Unit3 Writing--My concern about the environment 课件--牛津深圳版英语九年级下册.pptx

My concerns about the environment Environmental problems and solutionsUnit 3 WritingairriversseasfieldsanimalsEarthwaterforestsplantspeoplemountainsWhat things are there on Earth?There are.Is the Earth the same as before?air pollutionThe factories produceLets review:environmental problems and solutionsThe cars give offHow to stop the air pollutionstop the factoriescontrol the number of.use public transportation.water pollutionThe factories pourThe waste water.kill.stopHow to stop the water pollution How to save waterturn off Take a showernoise pollutionHow to stop the noise pollutionMake posters to promote the bad effects.Talk to the building manager.Contact the city government.litter pollutionmountains of.plastic bags.one-off lunch boxHow to stop the litter pollutionPick up the litterPut up a sign saying“Do not litter!”Use environmental-friendly bagsSort the rubbish and recycle or reuse it.Save energy Solution&ReasonsUse green energy Recycling There are lots of environmental problems.As a junior high school student,Li Hua worries about the energy consumption problem most,so he decided to make a speech about his concerns on the energy saving and the environment protection to call on all students to work together to protect the environment.Task 1:Please read his speech script and summarize the structure of it.Li Huas concerns about the environment Good morning,everyone!Im Li Hua.Its my great honor to stand here to give a speech about my concerns about the environment.Environment is very important to us.However,with the development of economy,environment problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.Among these problems,I worry about the energy consumption problem most.Although the world develops much faster and better,the resources such as the water,the electricity and the oil on the Earth are getting fewer and fewer.So,it is necessary for us to take action to save the energy so as to protect the environment.Here are some of my suggestions.First of all,it is necessary for us to save water.Water is the source of life.No water,no life.However,the water is limited.Therefore,we should not only protect drinking-water and stop polluting it,but also make full use of it.In addition,it is high time to save electricity.We cant imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Whats more,we had better recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,paper,bottles,and so on.Last but not the least,we have to use high-technology to develop new energy such as solar power,wind power and nuclear power.In short,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the energy and environment.If we can work together to save energy in these ways,we will our Earth a greener and better one to live in!1 Match the main ideas with each paragraphHow to save energyThe beginning of the speech,energy problems and causesConclusion(总结)Para.1Read for main ideaPara.2Para.3Para.4Li Huas concern about the environment结构结构（structure）Para 1:引言引言 the beginning of the speechPara 3:解决的方法解决的方法（advice）First of all,save water In addition,save electrcityLast but not the least,develop new energy总结、呼吁（总结、呼吁（hope）Para 2:问题及原因问题及原因 problems and reasons Whats more,recycle.Good morning,everyone!Im Li Hua.Its my great honor to stand here to give a speech about my concerns about the environment.Environment is very important to us.However,with the development of economy,environment problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.Among these problems,I worry about the energy consumption problem most.Although the world develops much faster and better,the resources such as the water,the electricity and the oil on the Earth are getting fewer and fewer.So,it is necessary for us to take action to save the energy so as to protect the environment.Here are some of my suggestions.First of all,it is necessary for us to save water.Water is the source of life.No water,no life.However,the water is limited.Therefore,we should not only protect drinking-water and stop polluting it,but also make full use of it.In addition,it is high time to save electricity.We cant imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Whats more,we had better recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,paper,bottles,and so on.Last but not the least,we have to use high-technology to develop new energy such as solar power,wind power and nuclear power.In short,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the energy and environment.If we can work together to save energy in these ways,we will our Earth a greener and better one to live in!2.Find out some useful expressions in each paragraphuseful words or phrases _more useful and beautiful sentences:_3.Brainstorm（思考）（思考）and write:If you are Li Hua,what other useful words or phrases and sentences will you think of to help write the article better?(2minutes)1.巧用巧用with结构和比较级句型结构和比较级句型随着科技的发展，我们的生活变得越来越便捷。With the development of science and technology,our life is becoming more and more convenient.2.过渡句过渡句 in my opinion/as far as Im concerned,it is high time for sb.to do sth.我认为，我们是时候要采取措施保护我们的传我认为，我们是时候要采取措施保护我们的传统文化了。统文化了。As far as Im concerned,it is high time for us to take measures to protect our traditional culture.3.常用序数词、过渡词表达层次：常用序数词、过渡词表达层次：To begin with,then,furthermore,finallyTo start with,next,in addition/additionally,finallyMost important of all,moreover,last but not the leastFor one thing,for anotherOn the one hand,on the other hand4:conclusion/Appeal/Hope总而言之总而言之：all in all;in a word;in brief;in short;on the whole;to sum up总结全文的句型总结全文的句型1.Everyone should bear the responsibility to protect.2.Everyone can make a great contribution to protecting.3.To cherish.is to love ourselves.4.We had better take immediate action/steps to fight against5.If we take measures immediately,we will.Environmental problems&solutions1.air pollution&protect the air2.litter pollution&solutions 3.noise pollution&solutions 4.water pollution&save water5.energy problem&save energy Writing taskMy concerns about the environmentWork in groups and choose one problem from the following five ones that you care about most.Write a composition to show your concerns about the problem and its solutions.Your speech script should include the following four aspects:1.The beginning of your speech2.The environment problem you care about most and its causes3.The possible solutions4.The conclusion and hopeWriting taskMy concerns about the environment评改与评分，评分标准如下中考作文评分项目具体内容分数Content 内容指是否切题；是否包括所要写的文章的所有的要点，并有所发挥；总分6 分Accuracy 准确性指词汇、短语拼写、时态、句型、行文格式的准确性；总分6 分Fluency 流畅性指文章的结构、上下文的连贯性、用词造句的流畅度和表达的得体性等总分3分Please protect and love the environment.Then every life can bloom out of the most beautiful color.每个人的生活才能绽放出最美的颜色每个人的生活才能绽放出最美的颜色