中考英语作文评分标准说课材料.ppt

Junior English第一页，共13页。中考英语中考英语(yn y)(yn y)作文评作文评分标准分标准一、评分原则一、评分原则1 1、评分时，现根据文章内容要点、应用词汇、评分时，现根据文章内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构的准确性及上下文的连贯性初步确定语法结构的准确性及上下文的连贯性初步确定其档次，然后根据拼写、书写和词数等情况调其档次，然后根据拼写、书写和词数等情况调整档次，最后整档次，最后(zuhu)(zuhu)给分。给分。2 2、书写较差导致难以阅读理解文字内容，将分、书写较差导致难以阅读理解文字内容，将分数降低一个档次。数降低一个档次。3 3、词数不够的，从总分中扣掉、词数不够的，从总分中扣掉1 1或或2 2分。分。第二页，共13页。第五档第五档 9-10 9-10分分 能写出全部要点，行文连贯，能写出全部要点，行文连贯，语言基本语言基本(jbn)(jbn)无误，完全达到写作要求。无误，完全达到写作要求。第四档第四档 7-8 7-8分分 能写出全部要点，行文基本能写出全部要点，行文基本(jbn)(jbn)连贯，语言有少量错误，基本连贯，语言有少量错误，基本(jbn)(jbn)达到写作要求。达到写作要求。第三档第三档 5-6 5-6分分 能写出大部分要点，语言虽有较能写出大部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。多错误，尚能达意。第二档第二档 3-4 3-4分分 能写出基本能写出基本(jbn)(jbn)要点，语言错要点，语言错误多，未达到写作要求。误多，未达到写作要求。第一档第一档 0-2 0-2分分 只写一、二个句子，语言错误多。只写一、二个句子，语言错误多。第三页，共13页。中考英语中考英语(yn y)(yn y)满分作文满分作文评分标准评分标准1、覆盖所有内容要点、覆盖所有内容要点2、准确使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构、准确使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构3、适当运用语句间的连接成分，表达清楚，结构紧、适当运用语句间的连接成分，表达清楚，结构紧凑，较好地达到交际的目的。凑，较好地达到交际的目的。4、行文连贯，语言基本、行文连贯，语言基本(jbn)无误，完全达到了无误，完全达到了写作要求。写作要求。5、格式正确，书写规范。、格式正确，书写规范。第四页，共13页。中考英语中考英语(yn y)(yn y)作文高分的作文高分的五个技巧五个技巧1、审题目：审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等2、圈要点：把情境中给出的要点逐条(zh tio)圈上3、列提纲：安排好层次段落、铺设好过渡、处理好开头和结尾。4、定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5、写全文：参照提纲，紧扣主题句。注意：引导段要引起读者的注意和兴趣。第五页，共13页。Types of Writing1.Narration 记叙文记叙文(six basic elemenaries)2.Description 描写描写 (person,place,object,scene)3.Exposition 说明文说明文(how to make.)4.Argumentation 议论文议论文(argue with sb about sth-express ones opinion)5.Practical Writing 应用文应用文(poster,note,message,letter,e-mail.)6.Abstract and Summary Writhing 摘要摘要(zhiyo)/概要概要7.Expressing Attitudes and Feelings 表达态度表达态度/情感情感8.Diagram Writing 图表图表第六页，共13页。如何理解中考满分作文如何理解中考满分作文(zu wn)(zu wn)评评价标准？价标准？一、应用较多的高级词汇：“词汇”-高级词汇、同义词、短语、习惯用语等合理运用。1、“高级词汇”：大纲中没有(mi yu)列入或没有(mi yu)识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇。如：energetic,intelligence等。2、同义词的使用：在保持文章的简洁和用词的准确的前提下 如：I like playing football.My sister enjoy listening to music.My father is fond of watching TV and my mother prefers chatting.第七页，共13页。3、适当利用短语代替单词(dnc)：如：Suddenly I had a good idea.-came up with二、应用较复杂的语法结构：固定句式（感叹句、强调句、倒装句等）、定从、状从、现在分词短语、动词不定式等。如：As a student,we 三、上下文的连贯性：有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。（连接词-并列连词、从属连词和连接性副词、非谓语动词短语等）如：and,first of all,to be honest,In a word.第八页，共13页。满分作文满分作文(zu wn)(zu wn)案例分析案例分析题目：假如你是班长，学期结束时，老师要你给学生(xu sheng)作简短的评价。你班同学杨涛这个学期变化很大，请你根据提示用英语写一篇评语。过去：学习不努力，经常与同学争吵，垃圾被他撒得满地，课桌总是一团糟，经常打电脑游戏。现在：自从老师找他谈话后，有了很大变化，与同学相处融洽，经常帮同学、，结果父母和老师对他很满意。希望：在考试中取得好成绩。第九页，共13页。Sample Writing Yang Tao has improsved a lot this term.But in the past,he didnt study hard and used to quarrel with his classmates.Besides,he often threw rubbish everywhere,and his desk was always in a mess.Whats worse,he often killed time in playing computer games.Now he has changed greatly since his teacher had a talk with him.He tries to get along well with his classmates and often helps others clean the classroom,mend desks and chairs,tidy their school things,when they are in trouble.As a result,his parents and teachers are satisfied with him.As far as I know,he hopes to get good grades in exams.第十页，共13页。点点 评评1、要点完整2、作者熟练地运用了词汇：in the past,quarrel with sb,in a mess,get along with sb,tidy,in trouble.3、语言结构方面：used to do sth,kill time in doing sth,复合句：Now he has changed greatly since his teacher had a talk with him.4、句子的连贯性方面：Besides,Whats worse,As a result,As far as I know.5、词数方面：90多词6、篇章(pinzhng)的段落结构合理、清晰。7、拼写、标点无错误，卷面整洁。第十一页，共13页。Express your opinion1.Useful words&phrases:believe,think,agree with sb,agree to do sth,because,in my opinion,in my point of view,in my eyes,as I see it,as all we know,on the one hand,on the other hand.to my mind,as far as I know.2.Useful sentence structures&patterns:I think/believe that.I agree/disagree that.I think it is fair/unfair for children to.Its believed/said/reported that.For example=For instance,they should/shouldnt.I have several reasons.First/First of all,next,then,finally;First,secondly,thirdly,at last;Whats more?In addition,Frankly speaking,Honestly speaking.第十二页，共13页。第十三页，共13页。