So many stars clustering up there, Edun proposed, "I need to take a picture of them.” "Click!” The camera froze the moment. Radiant with a smile, Edun approached Mom and hugged her, whispering, "Mom, thank you for having me come!,【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了艾顿不想去山里远足，但还是和家人一起出发 了，由于下雨而不得不穿上的雨衣使得艾顿感觉不舒适。半小时后，他们到达了登山口， 威尔沿着小路去追小鸟，艾顿想要停下休息，妈妈告诉艾顿，如果不继续走，就永远不 会知道前方有什么能使他们惊讶。【详解】L段落续写：由第一段首句内容“艾顿认为妈妈是对的，就跟着她走了。”可知，第一段可描写艾顿 继续前行，看到了美丽的风景，不知不觉间，已经完成了大局部攀登。由第二段首句内容“二十分钟后，他们看到了小屋。”可知，第二段可描写他们来到小 屋，晚上看星星，艾顿感谢妈妈邀请自己来。2,续写线索：继续前行美丽的风景完成大局部攀登到达小屋看星星感激3 .词汇激活行为类寻找：look for/search for/seek继续前行：go on/move on/keep on moving拥抱：hug/embrace/hold in one's arms情绪类舒适的：cozy/comfortable面带微笑：radiant with a smile/with a smiling face【点睛】高分句型 1 To her amazement, as they walked on, there was always something to look for in the wet green woods: animal tracks, wildflowers, little creeks.（由连接词 as 引导 的时间状语从句）高分句型 2 Soon they caught up with Will, who eagerly showed them the photos he took of the Fox sparrow resting on a branch.（由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句，省略 的关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句）Writing 3（2022.河北.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之 构成一篇完整的短文。Ariana Porter was very excited. Tomorrow will be anew day and a new beginning, well, kind of. TomoiTow Ariana will go to a boarding school! No little sister to share a room with, peace and quiet. She ate her favourite homemade curry for the last time that year. Then, shecurled up in her clean bed and shut her eyes. Excited.The next day, Ariana woke up, jumped into her best clothes and flew downstairs. After a quick breakfast, the whole family lined up and said their goodbyes. Ariana's little sister tried to hug her, but she shrugged Liliana off. And off she went to boarding school. Happy.However, when Ariana got there, everyone looked unwelcoming. A teacher showed her to her dorm. It was cold and dark! A few days later, Ariana got several letters. The rainbow one was from her little sister and another from her parents. Ariana couldn't even be bothered to open them. She just threw them into the main hall's fireplace when nobody was around.Every day, Ariana tried to make friends. It was an all-girls school. Unfortunately, she had no luck. She tried to give girls gifts, she tried to be friendly, but they shrugged her off just like she did to her sister. Two months passed trying to find new friends, but without success. Ariana felt more and more lonely. Something was missing in her life. Something indescribable. Something, or maybe someone.Week after week went by and then, one day, holding yet another batch of mail, Ariana's heart trembled. She realized what she was painfully missing, her FAMILY. Whenever she was down, whenever she needed help or comfort, they were there for her. Always. This time she opened the little rainbow envelope and smiled. Reading it filled her heart with joy. Ariana couldn't reply, for the school didn't allow that, so she decided to hide the letters under her pillow. The pile grew larger and they were so important to her, for the letters gave her the greatest comfort when she was away from home.Months passed eagerly waiting for the day when the school year ends. No more dorm life and unfriendly girls. Ariana skipped to math class excitedly, but couldn't concentrate, she dreamed about going home. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Finally it was the day to go home and Ariana started to pack.Ariana was leaving the dorm when she realized she forgot something important.【答案 J Finally it was the day to go home and Ariana started to pack. She was so excited at the thought of seeing her family, whom she had not seen for a long time, especially her cute little sister, that she could not stop packing. At this moment, a feeling of happiness arose spontaneously. She couldn't wait to get out of the dorm, the unfriendly classroom and the girls, and she was so excited to go back home.Ariana was leaving the dorm when she realized she forgot something important. The piles of letters under her pillow were of great importance to her. Because it was these letters that gave her the confidence and courage to carry on when she was having the toughest time. Every word in the letter was the best encouragement which inspired her not to give up. She picked up the thick stack of letters carefully and packed them up, while thinking of the warm scenes at home with her family. At that moment, she realized that it was the warmth and company of her family that enabled her to go through this difficult time. She wanted to sincerely say: I love you my family.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Ariana在新学校遇到许多不愉快的事情：交 不到新朋友以及不愉快的同学关系。但就在这艰难的时光中，是家人们一封封的信件让 她感受到了家庭的温暖，给了她鼓励和信心。假期来临，她迫不及待的回到家中与家人 们团聚。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“终于到了回家的日子，阿利安娜开始收拾行李。”可知，第一段可 描写阿利安娜迫不及待的收拾行李的兴奋和激动，想到和家人的团聚。由第二段首句内容“阿利安娜正要离开宿舍，突然意识到她忘了一件重要的东西。”可 知，第二段可描写的是阿利安娜想起了枕头下面的那一封封来自于家人们的信件，给予 她莫大的关心和鼓励，让她意识到家人们的重要性。家人来信给予鼓励和关心2 .续写线索：进入新学校冷落家人遭遇困境 感悟.词汇激活 行为类 .开始做：start to do/begin to do/get down to doing/set out to do.回家：go back home/return home .渡过：go through/pull through 情绪类.激动：thrilled/a sense of excitement .真挚：sincerely/unaffectedly【点睛】高分句型 1. Because it was these letters that gave her the confidence and courage to carry on when she was suffering the toughest time.（由连接词 it was.that 弓I 导的强调 句）高分句型 2. She was so excited at the thought of seeing her family, whom she had not seen for a long time, especially her cute little sister, that she could not stop packing.（由关系代词 whom引导非限制性定语从句）Writing 4（2022.山东.济南市历城第二中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开 头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Edward walked slowly past the school blacktop where his older brother, Leon, was playing basketball with his friends. Leon didn't notice Edward until he turned to shoot the ball. Leon really loved basketball and was good at it. But Edward was another story.Edward would beg to play with them but Leon's friends complained a lot. For some reason, in that last game, Edward's playing was worse than ever. He couldn't do anything right. He was completely unable to keep possession of the ball. He missed even the easy rebounds. His dribbling was useless, and none of his throws were anywhere near the basket. Leon had to turn his brother away.Edward was always a whiz at math. He was so advanced that he already knew how to solve long division problems before he was taught in school. Word problems, even the complicated ones with several steps, were no problem.One day, Leon's math teacher, pulled him aside. “ You need to do better, a lot better, or you9re not going to pass this class. There's a big test coining up.”Leon's heart sank. When he got home, he talked with Edward about it. The boys agreed that over the next two weeks they intended to spend an hour each day after school working on math problems and then an hour playing basketball.“Here