（江苏专用）高考英语一轮复习 高考写作6大增分锦囊与6类背诵宝典 6大增分锦囊 5.教你如何行文及润色课件.ppt

写作进阶提升之五写作进阶提升之五教你如何行文及润色教你如何行文及润色 写作进阶提升写作进阶提升2021/8/11 星期三1五五个个步步骤骤1、审题审题（文体、主题、内容、人称、时态）文体、主题、内容、人称、时态）2、提炼要点，、提炼要点，思考关键词思考关键词3、紧扣要点，连词成句、紧扣要点，连词成句4、连句成文：、连句成文：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（增加时间、地点条件等）背景（增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾5、检查修改，规范抄写、检查修改，规范抄写语篇衔接语篇衔接2021/8/11 星期三2 Some students think it is not good for people to keep pets in cities,because it will cause pollution to our environment.And the pets always make a noise that will disturb others.However,others think we should see the positive aspects of keeping animals.It is very necessary for the lonely old people to have company and pets can be a good choice.If we can get on well with the animals,it will enrich our life,too.I think if we really love animals,we neednt show our love to them by keeping them,because the pets are not free and its not fair to the animals.If we donate the money used in keeping pets to some animal organizations,it will be more helpful to the animals.(By Dong Shuoyi)2021/8/11 星期三3 Some say that dogs make a big noise in the community,and sometime they even hurt people.Besides,animal drops also pollute the environment.They dont agree to have pets in cities.Although I admit all the disadvantages they mentioned,compared to the highlights,pets bring such shortcomings seem to be as small as a pencil tip.As we see,a lovely kitty always keeps the old in company.It may bring good health to the old,as well as joy.And nowadays the harmonious society is being constantly promoted.We humans should live with animal friends in harmony as well.Only in this way can we make our earth a paradise for all the living.So,choose an animal friend and be a friend to animals.(By Zhuang Chenxi)2021/8/11 星期三41.增加较复杂的句子结构增加较复杂的句子结构 2.使用丰富的词汇使用丰富的词汇3.适当运用结构词和关联词适当运用结构词和关联词:however,therefore,thus,after a while,all of a sudden,at last,as a result,in fact 等等,使句子使句子 更为流畅。更为流畅。As far as I am concerned,I strongly hold the opinion that this plan should be carried out continually not only because it gives us more space to develop our critical thinking and independent ability but also because we really feel much happier than ever before.书面表达注意事项书面表达注意事项2021/8/11 星期三5 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It had bravely saved my little sister.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It was our brave Ah Fu who had bravely saved my little sister.I met an old friend in the street.The street was very crowded.I met an old friend in the street,which was very crowded.We can make progress in English only in this way.Only in this way can we make progress in English.(1)强调句强调句(2)倒装句倒装句(3)复合句复合句2021/8/11 星期三6(4)介词短语介词短语 My mother sat in a chair with a newspaper in her hand.My mother sat in a chair.There was a newspaper in her hand.（with 复合结构）复合结构）She left and did not say goodbye.She left without saying goodbye.(5)分词短语分词短语 Satisfied with the result,he decided to go on with a new experiment.He was satisfied with the result,so he decided to go on with a new experiment.（分词做状语）（分词做状语）2021/8/11 星期三7并列and;as well as;also;选择or;eitheror;or else;otherwise原因because;owing to;due to;on account of;thanks to结果so;therefore;thus;as a result 时间when;soon after;before;later;first;and then;next;finally;afterwards.比较on the contrary;on the other hand;like 转折but;yet;however;although;in spite of;instead;递进besides;moreover;even;in addition 举例for example/instance;such as;that is;namely ;总结after all ;in short;in general;generally speaking 语篇衔接的过渡词语2021/8/11 星期三8润色提升示例润色提升示例2021/8/11 星期三9 你你你你的的的的英英英英国国国国朋朋朋朋友友友友正正正正在在在在做做做做一一一一个个个个课课课课题题题题；世世世世界界界界各各各各地地地地的的的的生生生生日日日日庆庆庆庆祝祝祝祝方方方方式式式式。他他他他请请请请你你你你介介介介绍绍绍绍中中中中国国国国学学学学生生生生过过过过生生生生日日日日的的的的方方方方式式式式。请请请请你你你你根根根根据据据据以下要点写一篇短文：以下要点写一篇短文：以下要点写一篇短文：以下要点写一篇短文：一、通常方式一、通常方式一、通常方式一、通常方式1 1 1 1生日聚会生日聚会生日聚会生日聚会2 2 2 2生日礼物生日礼物生日礼物生日礼物3 3 3 3生日祝福生日祝福生日祝福生日祝福二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由 *词数词数词数词数100-120100-120100-120100-1202021/8/11 星期三10172021/8/11 星期三11 292021/8/11 星期三12即时训练即时训练2021/8/11 星期三13 你班同学参加了“二十一世纪中学生英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:城市内是否可以豢养宠物(狗和猫)。请你根据下表所提供的信息，用英语给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。反对饲养宠物的同学认为支持饲养宠物的同学认为造成环境污染安慰孤寡老人吵闹声，甚至伤人人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣注意：1.信的开头已为你写好;2.词数100左右。Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.书面表达（满分30分）2021/8/11 星期三14饲养宠物 keep pets污染环境 pollute the environment吵闹声，甚至伤人be noisy and may even attack people安慰孤寡老人 give lonely elderly people comfort和谐相处 live in harmony with增添生活情趣 add fun to.2021/8/11 星期三152021/8/11 星期三16