2023届新高考英语写作精讲和模板-2求助信——2.docx

专题0102求助信2023届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板1.（改编自2021 河北武强中学高一阶段练）假定你是高一班的李华，刚升入一所新的学校，你在生活和学 习方面遇到了一些困难和挑战，请给English Weekly的编辑写一封求助信。内容如下：1 .自我介绍；.遇到的困难；2 .希望得到的建议和帮助。注意：1 .词数120词左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Editor,I am Li Hua, a new student of senior high school. I have encountered some difficulties and challenges in my life and study so I'm writing to you to ask for your help.The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have plenty of new knowledge to learn, so I have no time to do sports. Besies, I don't know how to make good plans fbr my study and how to make use of time reasonably. I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college. Whafs worse, I find it difficult to get on well with new classmates. How can I make friends in the campus? Could you give me some useful advice?I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之求助信写作。要求考生就自己刚升入一所新的学校在生活和学习方面遇到了 一些困难和挑战，给English Weekly的编辑写一封求助信。内容包括自我介绍、遇到的困难、希望得到的 建议和帮助。此题写作的关键基于“考生自己刚升入一所新的学校”对“考生自己在生活和学习方面遇到 了一些困难和挑战”进行合理的拓展（比方：要学习的新知识多、制定学习计划、时间的合理利用、与新同 学相处、交朋友等等）。【句式拓展】原句：I am Li Hua, a new student of senior high school.拓展：I am Li Hua, who is a new student of senior high school.原句： The problems I am facing now are as follows.拓展： There are some problems I am face with now.原句： Whafs worse, I find it difficult to get on well with new classmates.拓展： What I am worried about most is how to get on well with new classmates.【亮点句型】don't know how to make good plans for my study and how to make use of time reasonably. （运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语）2.1 become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college.（运用了 that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）2.（改编自2022.山东青岛二中高三期末）假设你是高三学生李华，美国哥伦比亚大学（Columbia University） 正在你校组织招生活动。请你根据以下要点提示给你在美国的笔友Russ写一封电子邮件。内容包括以下 要点：1 ,通过校内选拔考试（selective test）的同学将参加该大学于1月份组织的英语笔试、口试和面试；2 .你本人对此很感兴趣，正在积极备考；3 .希望Russ给出一些有关英语学习的建议。注意：1 .词数80左右；2.可适当增加一些细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Russ,How is everything going? You know, I am in Grade Three now. Tm writing to ask for your help.Our school has got an opportunity to help us apply for Columbia University. Those who can pass the selective test to be held by our school next week will have the chance to take part in the oral and written exams in English as well as the interview by the CU teachers in January. It has long been my dream to study abroad. Now, I am trying my best to get ready for the coming exams. Time is limited, so could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之求助信写作。要求考生信的内容包括：自我介绍；写信的目的（哥伦比亚大学 正在学校组织招生活动）。求助背景介绍（通过校内选拔考试的同学将参加该大学于1月份组织的英语笔试、 口试和面试；你本人对此很感兴趣，正在积极备考）；求助内容（希望Russ给出一些有关英语学习的建议）； 期盼给予答复。【句式拓展】原句：Time is limited, so could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams?拓展：Since time is limited, could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams?【亮点句型】.Those who can pass the selective test to be held by our school next week will have the chance to take part in the oral and written exams in English as well as the interview by the CU teachers in January.（运用 了 who引导定语从句）1 .Time is limited, so could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams?（运用了 “疑问词+to do”结构作宾语）.（改编自2022.全国高三专题练）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来北京学习。七月份你将去北 京参加一次英语演讲比赛，你在对演讲的资料收集、文字语言运用和演讲方法等方面遇到了困难。请根据 以下要点提示给Tom写一封求助信。1 .询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2 .谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮助；3 .告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：1 .词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Tom,How time flies! You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month, during which you must have achieved a lot. Well, how's everything going?I am glad to tell you that I will attend the English speech contest to be held in Beijing in July, which is absolutely a great opportunity for me to improve myself. And now I am trying my best to make preparations for it. However, I have some difficulty in collecting relevant information and putting what I have learned into practice, which bothers me a lot. In addition, the most difficult thing is that I have no idea how to attract the audience's attention. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. By the way, after the contest, I am to drop in on you. Hope to meet you there soon.Yours truly,Li Hua【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之求助信写作。要求考生就根据以下要点提示给Tom写一封求助信：询问 Tom的生活和学习情况、谈谈自己的困难并请Tom帮助并告诉Tom打算赛后去看他。请考生不要忘记题 干中的这段文字“七月份你将去北京参加一次英语演讲比赛，你在对演讲的资料收集、文字语言运用和演 讲方法等方面遇到了困难”也是需要表达出来的。【句式拓展】原句：I am glad to tell you that I will attend the English speech contest to be held in Beijing in July, which is absolutely a great opportunity for me to improve myself.拓展：I am pleased to tell you that I will take part in the English speech contest that is to be held in Beijing in July, which is absolutely a great opportunity for me to improve myself.【亮点句型】.However, I have some difficulty in collecting relevant information and putting what I have learned into practice, which bothers me a lot.（which 引导的非限制性定语从句）1 . In addition, the most difficult thing is that I have no idea how to attract the audience's attention.（that 弓| 导的 表语从句）4.（改编自2021 .广西.南宁三中高二阶段练习）假如你是李华，本期你校开设了英语口语课，由于你不太适应 外教Chris的授课，你决定给她写一封求助信。内容包括：1 .告诉她你的困难；.求助的内容；2 .希望得到帮助。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Chris,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Chris,I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class. I am writing to seek help from you.As you know, I come from a middle school in the countiyside, where teachers don't speak much English in class. That is the reason why I am not good at listening or speaking. At present, I find it really difficult to adapt myself to your class. Faced with the above problem, I wonder if you can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class. Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time? I think it can help me improve my spoken English.I would be grateful if you could spare time to do me a favour.Yours,Li Hua 【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之求助信写作。要求考生针对自己不太适应外教Chris的英语口语课，给她 写一封求助信。信的内容包括：告诉她自己所遇到的困难、求助的内容以及希望得到帮助。本篇写作的困 难之处是如何把自己所遇到的困难（甚至造成困难的原因）表达清楚。这就需要考生围绕“自己不太适应外 教Chris的英语口语课”的话题对困难和原因展开合理的推测。【句式拓展】原句：Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time?拓展： Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends when it is convenient for you?【亮点句型】.As you know, I come from a middle school in the countryside, where teachers don't speak much English in class.（运用了 where引导的非限制性定语从句）1 .That is the reason why I am not good at listening or speaking.（运用 了 why 引导的定语从句）.Faced with the above problem, I wonder if you can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class.（运用了过去分词作状语，if引导的宾语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句）5.（改编自2021 贵州省思南中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问 题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。内容如下：1 .你所遇到的问题或者困惑；2.希望得到Kate的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯【答案】Dear Kate,I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. I am writing to ask you for help because 1 have been busy preparing for my college entrance exam recently, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study.I am encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardlv have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don't want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it's difficult for me to fall asleep every night.Faced with the above problems, Tm anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之求助信写作。要求考生给自己所在学校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信 寻求帮助。题干所给的两点内容及其笼统。因而需要考生围绕“自己正在为高考紧张复习中被所遇到一些 问题而无法集中精力学习”的话题进行合理想象，重点对“问题（包括造成问题的原因及后果）”进行巧妙 的设计。【句式拓展】原句：Faced with the above problems, Tm anxious to get your help.拓展： When I am faced with the above problems, Pm anxious to get your help.【亮点句型】1.1 am encountering some problems which trouble me a lot.（运用了 which引导的限制性定语从句）2.What troubles me most is that it's difficult for me to fall asleep every night.（运用了 what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句，以及不定式）