读后续写 练习写作指导 讲义--2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.In Emily White's hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium（大礼堂）.It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town's people.Many people tried out each year for it, but so many were turned away. It can only include the most excellent people in the field.Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens - her music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Amy's body and said, “Child, you just don't fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too/Without singing a single note , Emily was sent back through the door of thechoral room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Buttler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Buttler called, “Emily, you're next.” Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Buttler told her to do. Mr. Buttler sat by the piano to keep Emily company. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Buttler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.Emily couldn't sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.注意：L所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.Paragraph2:Finally, the day of performance came.试题分析前文分析主要人物Emily White:- born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body.- had a beautiful singing voiceMr. Buttler:- a new music teacher- heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try- 主要情节Emily是一个一出生身体就有很多问题的孩子，不过，她竟然奇迹般地生活了下来。 她的家乡每年都有一场圣诞季在学校大礼堂的节目表演，要能上台表演是件非常难的 事情。Emily的嗓音非常不错。去年她也想上台表演，但被看都没看一眼她的音乐老师 Mrs. Owens拒绝了，理由是她的长相。她很受打击，表示再也不愿去尝试了。好在， Mrs. Owens不久就退休了。来了一位叫Mr. Buttler的音乐老师。他极力鼓励Emily去 试试。最终，在老师的鼓励下，她报了名，参加了面唱，在忐忑不安中，等待结果的 出来。- 主题要义人与人的关系Emily主动尝试被拒到新音乐老师鼓励去参与，凸显鼓励的重要性下文安排- 续写内容建议：Paragraph 1:The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. .（与开头句衔接）简单描述忐忑的心情主要写看到的结果及对Mr. Buttler的感谢努力排练，为了更出色的表现Paragraph2:Finally, the day of performance came. .表演前，简单回顾困难和描述她的身心表现表演的情况后续（如何升华主题）下水作文Paragraph 1:The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. So nervous was she that her heart beat wildly. But the fact was that at the top of the posted list was her name “Emily White". She wasn't rejected, which made her happy. She went back through the door of the choral room and gave sincere thanks to Mr.Buttler. It was his appreciation and encouragement that Emily had such luck to have the chance to share her beautiful singing voice. In the following days, she practiced as hard as she could to show the best of herself. (88 words)Paragraph 2:Finally, the day of performance came. It was time for her to prove herself though the problems in her body really brought her much trouble in life. Waiting for her turn to come, she felt a bit anxious, palms sweating, but she tried to develop her moods of performance. Soon came her chance. She gathered her energy to sing the song by heart. Her clear and melodious voice conquered the audience with their generous and thunderous applauses. Confidence came to Emily and she was even chosen as the ambassador for the annual great event. (88 words)参考范文Paragraph 1：The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. She was not rejected this time. Her name was posted at the top of the list. She, Emily White, was chosen to be the leading singer! She would sing alone in the performance. Emily couldn't believe her eyes. There must be some mistake. But Mr. Buttler said to her with determined eyes. "Emily, I choose you because you should perform the part - your voice is unusual. Believe in yourself." Greatly encouraged, Emily practiced really hard.Paragraph 2：Finally, the day of performance came. Standing in front of the line, Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating. When the curtain opened up, the eyes of the whole audience fell upon Emily. "Emily White!” Someone whispered. Then along with the first note of music, Emily began to sing her heart out. Her voice was like a nightingale ringing in the auditorium. Applause! Emily felt so happy and comfortable. She was shining on the stage. Emily White, with so many birth problems in her body, was an angel. (160 words)