高考英语第一轮复习之写作技能提升 句子润色 简单句合并成复合句课件.ppt

有时为了使句子的连贯性更强有时为了使句子的连贯性更强,表达也更为贴切、自然表达也更为贴切、自然,我们在两个或我们在两个或者多个简单句之间加上者多个简单句之间加上and,but,or(或或者者,否则否则),for(因为因为),while(而而,却却),when(就在这个时候就在这个时候),not onlybut also等并列连词等并列连词,使其成为并列复合句。使其成为并列复合句。如：如：句子润色：简单句合并成复合句句子润色：简单句合并成复合句2021/8/11 星期三1(1)Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours.Well be back at about 11 oclock.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours and well be back at about 11 oclock.2021/8/11 星期三2(2)You must hurry.Youll miss the plane.You must hurry or youll miss the plane.(3)Honey is sweet.The bee stings.Honey is sweet but the bee stings.2021/8/11 星期三3在两个或者多个简单句之间加在两个或者多个简单句之间加上上when,after,as,because,where,which,who等从属连词等从属连词,可以使简单句变成复合句。如：可以使简单句变成复合句。如：2021/8/11 星期三4(1)We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club.We can not only practise but also learn more English in the activities.（改为含定语从句的复合句）（改为含定语从句的复合句）We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club in which we can not only practise but also learn more English.2021/8/11 星期三5(2)He missed the first bus.He came to school late.(改为含状语从句的复合改为含状语从句的复合句句)Because he missed the first bus,he came to school late.He missed the first bus,so he came to school late.2021/8/11 星期三6即时练习即时练习将下列各组句子合并成并列复合将下列各组句子合并成并列复合句或主从复合句。句或主从复合句。1.Your study becomes much more difficult.You have to work much harder.1.Your study becomes much more difficult,so you have to work much harder.2021/8/11 星期三72.We should be easy-going.We should be concerned for others.We want to be liked by others.If we want to be liked by others,we should be easy-going and concerned for others.2021/8/11 星期三83.(1)Li Hua is a senior one student.(2)She had to attend different enrichment classes(3)She had to do a lot of homework during the summer vacation.2021/8/11 星期三9(4)This made her unhappy.(5)she wanted to relax herself.Li Hua,a senior one student,had to attend different enrichment classes and do a lot of homework during the summer vacation,which made her unhappy,as she wanted to relax herself.2021/8/11 星期三104.(1)We high school students do have some growing pains.(2)We can get rid of them correctly and wisely.We high school students do have some growing pains,but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.2021/8/11 星期三115.(1)Students attend enrichment classes during vacation.(2)Students can improve their main subjects.(3)Students make more friends.If students attend enrichment classes during vacation,they can not only improve their main subjects but also make more friends.2021/8/11 星期三126.(1)Ive made good preparations for exams.(2)Im very stressed and nervous.(3)I cant fall asleep,control my temper or focus.(4)I even dont want to eat.Though Ive made good preparations for exams,Im still so stressed and nervous that I cant fall asleep,control my temper or focus and even I dont want to eat.2021/8/11 星期三137.(1)79.3 of the surveyed netizens say that their main motivation is to help their parents to live a better life.(2)67.7 claim that they work hard in order to change their own fate.79.3 of the surveyed netizens say that their main motivation is to help their parents to live a better life while 67.7 claim that they work hard in order to change their own fate.2021/8/11 星期三148.(1)The job was hard and boring.(2)The job seemed endless.(3)The job made me very tired.(4)I almost quit half way.The job was hard,boring and seemed endless,which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.2021/8/11 星期三159.(1)Learning English well is a must.(2)You hunt for a job.(3)Your English level is very important.Learning English well is a must,as when you hunt for a job,your English level is very important.2021/8/11 星期三1610.(1)I have just received your letter.(2)You express your concern.(3)I join in too many after-class activities.(4)These activities may have a bad effect on my study and future.I have just received your letter in which you express your concern that my study and future may be affected because I join in too many after-class activities.2021/8/11 星期三17ThankYouThankYou!2021/8/11 星期三182021/8/11 星期三19