开放作文示范课.ppt
开放作文示范课 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望2009北京北京2012北京北京22011北京北京a simple picturethe implied meaning!In an English class,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain how you understand it.11北京高考3 As is vividly shown in the picture,the man is sparing no effort to reach for fruits on the tree across the river with a long net,neglecting a bridge nearby.Hard as he is trying,all his effort seems in vain.According to my understanding,what the picture intends to mirror to us is the significance of finding the best possible method.What getting the fruit is to the man is exactly what achieving our goals is to us.Rather than just stepping forward without consideration,it is acquiring a clear understanding of the present situation first that is top on the agenda.Only if all the ways leading to our destination are clearly realized can we further choose the best one and reach for our dream with least meaningless effort.Whenever faced with a dilemma,blindly fighting will no doubt lead to a waste of energy and wisdom,while choosing the best method before acting can ensure a better result.There is no denying that trying hard also works,however,why not take a turn and follow an easier way to avoid unnecessary pains?Therefore,always think twice and choose the best method before set out for a brighter future.上下文逻辑清楚；上下文逻辑清楚；语言表达流畅语言表达流畅（一类文）一类文）描图立意解图议图圆图优秀习作优秀习作赏析赏析高分作文高分作文1：4An open-ended composition结构 Describe a picture描图 Express your opinion立意Interpret its implied meaning解图Point out its implications in our life议图Give your own comment圆图Emphasis your opinion5As can be seen from the picture,a man is using a long stick As can be seen from the picture,a man is using a long stick with a basket on its end to pick the apple across the river so with a basket on its end to pick the apple across the river so that he can avoid himself from walking a long way through the that he can avoid himself from walking a long way through the woodwooden bridge to get to the apple tree,which is sure to help him bridge to get to the apple tree,which is sure to help him to to save a lot of timesave a lot of time.In my opinion,the picture sharply points out that when we In my opinion,the picture sharply points out that when we are performing certain tasks,we ought to be wise to find the best are performing certain tasks,we ought to be wise to find the best approach.approach.Nowadays,many people tend to pursue their goals without Nowadays,many people tend to pursue their goals without thinking over if there is a better way to choose.thinking over if there is a better way to choose.They may either follow others or reject to use their They may either follow others or reject to use their creativity to come up with better choices for they hold the firm creativity to come up with better choices for they hold the firm belief that it will be a waste of time,while the truth is that belief that it will be a waste of time,while the truth is that they are to get half result with twice the efforts.On the they are to get half result with twice the efforts.On the contrary,therecontrary,there are also quite a lot of people working like the man also quite a lot of people working like the man in the picture.They try their best to find a better way and thus in the picture.They try their best to find a better way and thus they will complete their tasks more easily than others,which,in they will complete their tasks more easily than others,which,in turn,will undoubtedly add to their self-confidence.And,with turn,will undoubtedly add to their self-confidence.And,with their wise choice,the success they expect will be just around the their wise choice,the success they expect will be just around the corner.corner.To sum up,to achieve ones goal,one must be aware of the To sum up,to achieve ones goal,one must be aware of the significance of keeping an eye on finding a better way to significance of keeping an eye on finding a better way to accomplish things.Thataccomplish things.Thats how we stand out from other competitors s how we stand out from other competitors and thatand thats how we not only promote ourselves but also contribute s how we not only promote ourselves but also contribute to our society better.(260to our society better.(260字字 14 14分分)描图立意解图议图圆图优秀习作优秀习作赏析赏析高分作文高分作文2：6 考试院范文考试院范文 In the picture,there stands a tree full of fruits on one side of the stream.Across the stream,a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole.Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.The message conveyed in the picture is clear.In pursuing a dream,we might focus on only one way of making it come true that there may be alternatives.As indicated in the picture,if the man is willing to look for other possibilities,he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal.All he has to do is turn around,across the bridge and walk to the tree.(134词)7考试院范文考试院范文 ：仙人掌cactus In the picture,we can see two cactuses _.The big cactus is _,trying to keep the small cactus from the _ sun.But it seems his efforts are _because the small cactus is _.Describe a picture描图 1/38仙人掌cactus In the picture,we can see two cactuses in a desert.The big cactus is holding an umbrella,trying to keep the small cactus from the burning sun.But it seems his efforts are in vain because the small cactus is dying/not growing well.Describe a picture描图 1/392012北京卷 As we can see from the picture,the _ pencil,looking _,is _the black pencil by _ Youre nearing the end!The _ pencil,on the other hand,remains _.The white pencils words let him fall into deep thoughts.102012北京卷 As we can see from the picture,the white pencil,looking proud and delighted,is laughing at the black pencil by saying Youre nearing the end!The black pencil,on the other hand,remains calm.The white pencils words let him fall into deep thoughts.11长颈鹿giraffe In the picture,we can see a giraffe holding his head high towards a tall tree,trying to eat the leaves on it.Obviously,she is challenging herself,although she can eat the leaves from the small trees easily.12p一般现在时、现在进行时一般现在时、现在进行时the white pencil is laughing at the black pencil,The big cactus is holding an umbrella,she is challenging herself,The black pencil,on the other hand,remains calm.p内容具体、形象、生内容具体、形象、生动动the burning sun;the white pencil;the black pencil the white pencil,looking proud and delighted,we can see a giraffe holding his head highp万能句式万能句式As we can see from the pictureFrom the picture we can see that Describe a picture描图 1/31314Exercise:In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.描图1.As is shown in the picture,there are two buildings,and there is a tree between them.The tree is tall but bent.And there is a big sun in the sky.15描图2.In the picture,between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree.Unlike most trees,this one bends in the middle,struggling all the way up to get more sunshine.p词汇词汇vocabulary描图3.As is shown in the picture,there is a tree with a winding trunk standing in the surrounding of two irregular buildings.As the two buildings block the way of free growing for the tree,it can only twist its body and try its best to meet the sun.Then it succeeds!The unfortunate tree gets rid of the block of the two buildings and is growing in the sun happily and healthily.16An open-ended composition结构 Describe a picture描图 Express your opinion立意Interpret its implied meaning解图Point out its implications in our life议图Give your own comment圆图Emphasis your opinion17请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your English class,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.a tall treegoals too high for somebody,a new height/challenge a short/small/dwarf tree appropriate target/goals that can be achieved/reached a giraffe a person who is trying to achieve its goal/reach a target 3.Explain how you understand it 2/3 18u the short tree-给自己制定给自己制定有望达到的有望达到的目标目标1.People should set proper goals.2.The picture tries to tell us the importance of appropriate goal-setting.3.We shouldnt set goals that are too high for us.4.We should set a suitable goal for ourselves,neither too high nor too low.5.We should do things within our ability and not pursue something too unrealistic.19uthe tall tree-给自己制定给自己制定高远的高远的目标目标6.We always need to develop ourselves to a higher level instead of being satisfied with the present situation.7.We should pursue our breakthrough like the giraffe.不可接受立意不可接受立意protect the environmentplant more treesDont live alone;the lonely giraffe20 In my opinion,the picture conveys a message that we always need to develop ourselves to a higher level instead of being satisfied with the present situation.The giraffe is tall enough to reach leaves from the lower trees,but she still works hard trying to get the upper leaves.Thats because she knows the small trees will sooner or later grow into big trees.Things are the same in our real life.The situation is always changing and there is no reason for us to be satisfied with what we have now.Instead,we must develop ourselves to a higher level to be well prepared for the unpredictable future.Without the seemingly“useless”attempts,the giraffe may not survive in nature.As for human beings,the endless development means a way to a better life.So lets develop ourselves to a higher level to make a wonderful life.211.Express your opinion立意2.Interpret its implied meaning解图 Point out its implications in our life议图the sun,the desert hardshipthe big cactus parents,teachers.the umbrella love,care,protection.the small cactus child.bending weak,dyingexactly what the cactus needs and is a vital factor to its growth 22可接受的立意：可接受的立意：the small cactus经历风雨才能健康成长经历风雨才能健康成长one can not grow up without experiencing hardshipsit is important for us to obey the natural rules the big cactus父母不应给孩子过多的爱父母不应给孩子过多的爱parents shouldnt give their children too much love/care/protection parents may spoil/kill their children with kindnessParentsendless protection may lead their children to weakness 不不可接受的立意：可接受的立意：protect the environment/the cactussave water/plant more trees23 I think the picture is trying to tell us that one can not grow up without experiencing hardships.The big cactus in the picture is just like some parents in life.They try to make“cool shade”for their kids and keep them away from all hardships.But as we can conclude from the picture,children may not be able to grow when all hardships in life has disappeared.Just as the sunlight is a necessity to cactuses,pains and difficulties can not be avoided for children in life.They may seem dangerous at times,but if we learn from it and adapt ourselves to it,we can eventually grow up.After all,parents cannot protect their kids forever.Only when children have learnt to face hardships on their own can they live a true life.So sometimes parents should learn to let it go,and give the“small cactus”a chance to truly face the“sun”.241.Express your opinion立意2.Interpret its implied meaning解图 Point out its implications in our life议图万能句式万能句式-I think the picture is trying to tell us that-In my opinion,the picture conveys a message that-The vivid picture is trying to convey to us a message that;-What the picture attempts to tell us is that251.Express your opinion立意2.Interpret its implied meaning解图 Point out its implications in our life议图3.Explain how you understand it 2/3 HomeworkIn an English class,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain how you understand it.26Possible versionAs we can see in the picture,a boy is climbing a high mountain,sweating all over and having a tired look.In spite of many large rocks blocking his way,the exhausted boy is still struggling on the steep mountainside,because he knows that there is a rainbow behind the mountain.What the picture conveys is that although the way to success seems long and difficult,there is still hope like the rainbow in our hearts.In everyday life,all of us are facing many difficulties and experiencing great hardships just like the boy.However,if we are determined to get to“the top”,well see the“rainbow”at last.Therefore,as long as we are confident and never give up,we are sure to achieve success.（128words）27
