读后续写练习写作讲义-高三英语二轮复习.docx

读后续写练习写作讲义阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（一）Jimmy Gilleece owns a bar in Wrightsville Beach, North Carolina. He is a person who knew how to lend a hand, but what people around him did not know was that this man was also capable of going the extra mile just to help someone in need.It was a regular day at his bar, which turned out to be a day that would change his life forever. He found out that one of his customers had lost her wallet at the bar, and inside it was a precious thing: the lady's wedding ring. Jimmy instantly recognized the womans panic. She wanted to get her wedding ring back. She was crazy, really upset about it. And so, the bar owner made sure to provide whatever help he could to find the woman's ring. He even made it his mission to find the woman's wed ding ring.Then Jimmy's mission began. In order to find out what exactly happened, Jimmy started a thorough scan of the security cameras in his establishment. He watched three hours worth of security footage from six cameras, scanning every detail and closely analyzing what happened that led to the loss of the woman's wallet.In one of the recorded clips (片段), Jimmy finally saw that the woman lost her wallet on a bench outside the bar, with a suspicious man walking nearby. A few moments later, the man approached the bench and took the woman's wallet.So searching for the thief was Jimmys next move It was not enough for Jimmy to find out what happened to the lost wallet. Now that he had an image of the thief, the bar owner made it his next mission to search for the guy and get the wallet back from him.Jimmy figured out who the guy was and made him admit what he did to the wallet. The thief admitted that he took the cash and dropped the wallet into an ocean channel. At this point, most people would probably stop and regretfully tell the lady that the wallet couldn't be found anymore. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But Jimmy was not like most people. And indeed, Jimmy also extended help not only to the woman but also to the thief who took the wallet.  参考范文But Jimmy was not like most people.Unbelievable as it may seem, Jimmy went to greater lengths and hired divers to search the waters thoroughly until they found the lost wallet. He was indeed serious about finding the woman's wallet and making good on his mission to find the ring. Inside it was the wedding ring that she badly wanted to recover. The woman thanked Jimmy greatly. But, the man somehow felt that he still had more to do.   And indeed, Jimmy also extended help not only to the woman but also to the thief who took the wallet. The person who took the wallet was a 17-year-old teenager. The young man was separated from his mother and was living in the woods. He was desperate to survive as a homeless person when he found the wallet that eventually led him to Jimmy, Jimmy didnt hand him over to the police. Instead, he invited the teen to move in with his family and made him part of his family. The teen had nothing but gratitude for the kind man, which inspired him to do better in life. （二）Cold drew many to South Africa and it was gold hut has just restored my faith in this chaotic nation.As a British living in Cape Town, I recently received the call that my father had passed away. After the funeral in England, my mother gave me a gold ring, worn for decades by Dad and before him, by his own father. Ive never really been into jewelry, yet when I sipped the ring on my finger it felt somehow right. Consoled (抚慰) in my grief by Dads beloved ring, I flew home to South Africa.All went well until a windy Saturday when I walked on our local beach. As so often in the Cape, it was fiercely windy. When I got home and lit the fire, I looked at my left hand. The ring wasnt there. Awful emotions washed over meshock, horror, remorse, anger, powerlessness, guilta potential life sentence of guilt. Hoping that it had not been dropped on the beach, I looked everywhere else. Maybe the car? I searched every corner of it but fruitless. Maybe the house? Nothing.It must have been the beach, an area stretching 200 metres from the car parkthe ring, a very small needle in an ocean.I was out at first light the next day but with no luck, discouraged. My only hope was thisthe wind had been so strong that the ring could have been buried. It might just be there, somewhere.I swore to recover it no matter how much I would pay, so I contacted local metal detector users. Two came to help, one even lending me his gear (设备). “Take as long as you need,” he said. Days of searching passed quickly, we found an old mobile phone, a 50 cent coin and a lot of bottle tops.With my hopes filing, a third rejectionist (探测者), Allan, called to help me. Paragraph 1:Three days later, Alan, with his acute gear, arrived. Paragraph2:And there was a greater miracle.  参考范文Three days later, Alan, with his acute gear, arrived. Alan had blue eyes and brown hair and was very handsome. I was glad to see him coming. I told him the details of the matter and said I really couldn't live without the ring. He promised that he would do his best to help me find the ring. The next day, we began to act. His gear was so sensitive that even small metal objects could be detected. We explored the area where I might have lost the ring inch by inch, having the faith that we could find it. Four days later, we found my ring under a plastic bottle cap. The moment I saw the ring, I was very excited.And there was a greater miracle. Before we found my ring, we found a diamond ring engraved with "Debbie". It was a very expensive ring. I knew it was important for Debbie. I took pictures of it and posted a post on Facebook. Soon after, I received an email from Debbie, which said that the ring was hers and was given to her by her husband when they got married ten years ago. Debbie thanked me for helping her find the ring. She never expected to find her own ring after ten years. What luck! When she got it back, she cried excitedly. （三）It was July 2014. We were getting ready to move in a new house when my husband became very ill. He had to spend nine weeks in hospital, leaving me to do everything in our new home. By night fall, I was worn-out.One such evening as I reached for some cream for my hands, I noticed my bluebird diamond wedding ring- which I had worn for almost half a century- was missing! My finger was naked!I was extremely shocked and sad. I looked in every drawer and in the car. No luck. My family told me to go back along the same route. That would be a task, for that day I had gone shopping, got my car fixed, and gone for an eye exam.I sat, mind wandering back in time when I had first met my husband. I was five and one day, my dad took me to the town. On the way, we came upon a large herd of cattle. I waved to the youngest rider, who seemed to be nine, but he just turned away.Next my memory travelled to my high school. The most exciting thing then was to dress up and walk the streets of our town with my classmates. It was on such a day that a black car went by and a passenger yelled, “Girl, want a ride with us” I could hardly believe it: among the people in the car was the boy who hadn't responded to my wave 13 years before! But he wasn't ignoring me now.Our love affair began. He offered the ring a few months later. The diamond was small, but my future husband chose it for its perfection and shine.My daydream passed. My daughter came and suggested I shop for a new ring. “Where do you want to go?” She asked. “Pawn shop(当铺),” I said. I told her there was one close by. Paragraph 1At the shop, we found five jewelry counters to look through. Paragraph 2The shop assistant got a magnifying glass(放大镜) out and said, “Its a Bluebird.”  参考范文1At the shop, we found five jewelry counters to look though. This would be an exercise in patience. We picked out three rings from the first counter. One was too big, another too small, and the third too expensive. So we continued to the next counters, and this time I chose two more rings. I picked up the first. As I slipped it on my finger, I shouted, “Heres my lost ring! My bluebird diamond! See how it just fits.” Everyone in the shop turned to the young man helping us.The shop assistant got a magnifying glass out and said, “Its a bluebird.” Im still in shock that I found my ring! I wanted to know how my ring had ended up there. How did I know to go to that pawn shop? Was it intuition? The work of angels? Just coincidence? Im not sure Ill ever know. But I did learn that sometimes things are gone for a while before they reappear to be claimed. Just like my husband. And just like my ring. 参考范文2Paragraph 1：At the shop，we found five jewelry counters to look through. There are various of shiny necklaces，rings and bracelets. We looked at each counter carefully to select/pick a new ring as similar as the old one. However，not finding a satisfying ring，so disappointed was I that I was just about close to tears. Of a sudden，my daughter spotted a small shiny diamond ring which looked similar to my missing ring. We were so thrilled and excited, asking whether there was a bluebird on it.Paragraph 2：The shop assistant got a magnifying glass out and said, “Its a bluebird.” Then she showed it to us. I picked up the magnifying glass to observe it carefully and attentively. When I found that the ring actually was similar as that one I lost it except no name carved on it, a surge of excitement running through me. Hardly did tears blur my vision when I slipped it on my finger. Soon after, my husband recovered and we began new life in our new house. It was the bluebird diamond ring that made us realize we love each other deeply and profoundly and life was full of hope and brightness.学科网（北京）股份有限公司