市质检卷文本分析.ppt

市质检卷文本分析 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望QuEnshan,whousedtostudyinBeijingNo.2MiddleSchool,wenttostudyatthe122-year-oldHotchkissSchoolinConnecticutlastSeptember.Hedliketosharehishighsandlowswithhispeers(同龄人)inChinawhoareconsideringstudyingabroad.WhenIgotHotchkissofferlastMarch,Iwasoverjoyed.IknewthatIdidnthavetochoosebetweenscienceandliberalarts.Iwanttobegoodatboth,becauseIlovethebeautyofpoetryanddrama,IenjoyexploringthewhysandifsofhistoryandImattractedbythedepthandwidthofchemistryandbiology.ThiswasthemainreasonIchosetostudyintheUS.HotchkisssitsbetweentwolakesinthenorthwestConnecticut,withthenearesttownmilesaway.ThereisnomobilephonesignalonmostofthecampusandtheInternetisturnedoffatmidnight.MyAmericanpeersworkjustashardasChinesehighschoolstudents,buttheschooloffersmanyexcitingafter-classactivities:theFairfieldFarm,whichprovidesorganically-grownfoodfortheschooldininghall,isone.TheHotchkissfarmwasoncepartofalanddonatedbyKingGeorgeIIIofBritain.LikeinotherpartsofNewEngland,herethePuritans(清教徒)hadtodigpilesofrocksoutofthelandbeforeturningitintofieldsavailableforfarming.ThemostvaluablelessonsIlearnedfromworkingonthefarmwereaboutPuritansbeliefs,whichformedthefoundationoftheUnitedStates:respectforhardwork;encouragesweatinginsnow.Throughfarmwork,Ialsoharvestedthespiritofteamwork,understandingbiologicalandecologicalissues,andbroadly,thecountryanditspeople.AtHotchkiss,farmingislistedtogetherwithsportsasanafter-classchoice.If,likeme,youarenotanathleticperson,andyoudontwanttochoosesportssuchasfootball,golfortennis,farmworkislessdemandingandalotoffun,too.Afterall,theHotchkissphilosophy（哲学）is:beyourselfandfollowyourheart.A篇篇Brieflyintroducethetopicofthepassage:QuEnshanwantstosharehisexperiencewithotherChineseteenagers.简介本文主题：在美国求学的QuEnshan想与中国的同龄人分享他的经历和感悟。WhyhechosetostudyintheUS简介他选择去美国求学的主要原因GeneralinformationofHotchkissSchoolanditsafter-classactivities简介HotchkissSchool的概况及其课外活动。Aspecialafter-classactivity:farmingwork简介HotchkissSchool的一项特别的课外活动：农业课，并介绍自己在农业课上的收获。TheHotchkissphilosophyHotchkissSchool的理念LeaddetailsJ.K.RowlingprobablyisntgoingtowriteanymoreHarry Potterbooks.Thatdoesntmeantherewontbeanymore.ItjustmeanstheywontbewrittenbyJ.K.Rowling.InsteadtheyllbewrittenbypeoplelikeRachelineMaltese,afanofHarryPotter.SometimesshewritesstoriesaboutHarryandtheothercharactersfromthePotterverseandpoststhemonlineforfree.Malteseisawriteroffanfiction:storiesandnovelsthatmakeuseofthecharactersandsettingsfromotherpeoplesprofessionalcreativework.Thewritersdontdoitformoney.Theywriteitandputituponlinejustforthesatisfaction.Rightnowfanfictionisstilldarkmatterculturally:itslargelyinvisible（看不见的）tothemainstream,butatthesametime,itsunbelievablymassive.FanfictionappearedearlierthantheInternet,buttheWebhasmadeitmucheasiertotalkandbeheard.Theresfanfictionbasedonbooks,movies,TVshows,videogames,plays,musicals,rockbands,boardgamesandeventheBible.Inmostcases,thequantityoffanfictioninspiredbyagivenworkismuchlargerthantheworkitself;insomecases,thequalityishigher,too.Nobodymakesmoneyfromfanfiction,butwhetheranybodylosesmoneyonfanfictionisaseparatequestion.RowlinghasgivenHarry Potterherblessing.Otherwritersconsideritaviolation（侵犯）oftheircopyrights,andmore,oftheiremotionalclaimtotheirowncreations.Theyfeelasiftheircharactershadbeenkidnapped（绑架）bystrangers.Youcanseebothsidesoftheissue.Docharactersbelongtothepersonwhocreatedthem?Ortothefanswholovethemsodeeplythattheyspendmuchtimelaboringtoextendtheirlives,forfree?Thismayseemunimportantinthefirstplace,butitactuallyhashugeinfluenceonourcultureandchallengesjustabouteverythingwethoughtaboutartandcreativity:Isartaboutmakingupnewthingsorabouttransformingtherawmaterialthatsoutthere?Leadthetopic:J.K.RowlingprobablyisntgoingtowriteanymoreHarry Potterbooks,buttheywillcontinuetobewrittenbyotherpeopleanexampleoffanfiction.引出话题，以RachelineMaltese改写HarryPotter为例，介绍一种特殊的文学形式：fanfiction同人写作。Whypeoplewritefanfiction同人写作的目的Theargumentsfanfictionhasaroused.同人写作引起的争议：角色归属权以及艺术是全新的创造还是对既有事物的改编B篇篇LeadThesituationoffanfictionandthesourcesoftheirwriting同人写作的现状及其创作来源Theattitudesofthewritersoftheoriginalworks.原创者对同人写作的态度details广告（略）C篇篇GeneralElectricusesdetectionanddiagnostic（诊断）toolstoproactively（主动地）identifyfaultsinplaneenginesandrepairplanesefficiently.Thosetoolscanalsohelpfacilitymanagerstoseeenergy-relatedproblems.Thesmartbuildinganalyticsmarketispredictedtogrowfrom$5.5billionin2012tomorethan$18billionin2017,asmorebuildingsbothstartusinganalyticsandmovetoadvancedtechnologies.Thestartingpointformostwillbereportingdashboards（仪表盘）,allowingfacilitymanagerstoviewbuildingdata.Thenextadd-onisalarmingcapabilities,includingthosefaultdetectionanddiagnosticssystemsGEuses.Lastlyaretheproactiveanalytics,whichbringindatafrominsideabuildingsuchasthenumberofroomsthatarelivedin,alongwithoutsidedatasuchasweatherconditions,toadvisewhatmanagersshoulddooreventakeactionsontheirown.Thesetoolsvaryintheirabilities.Forexample,ifapieceofequipmentiscallingforbothheatingandcoolingsimultaneously,afaultislikelyinvolved,saidScottHerman,productdevelopmentdirectorforJohnsonControls.UsingapplicationswithinasystemsuchasJohnsonControlsPanoptix,afacilitymanagercouldcreatearulethatidentifiesanyheatingandcoolingatthesametimeasafaultandtakeactionwhenthatfaultcomesup.Beyondsimplerules,Hermansaidthatanalyticscangosofarastolearnhowapieceofequipmentorbuildingbehaves,andidentifyfaultsorproblems.Inthefirst120daysofusingaJohnsonControlsapplication,WesternKentuckyUniversityidentifiedanumberoffaultsthat,oncehandled,allowedittocreatemorecomfortablelearningenvironmentsandrecoveritsinvestmentinlessthansixmonths,Hermansaid.Inaddition,analyticscanmodelpossibilities.Forexample,ifafacilitymanagerwantedtopre-coolbuildings,hecouldmodelouthowmuchenergyormoneywouldbesavedbycoolingthebuildingearlyintheday,thenturningoffcoolersduringpeak（高峰）energyloadtimes.Alongwithmodelingenergyuse,analyticscouldalsopredicthowthosechangeswouldaffecttenants（房客）comfortlevels.GEsdetectionanddiagnostictoolscanalsohelpfacilitymanagerstoseeenergy-relatedproblems.引入话题：通用检测和诊断飞机故障的工具也可用于帮助楼宇管理人员解决能源问题。Marketpotentialofthesmartbuildinganalytics智能楼宇分析系统的市场前景Introducethefunctionofthesmartbuildinganalyticsbytellingthereadershowtheanalyticsdealwiththefaultintheheatingandcoolingsystem.以智能楼宇系统处理空调系统故障为例说明该系智能应用的功能。Asuccessfulexampleofusingtheanalytics智能系统应用成功的一个例子。Analyticscanmodelpossibilities.该智能系统能自动模拟各种可能性，帮助楼宇管理人员制定更合理节能的用电计划，同时又不减少住户的舒适度。DintroductionelaborationThethreetoolsofthesmartbuildinganalytics组成智能楼宇分析系统的三种工具WhenDannyBowmanwasatschool,hespent10hoursadaytakingmorethan200selfies（自拍）tryingtofindtheperfectimage.Buthisaddiction,whichbeganattheageof15,causedhimtodropoutofschoolandlosealmost12.7kginweight.Hewouldtake10photosofhimselfbeforehewashedandwouldslipoutofclassthreetimeseveryhour.At16,hedroppedoutofschoolsohecouldfocusonhisaddiction,andhisdietbegantogetworse.HedidnotleavehishouseinNewcastleforsixmonths,andwhenhefailedtotaketheperfectshot,hetriedtokillhimselfbytakingdrugs.Hismother,Penny,managedtosavehim,buthewasforcedtoseekhelpafterhisaddictionhadgraduallybecomeoutofcontrol.The19-year-old,believedtobeBritainsfirstselfieaddict,hasnowhadtherapy（疗法）totreathistechnologyaddiction,andBodydysmorphicdisorderanoveranxietyaboutpersonalappearance.Hehasnottakenapictureofhimselfinsevenmonths,andhasrealisedthatachievingperfectionisimpossible.HetoldtheSunday Mirror:“IwasconstantlyinsearchoftakingtheperfectselfieandwhenIrealisedIcouldntIwantedtodie.Ilostmyfriends,myeducation,myhealthandalmostmylife.”“TheonlythingIcaredaboutwashavingmyphonewithmesoIcouldsatisfytheurgetocaptureapictureofmyselfatanytimeoftheday.”Hewouldlookatphotosofhis“idol”（偶像）LeonardoDiCaprioandwouldthenreplicatehisposes（姿势）.Dannysdreamwastobecomeamalemodel.Theselfiecrazehasgrowninpastfiveyears,withstars,politiciansandevenPope（教皇）Francispostinggettinginvolvedinthesensation.ButonepsychologistataclinicwhereDannywastreatedsaidtheaddictionwithtakingselfieshasnowbecomeamentalillness.Nowdeterminedtoraiseawarenessoftheanxietydisorder,DannyisworkingwithFixersanationalcharityhelpingyoungpeople“tofixtheissuesthatmattertothem”.Hesaidtheirhelphaskepthimaliveandcalledonotherstoseekhelpbeforetheyendupinhospital.IntroduceDannyBowman,ateenagerdropoutwhowasaddictedtotakingselfiesandalmostkilledhimself.介绍一个酷爱自拍并为此退学、差点自杀的青少年。ThetreatmentDannyreceivedandhisselfnarrationofhissymptom.Danny接受过的治疗和效果，以及他对自己症状的描述。E篇篇introductionbodyDannyisnotaloneintakingselfies.自拍已成潮流，许多名人也爱自拍。HappyendingDannyisworkingwithanationalcharityhelpingyoungpeople.Danny治愈后与慈善组织合作，帮助其他青少年克服各种心理障碍。