2023年小升初英语记叙文写作指导.docx

2023年小升初英语记叙文写作指导记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事务的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个 W ( what, who, when, where, why )和一个 H ( how )。记叙文的重点在于述说和描写，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清晰，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。 1. 叙述的人称 英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经验。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过我来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受我活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，干脆把故事中的情节呈现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea. 2. 动词的时态 在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于改变。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区分于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的美丽之处就在于这些动词时态的改变，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、显明的层次感和立体感。 3. 叙述的依次 记叙一件事要有肯定的依次。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最简单操作，较简单给读者供应有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也简单使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳动，从而为文章所吸引，深化其中。但这些方法假如运用不当，则简单弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。 4. 叙述的过渡 过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯穿的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事务转换以及由概括说明到详细叙述时。如：In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.