读后续写练习写作指导 讲义- -2023届高考英语复习写作备考.docx

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。Two things changed my life: my mother and a bike basket. It's true. I would be a different person if my mom hadn't turned a bike basket into a life lesson I carry with me today-a lesson about the value of efforts.My mother and father were united in their way of raising children, but it mostly fell to my mother to actually carry it out. Looking back, I honestly don't know how she did it. Managing the family budget must have been a very hard task, but she made it look effortless. If we complained about not having what another kid did, we'd hear something like, UI don't care what so-and-so got for his birthday. You are not getting a TV in your room a big party.” We had to earn our allowance （零花钱）by doing chores （家庭杂务） around the house. I can still remember how long it took to polish the legs of our coffee table. My brothers can no doubt remember hours spent cleaning the house. We had to keep track of our belongings, and if something was lost, it was not replaced.It was one summer day. My mother drove me to the bike shop to get a tire fixedand there it was in the windowwhite, shiny, plastic and decorated with flowers. The basket winked at me and I knew-I had to have it.“It's beautiful,“ my mother said when I pointed it out to her. 44What a neat basket.”1 tried to hold off at first, but then I couldn,t stand it any longer. uMom, please can 1 get it? I'll do anything, please, Mom, please?” I was desperate.“You know,“ she said, gently rubbing my back while we both stared at what I believed was the coolest thing ever, uIf you save up, you could buy this yourself.”“By the time I have earned enough, ifll have gone! Someone else will buy it. Please, Mom, please?”“There might be another way,“ she said.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右;2 .请按如下格式作答。,17/ buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,f, Mom explained.Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on other's bikesi试题分析 人物：Mother：用她的特有的方式持家育儿希望孩子们通过自己的努力得到自己想 要的I：想要一个与自行车匹配的“车篮” 事件：妈妈勤俭持家，不仅把家事理的很好，而且教育子女很有自己的方法。有一天， 妈妈开车带我去自行车店修轮胎，我看到橱柜里展示着的漂亮的篮子，非常渴望拥有， 但是妈妈说需要我自己的努力才能得到。于是， 主题：（第一段就点出）Two things changed my life: my mother and a bike basket. It's true. I would be a different person if my mom hadn't turned a bike basket into a life lesson I carry with me todaya lesson about the value of efforts. 续写情节安排：第一段：（与开头句衔接）为了得到车篮，答应妈妈的要求每天努力地完成“双倍”的家务，甚至于还主动干些其他的事情随着时间的推移，我的零花钱总算攒够了（与第二段开头句衔接）第二段：（与开头句衔接）看到人家也有同样的车篮的时候，心理是怎么想的，与妈妈是怎么沟通的妈妈对此事做出怎么样的反应（主题升华，首尾呼应）点出主题：经过努力得到的才是最好的下水作文* 77/ buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,” Mom explained. Though it was a challenging task, thinking that I could have such a beautiful bike basket,InoddedtoMother without hesitation. Additionally, it was not a long time to go. As having promise d, every day, I did spare no efforts to do some extra chores, cleaning the garage, helping to prepare the dinners, delivering and collecting things, everything I could, for my dream basket, which was a burden to me before. With the day ticketing down, my allowance was gathering. (81 words)Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on other's bikes! So upset was I that 1 felt a bit dizzy. 1 dashed back home, complaining to Mom about what I saw. Smiling, Mom comforted me gently, saying there in the shop lay many bike baskets of the same style and that mine was special because I got it with my great efforts. An excellent gift from my mom for my birthday! Relieved! I came to understand Mom's way of love! Till today, I still remember the special lesson: Precious gifts deserve efforts. (82 words)参考范文参考范文1：* 7 7/ buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,v Mom explained. And so our paying plan unfolded. My mother bought the beautiful basket and put it safely in some hiding place I couldn't find. Each week I eagerly counted my growing saving increased by extra work here and there (washing the car, helping my mother make dinner, delivering or collecting things on my bike that already looked naked without the basket in front). And then, weeks later, I counted, re-counted and jumped for joy. Oh, happy day! I made it! (79 words)Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on other's bikes! A neighborhood girl I'd played with millions of times appeared with the exact same basket fixed to her shiny, new bike that already had all the bells and whistles. I rode hard and fast home to tell my mother about this disaster. This horrible turn of events.And then came the lesson. Tve taken with me through my life: "Honey, your basket is extra-special,Mom said, gently wiping away my hot tears.'' Your basket is special because you paid for it yoursclf. (82 words)参考范文2：* 77/ buy it now hut you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,“ Mom explained. I agreed immediately and Mom bought the flowery basket and kept it somewhere I couldn't find. Each day, I finished my new routine of double household chores with passion and enthusiasm. Each night, I crossed off another day on the calendar as I counted down the days. As the days passed, the basket seemed to become even more beautiful in my imagination. The extra chores didn't bother me. The basket was worth it. The anticipation grew stronger as the days ticketed down. (82 words)Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on other9s bikes So shocked and upset was I that I immediately went home to report this disaster to my mom. Seeing my sulky face, she gently wiped away my tears. Holding my little face in her warm hands, she spoke out what has become the lesson I still carry with me today. “Your basket is not the same basket. It's unique because it was not obtained by mere money but by all your worthwhile effort and waiting."(75 words)