满分作文12篇 手机智能-备战2022年高考英语作文热点话题押题预测（全国通用）.docx

现在越来越多的人成为低头族(People who can't help checking their phones all day are known as phubbers. Phubbing trends to involve not only the young people, but also the elderly.), 如何弓I 导低头族抬头？你们班举行了以“拒为低头族”为主题的班会。假设你是学生李华，请为班 会写一篇100词左右的发言稿。要点如下：1 .你周围有低头族吗？他们成为“低头族”的原因。2 .成为“低头族”给学习和生活带来的影响。3 .就如何“拒为低头族”提一些建议。【优秀总分值范文】Nowadays, we can see many people are watching their mobile phones in subway, restaurants, elevators, roads and so on. There is no denying that people who like mobile phones are concerned about its attractive functions. Phubbers can't stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening to music and even taking photos by using the mobile phone. Moreover, some people have less time to relax themselves. They make use of the time when they are on the way to school or other places to play mobile games.However, phubbing disturbs not only our study but also our life. On the one hand, phubbers waste lots of time playing cell phone games and sending messages, particularly in class. Other people also complain they are disturbed when phones ring in classrooms. On the other hand, it can lead to health problems. For instance, using a mobile phone on the sofa can cause back and neck pain.As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we put aside the phone and raised our heads up. Do cherish everything around us and appreciate the scenery ahead of us.What's more, we should do more exercises and take part in real-life activities. In a word, only when we use the phone reasonably, can we realize the happiness of life.最近，某科技公司推出一款新型5G手机(Smart Mobile Phone 9),请你为该款手机写一篇 英语广告，内容包括：1 .手机的功能；2 .手机的特点；【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇短文；假定你是李华，你校英文周刊本周讨论的话题是 "高中生在学校该不该用智能手机”。请你写篇短文，说明你的观点。请从以下两个观点中选 择一个：1.高中生应该在学校使用智能手机；2.高中生不应该在学校使用智能手机。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：smartphones （智能手机），spend too much time on （花费了太多时间），outdoor activities （户夕卜活动），get addicted to （上瘾），have a bad effect on （不利影响）,play an important role in （扮演重要角色）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰， 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式， 如 I think it is wrong for us students to use smartphones at school.运用 了 宾语从句。we may get addicted to the phone so that it has a bad effect on our study.运用 了 so that 弓| 导结果状语从句； It is widely known that smartphones play an important role in our daily life.运用了主语从句。 with the development of the Internet, we can obtain a wider knowledge more effectively.运用了 with结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思 路清晰、层次清楚，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3 .适用人群。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Smart life from Smart Mobile Phone 9【答 案】Smart life from Smart Mobile Phone 9Smart Mobile Phone 9 will make your life smarter in an all-round way!Besides the general functions as a handset, it also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the 5G. It is so intelligent that it is ideal for office workers who are always on the go.Due to its small size and being light in weight, it is very convenient to carry. What/s more, it is a high-quality product sold at a reasonable price.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为一款新型5G手机写一篇英语广告，介绍手机的功能、 特点和适用人群。【详解】1 .词汇积累手机： mobile phone玲handset担任：work asfserve as完美的：perfect玲ideal 除了： in addition to= besides2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Due to its small size and being light in weight, it is very convenient to carry.拓展句：It is very convenient to carry because it has small size and is light in weight.【点睛】高分句型 1 Besides the general functions as a handset, it also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the 5G.（运用了 介词+关系代词”结构非限 制性定语从句）高分句型 2 It is so intelligent that it is ideal for office workers who are always on the go.（运用 了结果状语从句）随着手机及其他电子设备的普及，低头族到处可见，大街上，公交车上，以年轻人为 主，针对这一问题，请写一篇建议书，呼吁人们尽量抬起头来注意：1.行文连贯流畅；2.参考词汇:低头族:phubber 3.词数:80词左右【答案】The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience. However; more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.Obviously, while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular. Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇建议书。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇建议书：随着手机及其他电子设备的普及，低头 族到处可见，大街上，公交车上，以年轻人为主，针对这一问题，请写一篇建议书，呼 吁人们尽量抬起头来，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；phubber （低头族），electric devices （电 子设备），convenience （方便）,especially （特别是）,everywhere （到处），obviously（明显地） 及harmful （有害的）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰， 保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整，层次清楚，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示 了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇 有 be part of （成为的一局部），care about （关心），be harmful to （对有害），in particular （尤其），call on （号召）以及pay more attention to （关注）,而且还使用了非限定性定语从句"However; more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around/, 时间状语从句"while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular.", 非谓语动词"The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience."及"Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings/, 全文没有语法错误， 上 下句转换自然流畅。学会反思、提升自己是中学生必备的素质。信息时代，智能手机的普及对中学生的自控力提 出了挑战。请你写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1 .反思自己使用手机时的问题；2 .提出合理化的改进措施。注意:1 .词数100左右;3 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4 .题目已给出。Learn to Use Mobile Phones Wisely【答案】Learn to Use Mobile Phones WiselyI have to admit that the mobile phone has greatly distracted my attention while I am studying. I tap, swipe and click too many times a day, sending texts, scrolling on social media and playing games. Upon reflection, I find it gives me nothing but eye ache, blank mind and even phone addiction.I should turn over a new leaf. Firstly, start my morning unplugged. I will place my phone in another room, spending quiet moments without it. I'll never pick it up only when I have to look up some task-related information. Secondly, focus on my real life. I intend to set aside enough time to accompany my parents and do sports. What I want is not a wipe-out of phone in my life, but a rational use of this advanced technology. I should make the best of it instead of being controlled by it.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生针对如何正确地使用手机写出自己的看法。【详解】1 .词汇积累查询：look up 玲 refer to集中：focus on -> concentrate on足够的：enough 玲 sufficient止匕夕卜：secondly 玲 besides先进的：advanced -> progressive2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I will place my phone in another room, spending quiet moments without it.拓展句：I will place my phone in another room so that I will spend quiet moments without it.【点睛】【高分句型 1 ril never pick it up only when I have to look up some task-related information.（when引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型 2 What I want is not a wipe-out of phone in my life, but a rational use of this advanced technology, （what 引导的主语从句）如今越来越多的中学生拥有了自己的智能手机。然而，无论是在课堂还是在休闲时间，都会 见到一些学生玩手机。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈中学生使用智 能手机的利与弊，并提出你自己的看法。要求:1.内容需包括使用智能手机的利与弊；2 .在文章的最后提出你自己的看法。3 .题目自拟【答案】Nowadays smartphones play an important role in our lives. A number of middle school students have owned them. No matter where we are, we can see students playing with their smartphones.Smartphones are really good for students. They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently. And they help students get information more easily. However; everything has two sides. When students spend too much time on smartphones, they don't have time to communicate face to face with their friends or family. Smartphones may take their attention away from their studies. More seriously, using smartphones too much may cause health problems.In my opinion, students should use smartphones wisely. And it's necessary for them to take partin more outdoor activities.【解析】【导语】这是一篇议论文。要求考生谈谈中学生使用智能手机的利弊，并发表自己的看法。【详解】1 .词汇积累在 中起重要作用：play an important role in玲play an important part in获得：gain玲get造成：lead to->cause在我看来：as far as I am concerned玲in my opinion2 .句型拓展同义句原句：They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently.拓展句：They make it convenient for students to keep in touch with their friends or family.【点睛】高分句型 1 No matter where we are, we can see students playing with their smartphones.（运 用了 no matter where引导让步状语从句）高分句型 2When students spend too much time onsmartphones, they don/t have time to communicate face to face with their friends or family.（运用 了 when 弓I 导时间状语从句）你校英文报“观点”栏目征稿，请你以"青少年过度使用手机”为话题写一篇稿件投稿，内容包 括：1 .问题产生的原因和后果；2 .你的建议（至少2点）。注意：1.写作词数为80左右；3 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连货。Smartphone addiction among teenagers【答案】Smartphone addiction among teenagersWith the development of social network applications, we teenagers have become increasingly addicted to smartphones, which has given rise to conflicts between teenagers and their parents.My suggestions on teenagers' overuse of phones are as follows. To start with, it is necessary that our parents set rules on how to use our phones appropriately. Once reached, the agreement has to be strictly executed. Besides, participating in more activities will also help reduce our reliance on phones.No matter what approach we use, only by determination and self-discipline can we solve this problem.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达是征文。校英文报“观点”栏目征稿，请考生以“青少年过度使用手机”为话题写 一篇稿件投稿。【详解】词汇积累沉溺于：become addicted to玲 bury oneself in恰当地：appropriately玲 properly方法：approach玲 method 处理：solve-> deal with2 .句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Besides, participating in more activities will also help reduce our reliance on phones.拓展句： What' more, getting involved in more activities will be of great help to reduce our reliance on phones.【点睛】高分句型 1 With the development of social network applications, we teenagers have become increasingly addicted to smartphones, which has given rise to conflicts between teenagers and their parents.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 No matter what approach we use, only by determination and self-discipline can we solve this problem.（运用了 no matter what引导让步状语从句和倒装句）假定你是李华，你校英文版的官方网站上开辟了一个专栏：Opinion。本期话题是如何解决因 手机依赖（phone addiction）产生的亲子矛盾问题。请你围绕标题用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈 谈自己的一些看法或做法，内容包括：1 .陈述问题2 .解决问题的方法注意：1 .词数80左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。My opinion on smartphone addiction among teenagers【答 案】My opinion on smartphone addiction among teenagersWith the development of apps, young people have become more dependent on smartphones. The overuse of phones is likely to cause problems between teenagers and their parents. Here is my opinion on how to deal with such conflicts caused by phone addiction.First of all, it is important and necessary for us to talk with our parents and set rules on how to use our phones. Once reached, the agreement has to be strictly executed. Only in this way can we prevent any unpleasantness from happening. Being more active and participating in more activities will also help reduce our reliance on phones. Last but not least, we can resort to professionals for an effective approach to free us from our phone dependence, if necessary.No matter what approach we use, we have to realize that it is our parents who we should always trust and depend on in life.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈自己如何解决因手机依 赖(phone addiction)产生的亲子矛盾问题。【详解】1 .词汇积累导致：cause 玲lead to处理：deal with -> handle 重要的：important fvital 2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Being more active and participating in more activities will also help reduce our reliance on phones.拓展句： When we participate more actively in more activities, it will also help to reduce our dependence on mobile phones.【点睛】高分句型 1 First of all, it is important and necessary for us to talk with our parents and set rules on how to use our phones.（运用了 it作形式主语，to do不定式作真正的主语，how 引导宾语从句作介词on的宾语）【高分句型 2 Only in this way can we prevent any unpleasantness from happening, （only 开头 用半倒装）假定你是李华，你校英文周刊本周讨论的话题是"高中生在学校该不该用智能手机"。请你写 篇短文，说明你的观点。请从以下两个观点中选择一个：1 .高中生应该在学校使用智能手机；2 .高中生不应该在学校使用智能手机。注意：1.词数80左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】 I think it is wrong for us students to use smartphones at school. Firstly, we may spend too much time on the screen when we could do more outdoor activities. Secondly, we may get addicted to the phone so that it has a bad effect on our study. In a word, we should focus on our study and lead a healthy life.(2) It is widely known that smartphones play an important role in our daily life. I think we students should be allowed to use smartphones at school. Firstly, with the development of the Internet, we can obtain a wider knowledge more effectively. Secondly, smartphones can keep us contact with our families all the time. Besides, we are old enough to be independent. Above all, I believe that we can make good use of smartphones.【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。