读后续写练习写作指导 讲义--2023届高三英语写作复习备考.docx
试题原题读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Luke was a 12-year-old boy. He was flying alone to meet his parents in Maroochydore for his summer vacation. He wanted to go to the toilet, so he stood up and walked along to the aisle.A little girl was waiting outside the toilet already. Luke could see that she had been crying."What's your name?” he asked her.“Cathy," said the little girl, starting to cry again. She told Luke that her father was taking her to America without telling her mum and that she didn't want to leave her mum.Luke/s eyes opened wide. "You mean your dad is kidnapping （绑架）you?" he gasped. Cathy nodded, still sobbing.At that moment the toilet door opened and the flight attendant came out. She saw the tears on Cathy's face. With a stern look, she warned Luke to stop bullying the little girl and stay away from her. Cathy didn't know what to do. She put her thumb into her mouth and then ran into the toilet.Luke was sad, dragging his feet back to his seat. How could he tell someone what was happening? Cathy/s father was sitting just across the aisle. He could hear every word. Suddenly Luke had a brain wave!He secretly wrote a note and pressed the call button. The attendant came and read the note quickly. "That's not a very good joke.She dropped the note into her pocket and walked away.A sharp look from Cathy/s father warned Luke that he had known his “trick”. Luke slumped （倚靠） back in his seat. He felt that everyone in the plane was angry with him. How could he tell someone what was happening?Soon, the plane landed. Luke could see Cathy's father striding down the walkway towards an escalator （自 动扶梯）.Cathy was trying to pull away, and crying, but her father picked her up and started running up the stairs. Luke spotted a policeman at the exit, but it was quite a distance.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:Suddenly Luke knew what he could do. Paragraph 2:People began to crowd around them.试题分析上文情节分析人物：Luke：a 12-year-old boy, flying alone to meet his parents in Maroochydorefor his summer vacationCathy： being taken to America by her father without telling her mumCathy's father:taking Cathy to America, suspected to be "kidnapping" Cathythe flight attendant:didn't take Luke's note seriouslya policeman: 主要情节：在飞机上，Luke在洗手间门口碰到在等候上洗手间的Cathy,看到她 在哭泣，询问了情况。与Cathy交流了之后，Luke以为是她爸爸把Cathy “绑 架”了。于是，Luke表现的很不放心，生怕真的会有"绑架事件的发生。先 前，空姐从洗手间出来看到眼前的一幕的时候已经误解了 Luke,在Luke把 写好的小纸条递给空姐的那一刻，空姐没有理睬，以为纸条上写的只是有 个joke而已。没有办法，Luke又寻思开如何把"绑架的事情告诉他人。飞 机着陆，乘客们纷纷下了飞机，Cathy爸爸抱着Cathy飞快地离开，Luke就 一直跟着他们。 主题：人与人的关系：“救人于"危难之中，最终发现只是一场“误会伏笔：围绕"kidnap”和 Luke 的"How could he tell someone what was happening?"展开下文情节安排两段开头：段1：Suddenly Luke knew what he could do. .段2：People began to crowd around them. .情节安排：段1：一直跟随Cathy和她爸爸用什么方式拖延住Cathy的爸爸如何更好地引起他人的注意（为了与段2开头相衔接） 段2： 警察及围观人群出现消除"误会说明缘由范文Paragraph 1:Suddenly Luke knew what he could do. He began to ran and follow the steps of Cathy's father, trying to catch him and save Cathy. The minute leaving the stairs, he pretended to be falling to the ground. At the same time, he managed to seize the clothes of Cathy's father tightly. The result was that they all fell down with Cathy and Luke crying loudly. Standing up, Cathy's father started to shout angry words to him, which attracted people's attention. The more he shouted, the more loudly Luke cried. (83 words)Paragraph 2:People began to crow around them. Seeing the scene, two policemen on duty ran over to see what had happened. Without any explanation, Cathy's father stopped scolding Luke, picked Cathy up and turned to leave, but was stopped by the policemen and the crowd. When hearing Luke saying Cathy was being kidnapped, Cathy's father burst out laughing, saying, "That's why you fol lowed us all the way!” The fact came to the light that Cathy's father was just playing a big joke on her secretly, for he had a divorce from her mum. (86 words)
