高考英语写作专题复习应用文课件.pptx
CheckLifeliesinmovement You will be an English teacher.Which kind of composition do you like best?ABCCorrect format Less or no grammar mistakes Attractive language(words/phrases/sentences)Logical linking words Beautiful handwriting Detailed and accurate content How to add reasonable How to add reasonable details to your details to your compositioncomposition1.To know the standards of good English compositions.2.To train our writing skills by learning to add details to the composition.Learning aimsproblems in writingproblems in writing1.无话可说 2.句式单调 3.毫无章法 一、一、增加同位语增加同位语二、二、补全前因后果或目的补全前因后果或目的三、三、适当将写作内容具体化适当将写作内容具体化四、四、写出个人感受、评价或后果写出个人感受、评价或后果五、五、补充惯用套语（模板）补充惯用套语（模板）一、增加同位语1.增加同位语增加同位语1.IamLiHua,_(我们学校的学生会主席我们学校的学生会主席/来自中国的一位交换生来自中国的一位交换生).2.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,_(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).thechairmanoftheStudentsUnionofmyschool.anexchangestudentfromChina.hopefullyagirlwithinterestssimilartomine.二、补全前因后果或目的2.补充前因后果或目的补充前因后果或目的1._(知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,）Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthisactivity.2._(为为了获得一些实践经验了获得一些实践经验)Implanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.3._(由于我有过丢钱包的经历）由于我有过丢钱包的经历）IcanfeelhowanxiousMrStevenwillbenow.KnowingthatyoushowgreatinterestinChinesetraditionalculture,Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Since/As/BecauseIhavetheexperienceoflosingmypurse，Becauseoftheexperienceof.三、适当将写作内容具体化1.Theactivitywillbeheld_(具体时间、地点）具体时间、地点）2.IknowtheownerisSteven_(相关身份信息相关身份信息)3.WhenIreceivedthedictionary,Ifoundthat_(具体存在问题具体存在问题如错印、缺页如错印、缺页等等)3.适当将写作内容具体化适当将写作内容具体化 from9a.m.to10a.m.onMarch1inClassroom501.a17-year-oldstudentfromEngland.thereweresomemisprintsandpagesfrom23to45weremissing.举例：例：suchasforexampleincluding我擅长于运动。我擅长于运动。u,such as A，B and C/so on.u,including A，B and C/so on.Iamgoodatsports,suchasswimming,playingbasketballandrunning/soon.Iamgoodatsports,includingswimming,playingbasketballandrunning/soon.u for example Iamgoodatsports.Forexample,Iplaybasketballaswellastennis.四、写出个人感受、评价或后果1.Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas,_(这必将有助于你学到更多的中国文化）这必将有助于你学到更多的中国文化）2.Wecansetoutearly_(以便我们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）以便我们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）3.Therearequiteafewmissingpages,_(变得很难理解这本书变得很难理解这本书)sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.whichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture.makingitdifficultforustounderstandthebook.4.写出个人感受、写出个人感受、评价或后果价或后果五、补充惯用套语（模板）1._（我很荣幸能向你介绍我们中国的传统文化）（我很荣幸能向你介绍我们中国的传统文化）2._（我写信给你是为了表达感谢你帮我修车）（我写信给你是为了表达感谢你帮我修车）3._（期待着你的早日回复）（期待着你的早日回复）5.惯用套语惯用套语ItsmypleasuretohavethechancetointroduceourChinesetraditionalculturetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Imwritingthelettertoexpressmygratitudetoyouforhelpingmerepairmycar.Action:1.Select the best one composition in your group.2.Share your opinions about how to add reasonable details to this composition.Discussion and presentation暂停停5分分钟DearTim,LearningthattheCOVID19isalsospreadinginAmericaandyouareaskingforadvicesinceChinesehavedonequitewellinfightinginthisbattle,Iamwritingthislettertoofferyousomesuggestions.SincetheCOVID19ishighlyinfectious,youshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectyourselffromthevirus.Tobeginwith,youshouldwashyourhandsfrequentlyandavoidlargecrowds.Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeepyourselffarawayfromthevirus.Moreimportantly,youmustwearprotectiveclothingoratleastmaskwhenyouhavetogoout,astheprotectiveclothingandmaskserveasavitalbarrierbetweenyouandthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,keepingahealthylifestyleisofgreatimportance,includingenoughrest,abalanceddietandregularexercise.Ifnot,youaremorelikelytobeinfectedbecauseyoumaybeinpoorhealth.Iwouldbegratefulifmysuggestionswillbeofhelptoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua补充目的充目的/原因原因具体化具体化补充后果充后果惯用套语学会分析优秀的范文不同的主题不同的模板背诵+灵活运用并不是每篇文章都需要使用到这5种增加细节的方法；根据实际，进行合理的、适当的增加。Howtoaddreasonabledetailstoyourcomposition一、一、增加同位语增加同位语二、二、补全前因后果或目的补全前因后果或目的三、三、适当将写作内容具体化适当将写作内容具体化四、四、写出个人感受、评价或后果写出个人感受、评价或后果五、五、补充惯用套语（模板）补充惯用套语（模板）AgoodwriterHomework假定你是李华，你校假定你是李华，你校2022022年英语夏令营俱乐部正在招年英语夏令营俱乐部正在招聘团队组长，你有意参加。请你发一封邮件向主办方聘团队组长，你有意参加。请你发一封邮件向主办方提出申请，内容包括：提出申请，内容包括：1.1.自我简介自我简介 2.2.自己的优势（性格，爱好，英语能力等）自己的优势（性格，爱好，英语能力等）注意：注意：1.1.词数不少于词数不少于100100；2.2.可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3.3.称呼和落款已给出，不计入总词数。称呼和落款已给出，不计入总词数。Thanks for your listening!
