读后续写：友情类（故事构造“三步法”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能 模拟题.docx

读后续写（新高考专用）模拟题05L （2022.山东济南.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Ella's First Fashion CreationElla was wearing a new dress and she felt like a famous model, Even better, it was a dress she made! Her very first piece of fashion!“What do you think?” she asked her family. They were all gathered at the kitchen table fbr breakfast. very pretty. I can't believe you designed and sewed that all by yourselfMom said.'Tm so proud of you! How long did that take?”Dad asked. Ella pulled out her chair and sat down."Two weeks! But I think I could make the next one faster. I had a few problems.Ella smiled. She had so many problems making the dress, but right now it was all worth it. It was going to be a great day.The kids at school weren't quite as excited about her dress as she thought they would be, but she did get some nice comments from some of the girls, so she was happy about that. The day went by quickly, and before she knew it, she was outside for the last break of the day. What a perfect day, she thought to herself as she swung on the swings.The school bell rang and the break was over. When the swing was close to stopping, Ella jumped off. When she landed, she heard a loud rip （撕裂） She moved her hand to the back of her dress. It was ripped all the way down the back! Her very first fashion creation fell apart! Ella was so embarrassed.Ella spotted her teacher, Miss Miller, near the door. Ella took one hand from her dress and waved fbr Miss Miller to come to her. Miss Miller came up and looked at the back of Ella's dress.uOh no! And it is such a beautiful dress!” "I made it myself/9 Ella said. “You must be very proud! You did a great job!,9 "Not really. Or it wouldn't have ripped., “Well, that happenssometimes. Even with clothes you buy in the store!,9注意：words. This time, I was sure that he had heard what I said.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。He looked surprised and uncertain.I had to find him and gave back the change.参考答案：He looked surprised and uncertain. He asked me quietly, "Madam, I possibly couldn't do it. Are you sure?” "Sure!” I confirmed, nodding at him unwillingly. He went ahead slowly, paid for the milk, and took his change. Then, to my amazement, he turned to my child and pressed the change into his hand. Without any more words, he turned around and disappeared into the crowds. Seeing this, a sense of guilt flooded into my mind. I looked around anxiously, hoping that he hadn't walked away.I had to find him and gave back the change. Out of the supermarket, an old man with a dirty overcoat and sockless ankles caught my attention. I ran to him quickly, pressing back the change into his hand with a big bag of bread for his kindness. I hurried away before he expressed his thanks. At this moment, my guilt gave way to the relief. Also, I felt comfortable about my home, family, and even my life, rather than being mad. A gentle breeze softly kissed me. I went home with my lovely child happily as well as gratefully.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者对家庭生活感觉并不舒适，带四岁的儿子去购物时，儿 子非常顽皮，使作者感觉不快。在收银台排队时，作者因为感觉不舒服，让一位衣衫褴褛的 老人先结账，老人开始没有回应，作者又重复了一遍之后，确定老人听到了自己的话。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他看上去既惊讶又不确定。”可知，第一段可描写老人重新确认作者的 话，结账之后把零钱给了作者的孩子，然后走了，作者感觉内疚。由第二段首句内容“我必须找到他并把零钱还给他。”可知，第二段可描写作者找到老人, 表达感激，作者对家、家庭和生活都感觉舒适了。1 .续写线索：老人惊讶老人送零钱给孩子内疚还钱离开感觉舒适.词汇激活行为类询 问：ask/inquire/question环顾四周：look around/look about引起我的注意：catch my attention/catch my eye情绪类不情愿地：unwillingly/reluctantly焦急地：anxiously/worriedly【点睛】【高分句型 1 I looked around anxiously, hoping that he hadn't walked away.（由连接词 that引导宾语从句作hoping的宾语）【高分句型 2 I hurried away before he expressed his thanks.（由连接词 before 引导时间状语 从句）1 .续写词数应为150词左右;,请按如下格式作答。Miss Miller took off her sweater and helped Ella to pull it on.“We can't avoid problems/9 said Mom.参考答案：Miss Miller took off her sweater and helped Ella to pull it on. She helped Ella up and walked her back to the classroom. As soon as she sat down, she heard a girl laughing at her torn clothes. Ella was very sad and felt very defeated. Miss Miller came to Ella and said, nYour clothes are very beautiful. You shouldn't deny yourself because it is broken.n. After hearing this, Ella called her mother and asked her mother to pick her up. Because her clothes were broken, she couldn't walk home by herself. When her mother came, she saw what had happened and was distressed.“We can't avoid problems J said Mom. "When the problem arises, we should find a way to solve the problem instead of complaining about ourselves. Now your dress is broken and you just need to sew it”. After saying that, mother took out the sewing bag and handed it to Ella, who took over the sewing bag and nodded to her mother. Then she stitched up the broken part of the dress.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了艾拉自己设计制作了一条裙子，家里人都夸漂亮，她把裙子 穿到了学校，从秋千上下来的时候，她的裙子破了，她叫来了米勒小姐来帮她。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“米勒小姐脱下毛衣，帮埃拉穿上。”可知，第一段可描写米勒小姐带艾 拉回教室并安慰她。由第二段首句内容“我们无法避免问题，"妈妈说。”可知，第二段可描写艾拉的妈妈鼓励 艾拉解决问题。2,续写线索：回教室安慰叫来妈妈妈妈鼓励缝好3 .词汇激活行为类坐 卜：sit down/be seated否定：deny/negate解决:solve/settle缝：sew/stitch情绪类伤心：sad/upset忧虑的：distressed/worried【点睛】高分句型 1 As soon as she sat down, she heard a girl laughing at her torn clothes.（由连接词 assoon as引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2After saying that, mother took out the sewing bag and handed it to Ella, who took over the sewing bag and nodded to her mother.（由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句）2. （2022.辽宁大连.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使 之构成一篇完整的短文。It was dark, cold and raining on December 24. James left his office and walked slowly across the street to the parking place. He was very tired. He took out his car key and put down his umbrella. He put the key into the lock and turned it. Nothing happened. The door would not open. Then James realised that it was the wrong car. His car was red, but this one was dark blue. "Oh dear! I must have parked in a different place this morning, thought he. Putting up his umbrella, he set off to look for his car. The rain poured down and the evening got colder and colder.Having walked round all the side streets, James didn't find his car. He was exhausted and angry. "Someone must have stolen my car,“ he thought. "Now I shall have to go to the police station and report it." The policeman there was very helpful. He wrote down a description of James car and then took his address and telephone number. As James was leaving, the policeman wished him a merry Christmas."Christmasthought James. “Oh no! I've forgotten all about Christmas. I haven't bought my wife a present and now all the shops are shut. What shall I do?” When waiting fbr the bus, he got wetter and more miserable （难受的）.He had no umbrella and the rain flowed down into his collar. He felt like bursting into tears.When James got home, he found his wife standing on a chair and looking for something in a very high cupboard. "What are you doing, Jessica?” he asked. "The big gold star fbr the Christmas tree,“ Jessica replied. "Just a moment. Til go into the garage （车库）and fetch the stepladder （梯子） fbr you,“ said James. When James saw .the well-decorated Christmas tree and lots of presents under it, he felt even more unhappy. "What a lovely tree! he thought as he went downstairs, “I haven't even got one present for Jessica. Tve lost my car and I'm completely wet. I must have lost my umbrella, too.” 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As James opened the garage door, he spotted something, frozen in amazement.Pleased to know his car was there, James entered the room with the present.参考答案：As James opened the garage door, he spotted something, frozen in amazement. Inside the garage was his red car. He suddenly remembered that it wouldn't start this morning so he just took a taxi to work. James was overjoyed. He was just about to rush upstairs and tell Jessica the good news when he heard, "Meow! Meow!” He looked inside the car and there sat a small kitten with pointed ears and green eyes. James, eyes were glued to the kitten fbr a few minutes and a brilliant idea struck him. "This is fbr Jessica." He picked the kitten up.Pleased to know his car was there, James entered the room with the present. "This is your present,9, said to Jessica happily. "Oh, thank you, darling. Tve always wanted a kitten J her face lit up. Just then the telephone rang. It was the policeman. James was told that his car hadn't been found but his umbrella was got in the police station. Putting the phone down, James gazed at Jessica, joy welling up inside him. Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere, James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.【解析】分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公James在圣诞节的时候认为自己的车丢了，心情变得 沮丧，没有给家人买圣诞礼物，天下着雨，雨伞也丢了，心情非常糟糕，浑身湿透的回到家 里，后来发现车在车库里，警察也找到了丢失的伞，心情变好的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“詹姆斯打开车库门，发现了什么东西，惊讶地僵住了。”可知，第一段 可描写James发现自己的车在家里，也找到了给妻子的礼物，以及他的心情变化。由第二段首句内容“詹姆斯很高兴知道他的车就在那里，他带着礼物进了房间'可知，第 二段可描写James愉快地和妻子在一起，警察找到了雨伞，James非常高兴，沐浴在圣诞节 温暖的气氛中。2,续写线索：找到了车发现了小猫给妻子送礼物警察找到了雨伞高兴起来 3.词汇激活行为类冲上楼：rush upstairs/dash upstairs/go upstairs hurriedly.突然想起：strike /occur to/hit情绪类.高兴：overjoyed/very delighted/extremely happy【点睛】高分句型 1 . He suddenly remembered that it wouldn't start this morning so he just took a taxi to work.（运用了 that引导宾语从句，so连接并列句式）高分句型 2. Putting the phone down, James gazed at Jessica, joy welling up inside him.（运用 了 现在分词作状语，独立主格结构）高分句型 3 . Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere, James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.（运用了过去分词作状语）3. （2022.湖南株洲一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文.DRUMMING WITH GRANDPARoger was filled with excitement as his mother told him his grandfather was on his way over. He always had fun together with his grandfather who once drummed in a band. They could make the whole house shake with their joyful music. Roger got excited and practiced drumming all morning.Finally, Dad's car pulled up in front of the house. Upon hearing the car door opened. Roger shouted fbr joy from his bedroom window, "Hi, Grandpa! Listen to this!” Taking a deep breath, he raised his drumsticks and began rocking and rolling, just like Grandpa had taught him. Jumping up. he raced outside to his grandfather and asked, nGrandpa. what do you think? Are you ready to drum together?H Grandpa, giving Roger a hug, said. nIt was wonderful, but I'm afraid I can*t play right now." Dad smiled at Roger, telling him some of Grandpa's finger joints were hurting him and that maybe he would want to play after a short rest. Roger didn't ask again.After lunch, Roger went to his room to get his skateboard, finding someone had already stepped into the room. It was Grandpa who stood near the drum set. He picked up a drumstick and began to play. Thump! Thump! But just with two thumps, the drumstick fell onto the floor. Grandpa reached fbr it, trying to pick it up, but the drumstick fell out of his hand. He tried again and the same thing happened. Grandpa moved his red and swollen fingers, looking upset. Seeing this, Roger shut the door noiselessly. He walked to the sitting room where Dad was reading and asked Dad to drive him to his friend's house. MDavid has a drum with the pedal （踏板）and I'd like to borrow it," Roger told Dad about his plan. Dad got the car keys and off they went. 注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Grandpa, a surprise!” Roger shouted when they returned with a big box.Slowly, Grandpa reached out his foot and pushed the pedal as Roger did.参考答案:“Grandpa, a surprise!" Roger shouted when they returned with a big box. Roger led Grandpa to his room in delight. Dad followed, carrying the big box. With great joy Roger opened the box together with Dad. When Grandpa saw the drum with the pedal, his eyes were shining with excitement. "Grandpa, you can play this drum with your foot/ Roger said and then pressed the pedal with his foot. The drumstick swung forward. Thump! Thump! Thump! The pedal worked smoothly and the thumps filled the whole room. "Would you like to have a try?” Roger turned to Grandpa with his eyes full of expectation.Slowly, Grandpa reached out his foot and pushed the pedal as Roger did. Thump! Thump! Grandpa smiled and continued with greater enthusiasm. "Join in, Roger!n Grandpa shouted to Roger excitedly and his cheerful voice was even louder than the drum rolls. Roger grinned from ear to ear as he picked up his drumsticks. He rocked and rolled, and so did Grandpa. With the drums beating merrily, their joyful music shook the whole house like before, not only the whole house, but also the hearts of the grand father and the grandson.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了罗杰想和爷爷一起打鼓，但是爷爷手指关节疼,拿不起鼓槌， 不能打鼓，罗杰看见了以后想起来大卫有一个带踏板的鼓，于是叫爸爸开车送他去大卫家借 鼓。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“爷爷，一个惊喜!”当他们拿着一个大箱子回来时，罗杰喊道。”可知， 第一段可描写罗杰给爷爷示范怎么打带踏板的鼓。由第二段首句内容“爷爷慢慢地伸出脚，像罗杰一样踩踏板。”可知，第二段可描写爷爷和 罗杰一起打鼓。1 ,续写线索：打开示范爷爷打鼓罗杰加入.词汇激活行为类打开：open/unfold踩下：press/step on敲打：beat/strike震撼：shake/quake情绪类高兴：joy/delight欢快地：merrily/joyfully【点睛】高分句型 1 When Grandpa saw the drum with the pedal, his eyes were shining with excitement.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2With the drums beating merrily, their joyful music shook the whole house like before, not only the whole house, but also the hearts of the grand father and the grandson. （with 复合结构）4. （2022重庆一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。It was one of those days when nothing seemed to go right. I dragged myself out of the bed and all of the routines began early. I dropped my two older children at school with relief and unwillingly headed to the supermarket to buy groceries with my youngest. I wasn't feeling any sense of appreciation for my comfortable home or lovely family.I was getting mad with this early day, and my son, just four years old at that time, was being difficult. I raced around to pick the items with no regard to cost, while trying to control my naughty child whose behavior had now added to my complete displeasure. Yes, I was that mother, threatening, and roaring at a small child.We eventually made it to the checkout and stood in the queue waiting for our turn. After a short time, I noticed that someone had joined the line behind us. I turned and saw an old man. He wore a dirty overcoat. His shoes were worn out, and his trousers tapped around sockless ankles on this cold, wet day. In his hands he just carried a small box of long-life milk.I had too many groceries. I asked him if he'd like to go ahead of me. It wasn't an act of kindness on my part, also not my automatic reaction. Perhaps I just did out of a sense of guilt, or I just wanted him gone. After all, his presence made me uncomfortable. In the same way, I felt uncomfortable and avoided my eyes when passing a homeless person.He didn't respond to me as if I had said nothing to him. I looked at him and repeated my