读后续写练习写作指导 讲义--2023届高考英语复习写作备考.docx

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Kelly was driving through rural Alabama with her five-year-old son, Rocky Lyons. He was asleep on the front seat of their pickup truck, with his feet resting on her lap.As Kelly drove carefully down the winding two-lane country road, she turned onto a narrow bridge. As she did, the truck hit a large hole and slid off the road, and the right front wheel got stuck in a deep track. Fearing the truck would tip over, she attempted to jerk （急拉）it back up onto the road by pressing hard on the gas pedal （脚踏板）and spinning （旋转）the steering wheel （方向盘）to the left. But Rocky，s foot got caught between her leg and the steering wheel and she lost control of the pickup truck.The truck flipped over and over down a 20-foot narrow valley. When it hit bottom, Rocky woke up. "What happened, Mama?” he asked. 0ur wheels are pointing toward the sky. ”Kelly was blinded by blood. The gearshift （变速杆）had jammed into her face, ripping （撕裂）it open from lip to forehead. Her gums （牙床）were torn out, her cheeks pulverized （粉状的），her shoulders crushed （压碎）, With one broken rib （肋骨）sticking out of her body, she was pinned against the crushed door.T 11 get you out, Mama, “ announced Rocky, who had miraculously escaped injury. He crawled out from under Kelly, slid through the open window and tried to pull his mother out. But she didn't move.“Just let me sleep, “ begged Kelly, who was drifting in and out of consciousness.“No, Mama, “ Rocky insisted. "You can't go to sleep. ”Rocky wriggled back into the truck and managed to push Kelly out of the wreckage. He then told her he'd climb up to the road and stop a car to get help.Fearing that no one would be able to see her little boy in the dark, Kelly refused to let him go alone. Instead they slowly crept up the embankment （路堤）,with Rocky using his thin 40-pound frame to push his 104-pound mother.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:They crawled inches at a time.Paragraph 2:It took 8 hours and 344 stitches （缝针）to rebuild Kellyf sface.试题分析上文情节分析人物：Kelly：妈妈Rocky：儿子，5岁主要情节：Kelly开着一辆小货车经过Alabama乡下一条只有两个车道弯弯曲曲的山路 时发生了车祸，车子滚到很深的山谷谷底，Kelly严重受伤，脸被变速杆划破， 肩膀粉碎性骨折，一根肋骨断了伸出体外。幸运的是，儿子Rocky并无大碍。因 为是山路，经过车辆不多，通过母子俩的自救，不知道花了多少时间，终于爬到 了路边，等待过路人（车）的救援。 主题：人与人的关系：自救与他救，突出妈妈的坚持和儿子的帮助鼓励。下文情节安排 两段开头：段 1 ： They crawled inches at a time. .段 2： It took 8 hours and 344 stitches（缝针）to rebuild Kelly's face. . 两段情节安排：段1：Kelly受伤状况（行为+心理）她和儿子进行自救的情况获得好心人的帮助，被送往医院段2：妈妈Kelly被送出手术室时，儿子Rocky的所见多年后，人们问起“脸面”的事情，妈妈的反应突出对儿子Rocky所作所为的肯定范文1Paragraph 1:They crawled inches at a time. So serious was the injury that the severe pain brought Kelly to the edge of giving up. But her five-year-old son, Rocky, gave her the courage to live herself. She gathered all her strength, dragging herself towards the road. Rocky pushed against her, singing songs to shade mum comfort and encouragement. It seemed years before they reached the embankment, waiting for aids. Lucky enough, a truck passing by stopped. Knowing what had happened, without delay, the driver sent them to a nearby hospital. (83 words)Paragraph 2:It took 8 hours and 344 stitches (缝针)to rebuild Kelly"s face. When she was sent out of the operation room, what Rocky saw was a completely strange mum a person wrapped with bandages was lying in the bed. However, what made Rocky relieved was that his mother managed to survive. Years later, when someone asked Kelly about what had happened to her face and lips, she was always feeling proud of the help and encouragement her son provided. Indeed, it was Rocky' s insisting and inspiring that left her the chance of survival and recovery. (83 words)范文2Paragraph 1：They crawled inches at a time. The pain was so great that Kelly wanted to give up, but Rocky wouldn't let her. To urge his mother on, Rocky told her to think about how, once, she encouraged him to be braver when he encountered difficulties. To remind her mom, Rocky even repeated lyrics of a song from her mom, “I know you can. ” When they finally reached the road, Rocky was able to see his mother's torn face clearly. He broke into tears at once. Luckily, a truck came towards them. "Stop! Please stop! ” Waving his arms and pleading, Rocky hailed the truck. “Get my mama to a hospital, “ he implored the driver, who rushed them to the nearest hospital. (114 words)Paragraph 2:It took 8 hours and 344 stitches (缝车十)to re build Kelly9s face. She looked quite different today. She used to have a straight long nose, thin lips and high cheekbones; now she got a pug nose, flat cheeks and much bigger lips instead.She also had a few other visible scars. But whatever, Kelly recovered from her injuries and she couldn't be prouder of her son, or more grateful, “If it weren't for Rocky, I'd have bled to death. You know, how difficult the situation was to a five-year-old boy. ” Rocky，s heroics were big news then. But the spunky youngster insisted he didn't do anything extraordinary. "I just did what anyone would have done. ” he explained. (104 words)