四级写作词汇句型升级.ppt

词汇句词汇句型升级型升级Writing-CET4/CET6 Writing从改卷员的角度从改卷员的角度误解：高分误解：高分=读起来是好文章读起来是好文章正解：高分正解：高分=看起来像好文章看起来像好文章如何改卷：如何改卷：A.5篇范文对照（篇范文对照（2、5、8、11、14分）分）B.扫两点（错点扫两点（错点&亮点）亮点）Writing关键三步关键三步1.1.减少失误（拼写、语法、字迹）减少失误（拼写、语法、字迹）2.2.语言升级语言升级一、一、词汇：词汇：准确多变准确多变-高级词汇高级词汇二、二、句子：句子：变化多样变化多样-句型、语序、语态句型、语序、语态3.3.多用关联词多用关联词Writing词汇句词汇句型升级型升级change your words,change your world.Writing词句升级的词句升级的可操作性可操作性开头句开头句大众脸大众脸：With the development of science and technology,our life is more and more convenient.开头句开头句明星脸明星脸：our life is of increasing convenience.开头句开头句巨星脸巨星脸：The convenience of our daily life is on the rise.词汇句词汇句型升级型升级改，改，沧海变桑田沧海变桑田!Words,my swords!词汇升级词汇升级16组组1.名词化名词化举例举例uThe bicyle is important for us.uThe bicyle is of importance for us.uThe bicyle plays an important role in our life.uThe bicycle,environmental friendliness vehicle,plays an important role in our life.举例举例uAs far as I am concerned.uAs far as I am firmly concerned.uAs far as the private cars are concerned,I firmly believe that 举例举例uI am offering thanks to my parents.uI am,from my bottom heart,offering my gratitude to my loving parents.遣词-N个“恶心”词汇名词：名词：npeoplenadvantagendisadvantagenviewngovernmentngoalndevelopmentWriting表达表达“人们人们”万恶的万恶的“people”Some people believe that education is important.Other people do not agree.because no people can grow without it.1.1 1.1 直接去掉直接去掉 peoplepeopleSome believe that education is important.Others do not agree.because none can grow without it.Writing1.表达表达“人们人们”1.2“人们人们”作作主语主语的时候的时候翻译：一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。翻译：一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。Some people believe that E-book is beneficial for kids.Individuals/folksWriting1.表达表达“人们人们”1.3 表达表达“在人们中在人们中”这个问题引起了人们热烈的讨论。这个问题引起了人们热烈的讨论。This has aroused hot discussion among people.the societythe general public.Writing1.表达表达“人们人们”1.4 当当“人们人们”与与“自然自然”相对的时侯相对的时侯翻译：人与自然的和谐共处翻译：人与自然的和谐共处Harmonious coexistence between people and nature human beingsmankindWriting1.表达表达“人们人们”1.5 表达表达“年轻人年轻人”时时young peopleThe young people should shoulder the burden of developing our country.adolescentsyouthsWriting1.表达表达“人们人们”Summarypeople1.1 直接去掉直接去掉1.2 the society/the general public1.3 individuals/folks1.4 human beingWriting二、二、表达表达“优点优点”advantagemerits/virtue/benefit/strong pointstake advantage of sth?make full use of sths merits/virtue Writing二二.表达表达“优点优点”merit/virtue翻译：我认为两种意见都有好处而且可以共存。翻译：我认为两种意见都有好处而且可以共存。I believe that both views have their own _ and can coexist.merits/virtuesWriting二二.表达表达“缺点缺点”disadvantagedemerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming拖后腿？坏处？代价？短板？瑕疵？拖后腿？坏处？代价？短板？瑕疵？Writing二二.表达表达“缺点缺点”demerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming翻译：我认为我们应该利用互联网的好处而避免翻译：我认为我们应该利用互联网的好处而避免它的坏处。它的坏处。From my point of view,it is wise to take advantage of internet while minimizing its drawbacks.Writing三三.表达表达“观点观点”view view，opinionThere are two opinions about this topic.perspective,standpoint,outlookWriting表达表达“government”government The government should take effective measures to stop it.authority/authoritiesIts time for the universities to The university authoritiesWriting表达表达“goal”goal Our main goal in universities is to develop our academic performance.objective;ambition;target;destination;intention;aim;purpose;Writing表达表达“development”developmentWith the rapid development of societymodernization,globalization,industrialization 遣词-N个“恶心”词汇动词：动词：nthink ntry/want to do sth努力、打算努力、打算nlike,be interested in喜欢喜欢nwill/would 我想，认为，觉得，思考，。：我想，认为，觉得，思考，。：think harbor the idea that take the attitude that hold the view that it is widely shared that it is universally acknowledged thatWriting低分：低分：I believe(think)+宾从宾从高分：高分：(2）句子，句子，as I am firmly convinced.(3)It can be assumed/concluded that+从句从句例句：例句：I think we shouldnt judge others by their looksWe shouldnt judge others by their looks,as I am firmly convinced.It can be concluded that we should 表达表达“认为认为”Writing表达：表达：“努力，想要做某事努力，想要做某事”want/try to do I want/try to pass the CET-4 this semester.endeavor to do sth.do ones utmost to do sth.spare no effort in doing sth.be motivated to do sth.be inspired to do sth.be willing(determined)to do sth.be encouraged to do sth.Writing表达：表达：“喜欢喜欢”like,be interested inI like/am interested in reading books in the spare time.be obsessed/preoccupied with,be fascinated by,be addicted to;exerts a tremendous fascination on sbsth.appeals to sb.,sth.,Writing表达表达“将会将会”will/would?翻译：石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。翻译：石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。Petrol resource will be used up in a few decades.is likely to tends toWritingExercise 1翻译：大多数人认为，英语会变得更重要。翻译：大多数人认为，英语会变得更重要。Most people think that English will become more important.According to most individuals,the significance of English tends to increase.遣词-N个“恶心”词汇形容词：形容词：nimportantngood nBadnManynhelpfulWriting表达表达“重要重要”1 表达表达“重大，显著重大，显著”翻译：翻译：iPod是苹果公司最重大的发明之一是苹果公司最重大的发明之一One of the most _ inventions of Apple company is iPod.significantremarkablepredominantWriting表达表达“重要重要”2 表达表达“关键的关键的”翻译：勤奋是成功的关键翻译：勤奋是成功的关键Hard work is _ to success.essentialcriticalWriting表达表达“重要重要”3 表达表达“不可或缺不可或缺”翻译：数码产品已经成为日常生活不可或缺的翻译：数码产品已经成为日常生活不可或缺的一部分。一部分。Digital products have become _ in daily life.indispensibleWriting表达表达“重要重要”4 一个黄金词组一个黄金词组翻译：互联网对开阔我们的眼界至关重要。翻译：互联网对开阔我们的眼界至关重要。The Internet plays a _ role in widening our eyes.vital、decisivewiden ones eyes?broaden/widen ones horizonsWriting表达表达“重要重要”5 一个钻石句型一个钻石句型A is to B what perfume is to a flower.众所周知，兴趣对于学习至关重要。众所周知，兴趣对于学习至关重要。As is known to us,interests are to study what perfume is to a flower.Writing表达表达“重要重要”Summaryimportant1 significant/remarkable/fundamental2 essential/critical3 indispensable4 play critical/crucial/vital role 5 A is to B what perfume is to a flower.Writing表达表达“好好”good1 表达表达“对对有好处有好处”翻译：上艺术班对孩子们是有好处的翻译：上艺术班对孩子们是有好处的Attending art classes is _good_ for kids.beneficialprofitableWriting表达表达“好好”2 表达表达“好生活、好工作好生活、好工作”decent抓住这个好机会抓住这个好机会catch this decent opportunity工资待遇好工资待遇好decent salaryWriting表达表达“好好”3 表达表达“好主意好主意”a good ideadecentwisesensiblefascinatingfantasticWriting表达表达“好好”4 表达表达“优秀优秀”（好学生、好产品）（好学生、好产品）a good studentoutstandingextraordinaryWriting表达表达“好好”5 表达表达“A比比B更好更好”A is better than B.A is superior to B.翻译：少数服从多数翻译：少数服从多数Majority is superior to Minority.Writing 表达表达“坏坏”1 表达表达“坏的，有不好后果的坏的，有不好后果的”harmfuldetrimentaldisastrousWriting表达表达“坏坏”2 表达表达“A 比比B 坏坏”A is worse than BA is subordinate/inferior to B.Writing表达表达“许多许多”翻译：翻译：很多很多人在金融危机中损失了人在金融危机中损失了很多很多钱。钱。可数：可数：the vast majority of,the overwhelming majority of，numerous;an army of；不可数：不可数：mass;a vast amount ofAn army of investors had lost a vast amount of money in the financial crisis.Numerous investors had gain a mass profit.Writing表达表达“helpful”helpfulIt is helpful for us to eliminate this phenomenon.beneficialrewardingadvantageous遣词-N个“恶心”词汇副词、短语：副词、短语：nverynnowadaysnmore and morenfor example表示程度的副词：表示程度的副词：very 如：如：very large house extremely large house tremendously large house remarkably large house 表达“现在”Nowadays,environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular.currentlyin contemporary societyin this day and age表达“越来越”more and more+adj.=increasingly+adj.=n.is on the risemore and more+n.=a growing number of n.the number of n.is growing表达“例如”for example 1.Take a typical/vivid/concrete example,2.A typical/vivid case in point is表达“例如”for example升级版升级版*举数据例子：举数据例子：Take a typical/vivid/concrete example,it was revealed by the data in a recent report that举生活例子：举生活例子：A typical/vivid case in point is my old friend Ben.He名词化1.1 形容词形容词名词名词翻译：知识非常重要。翻译：知识非常重要。Knowledge is very important.Knowledge is of great importance.*The importance of knowledge is obvious.名词化1.2 副词副词名词名词翻译：我们需要翻译：我们需要客观地客观地看待这个问题看待这个问题We should look on this problem objectively.We should look on this problem in an objective way.名词化1.3 动词动词名词名词We should take measures to save wild animals.We should take measures for the safety of wild animals.名词化Summary1.1 be adj be of+n n is1.2 adv in a adj way/manner1.3 to do sth for sth