高中英语写作常见错误句子类型 课件.ppt

写作对策写作对策考核考核 目标目标1.能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子2。能根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达。能根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达篇章写作要求：篇章写作要求：统一性统一性(unity)：围绕主题：围绕主题连贯性连贯性(coherence)：逻辑性：逻辑性,过渡词过渡词一致性一致性(consistency)：时态，人称：时态，人称2021/8/11 星期三1英语作文要求：英语作文要求：内容：观点明确，内容充实，内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分理由充分.10语言：表达正确，语言流畅语言：表达正确，语言流畅,用词恰当，用词恰当，10 句式多样化句式多样化.组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致 52021/8/11 星期三2写作步骤：写作步骤：1。写前准备：看清题意，理清思路（写什么）。写前准备：看清题意，理清思路（写什么）2。写作过程：提纲（。写作过程：提纲（outline）动笔（动笔（writing）检查（检查（check）2021/8/11 星期三3正确连接分句n1.The book was interesting,I read it rapidly.nThe book was interesting,and I read it rapidly.n2.The girls cleaned the desks and chairs,the boys mopped the floor.n The girls cleaned the desks and chairs,and the boys mopped the floor.2021/8/11 星期三4n避免误置修饰语n3.At the age of six my father began to teach me English.nMy father began to teach me English when I was six.n4.I almost got good marks in every subject.nI got good marks in almost every subject.2021/8/11 星期三5n注意逻辑主语n5.To be well-informed,reading newspaper is a good habit.n To be well-informed,we should read newspaper every day.n6.Coming out of the classroom,my heart was beating very fast.nComing out of the classroom,I felt my heart beating very fast.2021/8/11 星期三6避免指代不清n7.She asked her sister why she wasnt invited to the party.n She asked why her sister wasnt invited to the party.n She asked her sister,“Why wasnt I invited to the party?”2021/8/11 星期三7n避免人称代词混淆n8.We had been on the plane for eighteen hours,and you got pretty tired of sitting that long.nWe had been on the plane for eighteen hours,and we got pretty tired of sitting that long.2021/8/11 星期三8n避免重复n9.In my opinion,I think we should ask them for advice.nIn my opinion,we should ask them for advice.nI think we should ask them for advice.2021/8/11 星期三9n尽量避免汉语干扰n10.The books in our library are getting more and more.nThere are more and more books in our library.nThe number of books in our library is getting bigger and bigger.2021/8/11 星期三10n11.During staying in Beijing,I visited a lot of places of interest.nDuring my stay in Beijing,I nWhile staying in Beijing,I 2021/8/11 星期三11n12.There is a man wants to see you downstairs.nA young man wants to see you downstairs.nThere is a man who wants to see you downstairs.2021/8/11 星期三12n13.I will not forget my dear friends forever.n I will never forget my dear friends.2021/8/11 星期三13n14.They will come to visit you when you are convenient.n They will come to visit you when it is convenient to you.n They will come to visit you at your convenience.2021/8/11 星期三14n注意时态一致n15.I went shopping yesterday.There were many people in the supermarket.People are carrying baskets or taking carts.I struggled in the crowds picking up the things I need.When I finished my shopping I am so tired.2021/8/11 星期三15n注意时态一致nI went shopping yesterday.There were many people in the supermarket.People were carrying baskets or taking carts.I struggled in the crowds picking up the things I needed.When I finished my shopping,I was so tired.2021/8/11 星期三16nWrite a short paragraph about:nLack of sleepn We are busy reviewing our lessons and doing exercises all the time.Every evening we work till very late.We dont have enough time for sleep.Im afraid lack of sleep will do harm to our health.2021/8/11 星期三172021/8/11 星期三18