Letter of Recommendation 课件--高考英语作文备考.pptx
Letter of Recommendation 2假设你是假设你是RachelRachel，请写一封信向你的朋友，请写一封信向你的朋友TinaTina介绍你的家乡介绍你的家乡-汕头，并邀请她来汕头旅游。汕头，并邀请她来汕头旅游。写作要点如下：写作要点如下：1.1.汕头的地理位置和气候汕头的地理位置和气候2.2.汕头的著名景点和特产特色汕头的著名景点和特产特色3.3.你对家乡的感情你对家乡的感情写作要求：写作要求：1.1001.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数2.2.内容需包括要点，可适当增加细节使表达连贯内容需包括要点，可适当增加细节使表达连贯Dear TinaDear Tina，You asked me about my hometown in your last letter,so I am You asked me about my hometown in your last letter,so I amwriting to introduce it to you.writing to introduce it to you.I sincerely hope that you can pay a visit to Shantou.I sincerely hope that you can pay a visit to Shantou.Looking forward to your early reply.Looking forward to your early reply.location be located in/on/to lie in/on/topopulationhas a population of with a population of.1.location&populationbe located in/on/to lie in/on/toIt has a population of with a population of.1.location&populationeg：1.汕头位于中国的东南部。Shantou is located in the southeast of China.2.汕头有人口500万。Shantou has a population of 5 million.3.汕头是一座美丽的海滨城市。Shantou is a beautiful coastal city.TIPS:活用学过的句式活用学过的句式1.Shantou is located in the southeast of China.2.Shantou has a population of 5 million.3.Shantou is a beautiful coastal city.1.location&populationimprove your sentence:1+2：状语（非谓语动词短语），主句状语（非谓语动词短语），主句Located in the southeast of China，Shantou has a population of 5 million.1+3：S，+同位语，同位语，+VShantou,a beautiful coastal city,is located in the southeast of China.Useful expressions1+2+3：状语（非谓语动词短语），主句，状语（非谓语动词短语），主句，+which（非限制性定语从句）（非限制性定语从句）Located in the southeast of China，Shantou is a beautiful coastal city,which has a population of 5 million.orLocated in the southeast of China，Shantou is a beautiful coastal city with a population of 5 million.TIPS:活用学过的句式活用学过的句式eg.汕头气候很不错。Shantous climate is good.+_+improve your sentence:Useful expressions1.主句，with+n 短语People in Shantou can always enjoy a _ climate _(有大量阳光).2.sothat句式The climate of Shantou is so pleasant that _(你会觉得不太冷不太热)pleasant/mildwith plenty of sunshineyou will feel neither too cold nor too hot2.ClimateTIPS:添加细节丰富句子添加细节丰富句子1.有很多名胜古迹在汕头，例如There are many places of interest in Shantou,such as 2.旅游景点tourist attraction 3.吸引来自国内外的游客attract visitors from home and abroad4.因/作为而出名be famous for5.在丰富，盛产be rich in /be abundant in6.我强烈推荐I strongly recommend that you（should）do sth3.place of interest&specialty Word Bank南澳岛南澳岛老妈宫老妈宫 礐石风景区礐石风景区老市区老市区牛肉丸牛肉丸功夫茶功夫茶肠粉肠粉潮剧潮剧ShantouNanao Island Temple of Old Mother Chao opera rice noodle roll Kungfu tea beef ball the old town of Shantou Queshi Scenic area 3.place of interest&specialty improve your sentence:1.Nanao Island，_ (被山和海包围)，is the most beautiful island in Shantou.2.There are many places of interest,such as Queshi Scenic area，Temple of Old Mother and so on,_ (吸引了国内外非常多的旅客)3.I strongly recommend Haibin Road，_ _(在那可以散步，吹海风，看风景。)which is surrounded by mountains and seawhich attract many visitors from home and abroad.where you can take a walk,feel the sea breeze and enjoy the harbour scenery.3.place of interest&specialty TIPS:善用定语从句善用定语从句4.汕头有很多海鲜。它因为功夫茶而出名。Shantou has lots of seafood.It is famous for Kungfu Tea.improve your sentence:1.Shantou _ seafood.2._(作为一个海滨城市),Shantou is abundant in seafood._,it is famous for Kungfu Tea.is rich/abundant inAs a coastal city,Besides3.place of interest&specialty TIPS:单词换短语单词换短语句句有衔接句句有衔接Your version:It is famous for Kungfu Tea.还是觉得表达太俗气？还是觉得表达太俗气？improve your sentence:5.eg.汕头人的生活不能离开功夫汕头人的生活不能离开功夫茶。因此茶。因此，无论什么候拜访当地人，无论什么候拜访当地人，客人肯客人肯会被热情的主人招待功茶。会被热情的主人招待功茶。People in Shantou can not live without Kungfu tea.Therefore,whenever guests visit a local family,they are sure to be served withthe hot tea by the enthusiastic host.3.place of interest&specialty TIPS:前因后果增加画面感前因后果增加画面感Useful expressionsWhat主从+be+that表从eg.让我骄傲的是，汕头是个充满生机和值得拜访的地方。What makes me proud is that Shantou is full of life and well worth visiting.作为一个土生土长的汕头人，我深深的爱着我的家乡As a local boy/girl in Shantou,I feel deep love for my hometown.4.Love for your hometownTIPS:利用从句的组合让句利用从句的组合让句子更出彩子更出彩假设你是假设你是RachelRachel，请写一封信向你的朋友，请写一封信向你的朋友TinaTina介绍你的家乡介绍你的家乡-汕头，并邀请她来汕头旅游。汕头，并邀请她来汕头旅游。写作要点如下：写作要点如下：1.1.汕头的地理位置和气候汕头的地理位置和气候2.2.汕头的著名景点和特产特色汕头的著名景点和特产特色3.3.你对家乡的感情你对家乡的感情写作要求：写作要求：1.1001.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数2.2.内容需包括要点，可适当增加细节使表达连贯内容需包括要点，可适当增加细节使表达连贯Dear TinaDear Tina，You asked me about my hometown in your last letter,so I am You asked me about my hometown in your last letter,so I amwriting to introduce it to you.writing to introduce it to you.I sincerely hope that you can pay a visit to Shantou.I sincerely hope that you can pay a visit to Shantou.Looking forward to your early reply.Looking forward to your early reply.Possible versionDear Tina,You asked me about my hometown in your last letter,so I am writing to introduce it to you.Shantou,a beautiful seashore city,is located in the southeast of China.People here can always enjoy a pleasant climate with plenty of sunshine.There are many places of interest,such as Nanao Island,Zhongxin Holiday Hotel and so on,which attract many tourists every year.As a seashore city,Shantou is abundant in seafood and agricultural products.Besides,it is also famous for its local tea culture.Guests are sure to be served with Kongfu tea by the enthusiastic host when they visit a local family.As a local girl in Shantou,I feel deep love for my hometown,which is full of life and well worth visiting.I sincerely hope that you can pay a visit to Shantou.Looking forward to your early reply.
