高考英语复习 书面表达的训练策略.ppt

高考英语书面表达的训练策略高考英语书面表达的训练策略2021/8/11 星期三1书面表达如何写？书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。的词语扩展成句子。4联句成文：联句成文：注意：注意：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾语篇衔接语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写、检查修改，规范抄写2021/8/11 星期三2练练 习习根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。审题字词文参考答案2021/8/11 星期三3审审 题题1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故3、人称：第三人称Tom4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。2021/8/11 星期三4字字 词词 文文词：torideabiketohithisbikeandfalloff句：Tomwasridingabikealongthestreet.Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloffit.文：Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarwasrunningtowardshimfastandhithisbike,thenhefelloffit.2021/8/11 星期三5参参 考考 答答 案案Tomwasaluckydog.(heading)Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenacarrantowardshimfast.Hewassofrightenedthathequicklyturnedtotheleftside.Butitwastoolate.Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloff.Themomentthedriverrealizedthathehadcausedanaccident,hegotsuchafrightthathetookflightwithhiscar.2021/8/11 星期三6Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.FortunatelyTomwasnothurtbadly.Besides,apasser-byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar,whichhereportedtothepolice.Nowthedriverhasbeencaughtandwillbepunishedforhiswrongdeed.Anyhow,Tomwillrememberthisexperienceforever,Ibelieve.2021/8/11 星期三7 改写语句改写语句标点、时态标点、时态1.Dear Mr.Green:I received the bookHarry Potteryou give me the other day.Dear Mr.Green,I received the book“Harry Potter”you gave me the other day.2021/8/11 星期三8完善语句完善语句(句子结构）句子结构）2.Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarwasrunningtowardshimfast.Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenacarrantowardshimfast.2021/8/11 星期三9完善语句完善语句(句子结构）句子结构）3.SoonhewentawayandleftTomhelplessonthespot.Hewassoonout of sight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.2021/8/11 星期三10完善语句（关联词语）完善语句（关联词语）4.()Tomwasnothurtbadly.()Apasser-byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecarFortunately,Tomwasnothurtbadly.Besides,Apasser-byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar2021/8/11 星期三11给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题2021/8/11 星期三12 怎样写开头（第一段）怎样写开头（第一段）请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。2021/8/11 星期三13怎样写开头（第一段）怎样写开头（第一段）Which is the best?Which is the best?1.Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.2.There are different kinds of reasons why country children can t go to school.3.As is known to all,many children in the country are out of school today.4.Nowadays,more and more attention is paid to the country children out of school.5.In the country,many children cant go to school today.2021/8/11 星期三14怎样写记事部分（怎样写记事部分（body)body)1.逻辑清晰2.层次分明3.尽可能的使用较复杂的语句。如定语从句、各种状语从句等。4.尽可能的使语句多样化。如倒装句、强调句、感叹句、分词及短语等。5.尽可能的长短句搭配。2021/8/11 星期三15Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenacarrantowardshimfast.Hewassofrightenedthathequicklyturnedtotheleftside.Butitwastoolate.Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloff.Themomentthedriverrealizedthathehadcausedanaccident,hegotsuchafrightthathetookflightwithhiscar.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.FortunatelyTomwasnothurtbadly.Besides,apasser-byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar,whichhereportedtothepolice.Nowthedriverhasbeencaughtandwillbepunishedforhiswrongdeed.2021/8/11 星期三16技技巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式2021/8/11 星期三171.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedntpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthink highly of him.A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.2021/8/11 星期三186.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death,shewentpalewithsorrow.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house.2021/8/11 星期三19丰富的句式：丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.2021/8/11 星期三203、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.2021/8/11 星期三216、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.2021/8/11 星期三228、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.2021/8/11 星期三231Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.2021/8/11 星期三246.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）10HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.2021/8/11 星期三25高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.2021/8/11 星期三263.表示因果关系表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse2021/8/11 星期三275.表示时间关系表示时间关系当的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before直到:until一就:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从:since从那时起:fromthenon2021/8/11 星期三286.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;2021/8/11 星期三298.进行举例说明进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth2021/8/11 星期三3010.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword11.其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词Therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;2021/8/11 星期三31On one side oftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.On the other side,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuildingourlibrary.(NMET1999范文)As far as I know,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.(NMET2001范文)Whats more,Icangotobedearlier.(NMET2001范文)三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词2021/8/11 星期三32PracticePractice1 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet2._heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar_Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_thepolicecame.4._heheardthecryforhelp,he5.jumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas2021/8/11 星期三335.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?_,dowritetomesoon.6.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping._,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.7.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmy8.friends._,Isaved$80.8.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth._,itmaymakeusfat.Ifnot/soInadditionAsaresultWhatsworse2021/8/11 星期三34联合国教科文组织某考察团正在联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。儿童在此免费就读。注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100-120之间。之间。Practice书面表达：书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.2021/8/11 星期三35Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978 and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much better lifethanbefore.书面表达：书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.2021/8/11 星期三36Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltand which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful oneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay herethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.2021/8/11 星期三37Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much better lifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltandthenewlybuiltteachingbuildingwhich has 4 storeys is the most beautiful oneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.2021/8/11 星期三3820012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.1717分分2021/8/11 星期三39高考满分作文Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesince our homework has reduced.Before that,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwas the only thing weshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed until11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuch moreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesin my spare time.Intheevening,I alsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Ino longer stayuplate;on the contrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.In short,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.2021/8/11 星期三40书面表达常用语句书面表达常用语句1.1.书信书信2.2.Thanksforyourlastletter.3.Iamwritingjusttoinformyou4.Inreplytoyourlastletter,Iamwriting5.toexplainthetwoquestionsasfollows:6.开头Lookingforwardtoyourreply/hearingfromyou!Thanksforyourconsideration.Doremembermetoyourparents!结尾2021/8/11 星期三412.2.叙事叙事Itisquiteobvious/clearthat(很显然)Thereisnodoubtthat(毫无疑问)Takeasanexample.(以为例）Ononehand,ontheotherhand(一方面，另一方面)Onlyinthiswayshallwe(只有这样我们才能)Asfarasisconcerned,Iprefer(就而言，我更)Measures/Actionshouldbetakento(必须采取措施去)Forthereasonsgivenabove,Ifeelthat(鉴于以上原因，我觉得Whatthesepeoplefailtoconsideristhat(这些人没有想到的是.)Undoubtedlythereisalongwaytogobefore(毫无疑问要还有很长的路要走）2021/8/11 星期三42Therefore,Istronglyrecommendthat(因此，因此，我强烈建议我强烈建议Allthefactsshowthat（所有的事实显示（所有的事实显示)Ilikenotonlybecausebutalsobecause(我喜欢我喜欢不仅因为不仅因为而且因为而且因为)Iamwritingtoyoutoinquireabout(我写信给你想询问我写信给你想询问)Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/at(我给你我给你写信表示我对写信表示我对的不满）的不满）Iapologizetoyoufor(我为我为向你道歉）向你道歉）Iamgratefultoyoufor(我为我为向你表示感谢）向你表示感谢）Mr.Green,mybestfriend,isteachingMr.Green,afavoriteteacherfromtheUSA,isteaching2021/8/11 星期三43信头信内地址、姓名称呼正 文结束语签名附言、附件（Enc:/Encl:)Letter writing2021/8/11 星期三44A LetterNov 5,2001Wuzheng Middle SchoolZhejiang P.R.C.JackTongxiang High SchoolDearMary,BodyYours,Jack2021/8/11 星期三45亲人、家属：Yours lovingly ;Yours affectionately朋友、平辈：Sincerely yours Yours sincerely 上级、长者：Yours respectfully Respectfully yours 单位、部门：Yours sincerely Yours faithfully 结束语Closing2021/8/11 星期三46信封正面Stamp发信人姓名收信人姓名Airmail2021/8/11 星期三47信封背面发信人姓名2021/8/11 星期三48 June 5th,2000Dear Mr.Zhao,I am sorry that I am unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet.The school expects me to play an important part in it.And I will be back to class in a week.I hope you will excuse my absence.(in fact,I take a French leave)Yours respectfully CharlesCharlesEncl:the PE Teachers certificate(Encl:the PE Teachers certificate(证明）证明）便 条（病/事假条）2021/8/11 星期三49（NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT)口头通知：Ladies and Gentlemen,May I have you attention please?正 文书面通知：NOTICE In celebration of May Day,there will be-正 文 School OfficeApril 25th,2000 通知、通告2021/8/11 星期三50Wednesday May 5th Cloudy It is nearly a month since I began keeping diaries.I find it a very good exercise in English composition.I got back my essay on A Visit to the Park.It was marked with A.There were only three mistakes in it:one in grammar and two in idiom.Im happy to see that I can now express myself in English more usually than ever before.,日记 Diary2021/8/11 星期三51HomeworkRewritingusingconjunctivewords2021/8/11 星期三52Practice2请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。学的主要原因及你的看法。原因原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。重要的作用。2021/8/11 星期三53Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Mostfamiliesarepoorandcantaffordtheireducation.Theyhavetostayathomeandmakemoney.Someparentsthinkdaughtersneedntgotoschool.Theydontletthemgotoschool.Somechild